VN Ren'Py Completed Rebirth [Ep.1-5 All in One] [LikesBlondes]

[DuckDairyDip]

Never mind that if you want the selling point to be the writing, the writing had best *not* be pigeon English. Which it is. Never mind the spelling errors, which are ever present, and never corrected.

I finished this for the sake of finishing, that is all.

This is the part that gets me. A lot of good writing marred by spelling and grammar errors. Many of which could easily be fixed by a proofread and just as many have been reported by dedicated fans in the past even though not all fixes have been implemented. Just a poor look.

 

[imzahai]

This is the part that gets me. A lot of good writing marred by spelling and grammar errors. Many of which could easily be fixed by a proofread and just as many have been reported by dedicated fans in the past even though not all fixes have been implemented. Just a poor look.

he had a proofreader who was a regular on here, and suffered greatly from Covid, then disappeared entirely; unless someone knows what happened to him?

 

[FookU2]

Never mind that if you want the selling point to be the writing, the writing had best *not* be pigeon English. Which it is. Never mind the spelling errors, which are ever present, and never corrected.

I finished this for the sake of finishing, that is all.

Help me out here. I've never heard the term "pigeon English." English is my first language. Does it mean "broken English" or "basic elementary school English?" lol

 

[FookU2]

I guess I didn't see where it said old saves are not compatible with the "all in one" release. lmao
mmkay

 

[WuzzyFuzzy]

Help me out here. I've never heard the term "pigeon English." English is my first language. Does it mean "broken English" or "basic elementary school English?" lol

It's actually "pidgin English". Pidgin is a term for creating a language within a language. Patois (Jamaica) is something of an example of a pidgin language. It bridges English, French and African dialects.

 

[MiltonPowers]

Help me out here. I've never heard the term "pigeon English." English is my first language. Does it mean "broken English" or "basic elementary school English?" lol

Pigeon English is like a variation of English taken on by locals.

 

[Dessolos]

o snap this one is done. Gonna have to give it a play sooner than later before I forget about it as I liked the dev's last game

 

[TigerWolfe]

Help me out here. I've never heard the term "pigeon English." English is my first language. Does it mean "broken English" or "basic elementary school English?" lol

Maybe before comparing people's languages to "broken" or "basic elementary school" English, you should be able to use your own well enough to recognize a high school level word within that language.

Edumacate yourself some.

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[Pgsurprise]

Maybe before comparing people's languages to "broken" or "basic elementary school" English, you should be able to use your own well enough to recognize a high school level word within that language.

Edumacate yourself some.

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Hahaha. At first I thought you were defining pidgen languages. ;P. .. Damn emoji fail.

 

[TigerWolfe]

Hahaha. At first I thought you were defining pidgen languages. ;P. .. Damn emoji fail.

Haha, nah my linguist brain was "triggered". Couldn't let it ride.

 

[drifter139]

game started off with a lot of potential but then it just went downhill after that. dialogue doesn't match who should be speaking, renders jump randomly to different people, grammar is awful and almost unreadable at times, and MC acts like a big shot when in reality, any of the older vamps could rip him apart and be done with it. dev, you royally fucked this game up

 

[NukaCola]

Why the all in one is only 3.1GB? am I missing something?

 

[Pgsurprise]

Haha, nah my linguist brain was "triggered". Couldn't let it ride.

Ha. When I misread it you triggered my "well actually" brain.

 

[TigerWolfe]

Ha. When I misread it you triggered my "well actually" brain.

I suffer from that as well, but do a better job of keeping it reeled in.

 

[alltreck]

It states "Completed" but it doesn't feel that way....the ending concludes nothing.

 

[Zoey Raven]

Any plans on making a mod for the all-in-one version?

And do the whole game from scratch...? No. The other dude can do that if he wants, but I've got my own game and I can't take a week to do that. Sorry.

 

[Carefree247]

DrakoGhoul I await your thought before I touch this again.
Arigon it's over mate, you can rest knowing you never got your wish of dominating Zephyr, and in turn we never got to see the full potential of this game could have been. I do wonder what ever happened to him.

 

[botc76]

Well, if this was indeed the end, then I guess I can see it working. It's like we have had the story of how the MC became a vampire, and it ends with a new status quo.
Seems like the first novel in a series.

 

[Tinuss]

And do the whole game from scratch...? No. The other dude can do that if he wants, but I've got my own game and I can't take a week to do that. Sorry.

cant blame you. Dont think the other one is doing it either. Oh well ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

 

[chaosbox24]

I had wrote a review not too long ago that I thought that the dev was getting burned out because the writing tanked so hard and none of the choices seemed to do anything anymore, and it seems that I was right. This is very disappointing to say the least. This means that all of those choices in the first 3 chapters really do mean nothing at all, since it turns into a KN towards the end and now it seems to be finished. Sad to see the game end with a whimper and not a bang.