- Jun 8, 2021
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Never mind that if you want the selling point to be the writing, the writing had best *not* be pigeon English. Which it is. Never mind the spelling errors, which are ever present, and never corrected.
I finished this for the sake of finishing, that is all.
Seems to be common with many of good stories here. I'm probably still going to play ch 5, though
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- Feb 21, 2018
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This is the part that gets me. A lot of good writing marred by spelling and grammar errors. Many of which could easily be fixed by a proofread and just as many have been reported by dedicated fans in the past even though not all fixes have been implemented. Just a poor look.
- Apr 19, 2019
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he had a proofreader who was a regular on here, and suffered greatly from Covid, then disappeared entirely; unless someone knows what happened to him?
- Jan 23, 2018
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Help me out here. I've never heard the term "pigeon English." English is my first language. Does it mean "broken English" or "basic elementary school English?" lol
- Jan 23, 2020
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It's actually "pidgin English". Pidgin is a term for creating a language within a language. Patois (Jamaica) is something of an example of a pidgin language. It bridges English, French and African dialects.
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Pigeon English is like a variation of English taken on by locals.
- Jul 25, 2017
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o snap this one is done. Gonna have to give it a play sooner than later before I forget about it as I liked the dev's last game
- Oct 19, 2022
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Maybe before comparing people's languages to "broken" or "basic elementary school" English, you should be able to use your own well enough to recognize a high school level word within that language.
Edumacate yourself some.
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Hahaha. At first I thought you were defining pidgen languages. ;P. .. Damn emoji fail.
- Oct 19, 2022
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Haha, nah my linguist brain was "triggered". Couldn't let it ride.
game started off with a lot of potential but then it just went downhill after that. dialogue doesn't match who should be speaking, renders jump randomly to different people, grammar is awful and almost unreadable at times, and MC acts like a big shot when in reality, any of the older vamps could rip him apart and be done with it. dev, you royally fucked this game up
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- Aug 31, 2019
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And do the whole game from scratch...? No. The other dude can do that if he wants, but I've got my own game and I can't take a week to do that. Sorry.
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DrakoGhoul I await your thought before I touch this again.
Arigon it's over mate, you can rest knowing you never got your wish of dominating Zephyr, and in turn we never got to see the full potential of this game could have been. I do wonder what ever happened to him.
Arigon it's over mate, you can rest knowing you never got your wish of dominating Zephyr, and in turn we never got to see the full potential of this game could have been. I do wonder what ever happened to him.