Ren'Py Abandoned Reincarnotica [v0.05] [Polyrotix]

[User_51567]

Yeah, the prologue...
I understand that there are people who are actually enjoying it.
I wasn't.
I think a prologue should be short, crisp and arouse the player's curiosity.
It had the opposite effect on me.
Giving people the option to skip the intro completely is nothing but a band-aid, because if I don't like an intro I usually won't continue playing the game - Reincarnotica is a rare exception to that rule.
It's a damn shame, because I'm sure a lot of people were driven off by it.

True, it always will be a case of personal preference.

And the length of a prologue should depend on what kind of game you are making.
A normal H content game should indeed have a short crisp prologue to get the players invested.

But a Adult game that's more focused on a story based on feelings should have a long prologue, because if you try to create a engaging story there are so many factors to introduce to a player... There you should take the time to explore the events that lead up to the point of the actual start of the game.. And a good story doesn't rush those things.

As far as the prologue from this game.
The idea is very good, and i love what he/she tried to accomplish.
But for me it seems that the most conversations are just a couple sentences to long.
Trick is to end a conversation at a high point, still have the players attention but he is still thinking about it in his head and wondering for more...
And in this game at most conversations during the end i was thinking "yeah...i know already.... Or... Can you please get to the point already".. And that's might be good writing for a book, but for a game that's just bad scene creating.


But i can understand that most people on this site are complete off this game because of that prologue.
95% people on this site just want to hit start and have H content in 5 minutes.
I love a good story, i need a good story..... And there is a good story in place here, it only needs some trimming and someone who knows something about script/scene writing

 

[Phasti]

My god, those redheads are pure poetry. This game just oozes class right from the menu. Here's hoping we'll get regular updates. Already in love with it!

 

[Deleted member 1044747]

True, it always will be a case of personal preference.

And the length of a prologue should depend on what kind of game you are making.
A normal H content game should indeed have a short crisp prologue to get the players invested.

But a Adult game that's more focused on a story based on feelings should have a long prologue, because if you try to create a engaging story there are so many factors to introduce to a player... There you should take the time to explore the events that lead up to the point of the actual start of the game.. And a good story doesn't rush those things.

As far as the prologue from this game.
The idea is very good, and i love what he/she tried to accomplish.
But for me it seems that the most conversations are just a couple sentences to long.
Trick is to end a conversation at a high point, still have the players attention but he is still thinking about it in his head and wondering for more...
And in this game at most conversations during the end i was thinking "yeah...i know already.... Or... Can you please get to the point already".. And that's might be good writing for a book, but for a game that's just bad scene creating.


But i can understand that most people on this site are complete off this game because of that prologue.
95% people on this site just want to hit start and have H content in 5 minutes.
I love a good story, i need a good story..... And there is a good story in place here, it only needs some trimming and someone who knows something about script/scene writing

I'm with you.

I mostly play these games for their (hopefully) engaging story, dialogue and characters - if it's sexy, it's a plus.
And if a game is really well written, I don't even care if there's nudity or not.

The intro of Reincarnotica contributes to the story, but in my opinion the dev could have easily axed 80% of the jabbering without losing the essence of what he actually wanted to tell.
It almost feels like two different guys wrote the dialogue for the intro and the second part of the game - the intro feels like a heap of verbose nonsense while the dialogue in the second part of the game is intriguing and on point.

Though I have to admit that I easily get bored once a story descends into a fantasy setting.
I have the same problem when playing "Wicked Choices" - I enjoy the realistic scenes while the fantasy scenes hardly keep me interested.

 

[User_51567]

I'm with you.

I mostly play these games for their (hopefully) engaging story, dialogue and characters - if it's sexy, it's a plus.
And if a game is really well written, I don't even care if there's nudity or not.

The intro of Reincarnotica contributes to the story, but in my opinion the dev could have easily axed 80% of the jabbering without losing the essence of what he actually wanted to tell.
It almost feels like two different guys wrote the dialogue for the intro and the second part of the game - the intro feels like a heap of verbose nonsense while the dialogue in the second part of the game is intriguing and on point.

Though I have to admit, that I easily get bored once a story descends into a fantasy setting.
I have the same problem when playing "Wicked Choices" - I enjoy the realistic scenes while the fantasy scenes hardly keep me interested.

I have this give this game 1 thing though.

It's been a long while that i have been invested in explaining my thoughts of a game..
And i am actually still thinking about it for the last couple hours (ok, that's party because @GhostPhil avatar keeps popping up everywhere i look^^).
This game has me in it's claws, no doubt about it.... Hell i am even bummed out because i was done with the game...

But i pledged and will see what happens in 2019

 

[myuhinny]

I edit the MC's name back and forth from brother to son depending on which one he's talking to. Eunha has cute eyes.

 

[GhostPhil]

*lasciviously poses in a [turquoise] sweater*

I am telling you the turquoise sweater is Prii's hottest piece of clothing. Nothing fits her better.

I edit the MC's name back and forth from brother to son depending on which one he's talking to. Eunha has cute eyes.

But... but... this doesn't even fit the story

I have this give this game 1 thing though.

It's been a long while that i have been invested in explaining my thoughts of a game..
And i am actually still thinking about it for the last couple hours (ok, that's party because @GhostPhil avatar keeps popping up everywhere i look^^).
This game has me in it's claws, no doubt about it.... Hell i am even bummed out because i was done with the game...

But i pledged and will see what happens in 2019

Hehe as I am telling everyone, Prii is gonna conquer the world! That little devil will rule over us all!

 

[User_51567]

But... but... this doesn't even fit the story


Hehe as I am telling everyone, Prii is gonna conquer the world! That little devil will rule over us all!

Ah well.. We both know that some people over here lack logic.....

Yeah, i am starting to believe you...
I really hope that they don't screw her up in the future ..

 

[GhostPhil]

Ah well.. We both know that some people over here lack logic.....

Yeah, i am starting to believe you...
I really hope that they don't screw her up in the future ..

I have faith in Poly

 

[Endrju]

Hehe as I am telling everyone, Prii is gonna conquer the world! That little devil will rule over us all!

how many times you want to have this discussion Phili? talking about it so much wont change a thing...you know how it works and Prii will always have a mother and there is only one queen

 

[GhostPhil]

how many times you want to have this discussion Phili? talking about it so much wont change a thing...you know how it works and Prii will always have a mother and there is only one queen

Well Fi is the Queen Mother that's true, but she only watches her daughter do her thing. She doesn't need to achieve anything, especially nothing she already achieved in the past
At some point you have to let the youth do their things

 

[User_51567]

how many times you want to have this discussion Phili? talking about it so much wont change a thing...you know how it works and Prii will always have a mother and there is only one queen

Yeah... I have to agree with @GhostPhil here..
Prii will rule everything... Fiona might be the queen.... But Prii is the goddess of cuteness

 

[Endrju]

Well Fi is the Queen Mother that's true, but she only watches her daughter do her thing. She doesn't need to achieve anything, especially nothing she already achieved in the past
At some point you have to let the youth do their things

Yeah... I have to agree with @GhostPhil here..
Prii will rule everything... Fiona might be the queen.... But Prii is the goddess of cuteness

i see im alone in this fight, but no matter my love for fiona will give me strenght, ofcourse Pri is cute, i like her a lot myself but you both are investing in something you dont even know, we have no real idea what Pri is all about and what her story will be...and i dont belive 'Poly' can top what he done with fiona....but you know what i like you both very much and i feel generous when it come to the people i like...sooo ...so be it i aloud you two to win this thing...i just want fiona even without her crown

 

[Mrsubtle]

Hmm, okay the intro is very Dense. Probably best to start where you wake up in the Hospital and over time with some searching you find Clue's/Memories/Flashbacks, and what not.

Possible to rewrite/redo the intro, but everything still very bare bones(except for the intro ofc), and at this point most Players are rather waiting/looking for new content. Then again you could re-use existing assets and split it at least into 4 parts. But no rush here.

And for the redheads, they are pretty much perfect as Gingers. Looks/Freckles and even the damn Expressions are hitting the right spot. Hopefully you'll create other scenarios where they give certain adorable and other diabolical types of looks. It be a waste not to.

 

[Deleted member 1044747]

I have this give this game 1 thing though.

It's been a long while that i have been invested in explaining my thoughts of a game..

Heh, if you see me nagging about a game, it usually means I like it.
I wouldn't even bother to write any form of criticism about a game I don't care about.

I am telling you the turquoise sweater is Prii's hottest piece of clothing. Nothing fits her better.

That's a nice little detail I really like and appreciate about Reincarnotica - both Fi and Prii have their distinctive colour themes, which are displayed in their clothing, but also in the design of their rooms.

 

[Mrsubtle]

Redheads Usually Look great in Blue/Green Also Purple can work really well. And i wish i still had a source from ancient Tumblr a Redhead in a really nice Yellow Tight dress, felt like an exception to the rule of sorts.

 

[Endrju]

That's a nice little detail I really like and appreciate about Reincarnotica - both Fi and Prii have their distinctive colour themes, which are displayed in their clothing, but also in the design of their rooms.

yeah it was minor detail for some but for me it had very big impact and the whole experience was something else

 

[GhostPhil]

That's a nice little detail I really like and appreciate about Reincarnotica - both Fi and Prii have their distinctive colour themes, which are displayed in their clothing, but also in the design of their rooms.

Don't forget about Aanya with her purple color coded clothings and house
And I agree that the whole color coding is something what makes this game unique

 

[myuhinny]

The night that you can peek on Fiona in the bathroom at night time her bedroom is locked but it also says that she's in the bathroom and that he shouldn't peek on her again.

One spot when helping her in the backyard MC's name is used instead of hers.

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I usually also edit some of the text in a game to make it logical.

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[quinfax]

Nice to see a lot more discussion on this thread.

Excelsior

 

[Avaron1974]

red heads with freckles?


man DREAMS DO COME TRUE

I think most of us have them .... it's in the ginger guide book we get as kids, must develop freckles section 19 paragraph 4 right before the "sun will cook your pasty ass alive" chapter.