I agree about the anime mannerisms and spelling mistakes. Not that Priscilla's anime-inspired personality is bad, it just feels like you're interacting with a high school anime club member. I personally think there's a disconnect between her age and looks and the way she acts, but I realize that that was a stylistic choice. Also, sometimes I feel the author's voice escapes too much into all of the characters and they speak too much like each other.You know, if you use anime posing and imitate anime sounds in the subtitles of your anime scenarios, it doesn't matter if you are using western character models, the end product still reeks of anime. Commit yourself to one genre in all aspects, people like me who hate anime won't appreciate being baited with screenshots of redheads only to find out later that what they've ACTUALLY signed up for was a 3D retexture of some random anime cartoon.
This is why I appreciate F95zone where I can peruse the content without having to make a bad purchase first. Priscilla faceplanting ass up in a skirt and then doing that retarded puffed cheek angry something gesture standing up for the millionth time is where I called quits (skipping through half the content preceding that scenario), but my patience was already running short way before that having to read "your" and "you're" being used consistently wrong, it's as if you've deliberately used the wrong one 90% of the time, I would've been less agitated if I'd have read "your" and not a single "you're" in the entire script. And this is coming from a non-native speaker so your level of English is absolutely no excuse.
I didn't submit this as a review because liking or disliking anime is too subjective to make an unbiased review, but it's still my opinion, that I thought needed to be voiced.
Other than that, it was a fun play, good build up, and the art and choice of music are great. Nice job to the author!