VN Ren'Py Abandoned Reluctant Archon [v1.0 Full Vss] [Kyois]

[Mister Ed]

This makes me Sad and Happy.

Sad because my Pride in thinking I was getting better at English was just crushed, .

Happy because now I got a sheet I can study and get to work fixing those spelling mistakes that everyone is tired of looking at.

Thank you.

Honestly if english is not your first language then your doing a very good job of faking it. Yes there are spelling and grammar issues but they have never been so bad as to make things illegible. I would give you an overall 95% rating on it in that regard.

 

[Darkmetal]

this game reminds me of Lucifer on Netflix.. the main character owns a bar/club and is escaping from his father's influence.. plus Vanessa reminds me of Chloe Decker / Lauren German... 5/5 stars for me and I can't wait for the 2nd chapter!

Very true and don't forget Vincent as Detective Douche (even wears the brown leather jacket) and most importantly;
Marena the kickass bartender v Mazikeen the kickass bartender

 

[Zivairs]

Very true and don't forget Vincent as Detective Douche (even wears the brown leather jacket) and most importantly;
Marena the kickass bartender v Mazikeen the kickass bartender

When I first released this game, people were comparing it to Lucifer and American Gods; since then I’ve watched those shows. (Just started watching the Winchester Brothers liking it so far Canto Forte thanks for the recommendation.)

Loved American Gods, Lucifer was good but I never went past season One because I did see the similarities and I wanted to steer clear of it, didn't want the story being too much like Lucifer. But after a while I said screw it might as well slide into the similarities, and changed Marena from the once Shy and self-conscious Orc who wanted to hide her appearance behind the Glam she was given into the Mazikeen inspired Orc she is now.

Vincent and Sir Douche was just a happy coincidence I didn’t want to change once I realized it.

 

[BigLurker]

Really love how people start doing mystical stories. Its better than "parents died and here is your sexy aunt/landlady and daughters/adopted girls".

Keep it up! Also, I feel better playing a strong character than the standard wimp in these games. Its like playing a movie, in a good way.

 

[Jiraz]

First time playing today and must say, it really suprised me how good it was, the story is great and the girls are lovely!. Looking forward to see where it all goes.

 

[bigpenniser]

This game is actually great! Im impressed, cant wait for the next update,

 

[Canto Forte]

But .. He is reluctant ... being some archon just stands to prove ...
Immovable objects are immovable!

 

[Sinphil]

Is the necklace the MC made for Zoe the same with Vanessa? *-*

It certainly is

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Pretty sure is not only visual that part of telling story either.

Might want to use spoiler tags though when discussing specific content.

 

[Sinphil]

When I first released this game, people were comparing it to Lucifer and American Gods; since then I’ve watched those shows. (Just started watching the Winchester Brothers liking it so far Canto Forte thanks for the recommendation.)

Loved American Gods, Lucifer was good but I never went past season One because I did see the similarities and I wanted to steer clear of it, didn't want the story being too much like Lucifer. But after a while I said screw it might as well slide into the similarities, and changed Marena from the once Shy and self-conscious Orc who wanted to hide her appearance behind the Glam she was given into the Mazikeen inspired Orc she is now.

Vincent and Sir Douche was just a happy coincidence I didn’t want to change once I realized it.

I get annoyed at people acting like Lucifer and American Gods original. What about the table top World of Darkness and the Wheels of Fire book series from 80's, underworld movie series and even the old Forever Knight tv series. The what if mythical creatures and Gods were real and still amongst us is nothing new BUT you have created a unique spin on this that you can be proud of. One thing I really love is its always the traditionally powerful creatures focused on in these concepts, the elves, vampires, werewolves yet you have two fucking orcs as main characters with kick ass personalities and abilities that definitely not your 1HD red shirt.

 

[Repuci]

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In the next two weeks overtime is finally coming to a halt, so I’ll finally have my evenings back to improve and work on the game.
Even Better News:
Ch 2 is done, thank you for your patience. I hope you enjoy it.
What’s add:
The outcome of how you handle Vanessa. And if Katsumi is working for you. Story progression.
Feedback is always welcome.

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[Zivairs]

I was going to request an updated to this thread when I got off work, but this works too, thank you.

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[Blackwing65]

Thank you, you saved my day.

 

[UncleVT]

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Thanks, added to OP.

 

[Alfred the Fallen]

That's one amazing update for any fan of Marena.

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I noticed a couple of spelling mistakes.

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All things considered, it's a great update with a lot of story progression.

 

[ThunderRob]

i missed 2 errors so much shame.. my first proofreading ever and i missed some

unless of course it was the stuff after he had not added yet..then i'm fine hehehe
AHA!!!..they are in the stuff he added after all i proofread..I'M PERFECT!!!!!

 

[jish55]

Finally got some time with Marena. All I know is that she's tied for best girl alongside Vanessa.

 

[ThunderRob]

spectacular update...this game is one of the best..also..

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[macinblack]

Welp, It seem I now have a fetish for hot Orc babes...which is something I didn't know about myself 24 hours ago, so thanks for that...having done the scene twice, I'm firmly in the no glam camp.

This was a fantastic update, meaty, plenty of good sex, with some good character development and plot progression thrown in for good measure, it was a great treat to play and I've enjoyed it tremendously.

We have a horse race for best girl imo Vanessa and Marena are leading the pack but Keylara, and Katsumi are still in it for sure and Alvara (I'm hoping) could be a dark horse.

Definitely a high quality game with damn near top tier writing, I for one am eagerly looking forward to the next release.

 

[dmhsfgl]

The countess is too hot. I want to join her, Looking forward to the next update

 

[playb0y44]

Here's my compressed version.

Note: This is an unofficial modified version of this game so if something goes wrong it goes wrong

Image/audio/video quality is reduced to make this smaller. This is not a perfect process and sometimes can break a game. You've been warned so no complaining.

Reluctant Archon [Ch. 2] [Kyois] - Original Size: 1.66 GB

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