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juan palote

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Call me crazy but i think the story writing of this game is way above average.

I think its one of the best of this site honestly.

I mean sure, i would have prefer if we could have an harem with all the girls, but that is just a preference, i wont say the writing is bad because the Dev made a choice to not give that option
 

fatpat79

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I...I don't know what to make of this game. From where and how it started to where it is now, it seems like a weird porn to Bollywood movie. At first ladies couldn't keep their hands off him and now he's fighting ninjas and shit. It's weird.
 

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Spot on.

Sit and really think about how RTP would be if Jensen had a harem? He would loose his character as Jensen and all credibility. Even giving the option to change the MC's name would break "Jensen" the character.

If RTP had harem/incest it would make no sense at all. It would be like so so many VN's here.

Only thing i can say is once i have my 3rd game out, YES i have an idea fro another game after Alternate Existence is done, you will see the different type of styles of VN's I try and do.

I honestly enjoy making VN's and not really bothered by people who don't like it. People who do I'd love to continue and entertain them. That is why I keep saying THANK YOU to the people who sponsor RTP and to you guys/gals who play it even for free.;)

Call me crazy but i think the story writing of this game is way above average.

I think its one of the best of this site honestly.

I mean sure, i would have prefer if we could have an harem with all the girls, but that is just a preference, i wont say the writing is bad because the Dev made a choice to not give that option
 

xtr3mx7

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Love this gem, the whole story.
God damn it, I do hope to have a season 4 with Jenssen Wenchester!
Glad that this game didn't follow the harem route.
I'm just disappointed that Nicky isn't the real daughter to Jenssen following the test, but what intrigued me is that part of Jenssen's DNA is found in both Vicky and Nicky. How could that be possible, if Nicky isn't the real daughter?
 

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I...I don't know what to make of this game. From where and how it started to where it is now, it seems like a weird porn to Bollywood movie. At first ladies couldn't keep their hands off him and now he's fighting ninjas and shit. It's weird.
Well, in the next release, Jensen decides to return to his musical roots as a virtuoso cello player in the Philharmonic Orchestra.... either that or open a ceramics studio.
 

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Sit and really think about how RTP would be if Jensen had a harem? He would loose his character as Jensen and all credibility. Even giving the option to change the MC's name would break "Jensen" the character.

If RTP had harem/incest it would make no sense at all. It would be like so so many VN's here.
Hi there, I just finished playing the current iteration of the game, and I really do enjoy it (even tho I'm disappointed Mei isn't one of the potential end love interests) and I in by no means want to sound like I'm criticizing you or anything, I really did enjoy the game.
But, it's hard for me to agree with the fact that if there was a harem ending, Jensen would lose his character or credibility. There doesn't seem to be any character development for Jensen that shows he isn't ok with being with multiple women. Hell he's dating a mother and daughter at the same time! I understand not having a name change, as the story seemed to have divulged into multiple povs rather than just Jensen's POV.

Also to touch on the harem/incest point of not making sense at all. I honestly wouldn't feel that way if incest was in the game, with Amber or Jensen's niece. If anything, with all the "omg he's so handsome, he looks so good" followed with the so many fuck me eyes directed towards Jensen, it felt like incest was going to be a legit part of the story for a while. Honestly disappointed there isn't any, but that's just my personal thing. However, here it feels like you omitted the whole harem/incest thing trying NOT to be like other VN's, rather than it not making sense story wise. Not that that's a bad thing, harem/incest is definitely overdone on this site, and most of it doesn't even make sense. For this game though, it would have actually made sense for me based on how I read through the story, and it could have added so many layers to a story that seemed to be already putting down the stepping stones for the story to get to that point.

Again, I don't want to seem like I'm criticizing you or anything, I actually really enjoyed the story. I just don't think, based on how the story was written, it gave off the vibes of "Jensen hates harems/incest. It's not part of his character!" I understand that's how you meant his character to be, but that didn't really come off that way to me as a reader/player.
 
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When i started developing RTP in my mind it was actually suppose to be Jensen and Nicky with her mom included. But mainly Jensen educating a young girl into womanhood. Then i thought about Incest but me personally wasn't comfortable with incest as a fetish.

I ran this past DocPinkCake as we were pretty close friends and he said that he will not be doing incest in AL. We discussed RTP a few times and his arguments and my thoughts just led to where the character Jensen ex army man, use to orders and commands and doing things the right way contradicted the incest part. So from the start I never planned incest when i finally had my RTP story.

It was Wurg my lead coder who laid out Season 1 for me after I've finished it. Said that to him and many others it felt that Season 1 pointed to incest/harem. For me it never occurred as I never wrote it to be incest/harem. Jensen was under the influence of the side effects of experiments done on him years before. The pheromone side effect happened which effected most women he was in contact with. Nicky and Vicky it did not feel that affect that harshly, yet over time did. Nicky in some ways a little more than her mom.
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So that is why i have to disagree with your assessment, yet also understand why you think that way. BUT that is the great part about VN's / movies/ tv series / books we the person watching or reading it have our own thoughts on the matter and that is perfectly fine.

Hi there, I just finished playing the current iteration of the game, and I really do enjoy it (even tho I'm disappointed Mei isn't one of the potential end love interests) and I in by no means want to sound like I'm criticizing you or anything, I really did enjoy the game.
But, it's hard for me to agree with the fact that if there was a harem ending, Jensen would lose his character or credibility. There doesn't seem to be any character development for Jensen that shows he isn't ok with being with multiple women. Hell he's dating a mother and daughter at the same time! I understand not having a name change, as the story seemed to have divulged into multiple povs rather than just Jensen's POV.

Also to touch on the harem/incest point of not making sense at all. I honestly wouldn't feel that way if incest was in the game, with Amber or Jensen's niece. If anything, with all the "omg he's so handsome, he looks so good" followed with the so many fuck me eyes directed towards Jensen, it felt like incest was going to be a legit part of the story for a while. Honestly disappointed there isn't any, but that's just my personal thing. However, here it feels like you omitted the whole harem/incest thing trying NOT to be like other VN's, rather than it not making sense story wise. Not that that's a bad thing, harem/incest is definitely overdone on this site, and most of it doesn't even make sense. For this game though, it would have actually made sense for me based on how I read through the story, and it could have added so many layers to a story that seemed to be already putting down the stepping stones for the story to get to that point.

Again, I don't want to seem like I'm criticizing you or anything, I actually really enjoyed the story. I just don't think, based on how the story was written, it gave off the vibes of "Jensen hates harems/incest. It's not part of his character!" I understand that's how you meant his character to be, but that didn't really come off that way to me as a reader/player.
 

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IMO, after reading a few post in this thread, I tend to ask myself how many of the gamers here are so incestuous, more like having a mental disorder.

I get it that it's a game and a fantasy but come on. Those who are complaining too much that the game lack incest/harem should seriously check themselves out with a shrink of some sort.

I'm very glad that RTP does not follow the footstep of other games and that's what make this VN special.

There are other VN games that does not even give choices and just go ahead with their story, whether you like it or not but MrKnobb provided us choices with the girls. I for one chose Vicky as my main girl since I saw her in her red gown down the hallway.

Seriously, people who don't like the VN shouldn't bother even following this thread at all and stop complaining, leave it for those who appreciate RTP. Thanks MrKnobb, I love RTP and it's quite refreshing! Keep it up and hopefully, we'll see more of Jensen and the girls in another 1-2 seasons. Hopefully, season 4 = the prequel as planned and season 5 = the final sequel?
 
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Hopefully, season 4 = the prequel as planned and season 5 = the final sequel
Sorry man but nothing planned. Maybe one day I'll revisit RTP or take one of the characters and their side story.
Maybe do a Christian horn dog RTP days. I mean he's perfect character to make a game on. Horni, lying, cheating and in love with Vicky...haha
 

xtr3mx7

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Sorry man but nothing planned. Maybe one day I'll revisit RTP or take one of the characters and their side story.
Maybe do a Christian horn dog RTP days. I mean he's perfect character to make a game on. Horni, lying, cheating and in love with Vicky...haha
Well, all good things must come to an end and I'm going to enjoy RTP thoroughly until the end. Hope I'm not going to have withdrawal syndrome soon.

However, I'm crossing fingers for that spin off haha!
 
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Hopefully you'll enjoy Alternate Existence too. You can play with patch but it will be originally written for landlady etc...

Well, all good things must come to an end and I'm going to enjoy RTP thoroughly until the end. Hope I'm not going to have withdrawal syndrome soon.

However, I'm crossing fingers for that spin off haha!
 

Englen

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Its always best to end a game on a high note and while the dev still has passion for the project instead of dragging it on and risk running it into the ground like so many do *cough DMD cough*

Anyway im gonna thoroughly enjoy the last couple of episodes that we have left and then look forward to hearing more about AE.
 

xtr3mx7

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I just read the synopsis on your patreon page, it's going to be another great VN. Can't wait for that to happen, but a suggestion though, could you please not use landlady & tenant?

It has been occurence theme in so many VN these days that I'm almost developing an anti-landlady & tenant aptitude haha. I am pretty sure you can come up with something other than landlady etc.

Hopefully you'll enjoy Alternate Existence too. You can play with patch but it will be originally written for landlady etc...
 

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I love how in your signature we both love exactly the same type of games...


Its always best to end a game on a high note and while the dev still has passion for the project instead of dragging it on and risk running it into the ground like so many do *cough DMD cough*

Anyway im gonna thoroughly enjoy the last couple of episodes that we have left and then look forward to hearing more about AE.
 

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Haha.. don't worry its a pet hate of mine too... No i have very good naming idee that fits in with the direction of the game. I can't tell you what tough. Not now, hopefully it will make sense once it's revealed.

I just read the synopsis on your patreon page, it's going to be another great VN. Can't wait for that to happen, but a suggestion though, could you please not use landlady & tenant?

It has been occurence theme in so many VN these days that I'm almost developing an anti-landlady & tenant aptitude haha. I am pretty sure you can come up with something other than landlady etc.
 

LWtbo

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Although I by no means hate Landylady and tenant used in games its mainly used to cover Incest.
And as the Dev hinted strongly Incest is not their thing it would be awkward to say the least to use it.
that would definatly cause issues in any game thred with any fan that comes to the game later.
ie. landlady and tenent what the fuck where's the incest ect.

So i'm curious to see what the Dev's come up with.
by way did a litle pondering and i'm wondering if foster mom and foster kid would get hit with Anti Incest police.
in a difrent game by a difrent DEV odviously?

PS. should point out although I do like incest games I still dont actually know why I do as I dont fancy any of my family.
However I do think some games work better as Landlady and Tenent.
Take Man of the House for example.
I played that game withough the Incest patch and it was still as hot as hell for me.
Claire as landlady especially.

Just Wondering.
 
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Although I by no means hate Landylady and tenant used in games its mainly used to cover Incest.
And as the Dev hinted strongly Incest is not their thing it would be awkward to say the least to use it.
that would definatly cause issues in any game thred with any fan that comes to the game later.
ie. landlady and tenent what the fuck where's the incest ect.

So i'm curious to see what the Dev's come up with.
by way did a litle pondering and i'm wondering if foster mom and foster kid would get hit with Anti Incest police.
in a difrent game by a difrent DEV odviously?

Just Wondering.
It would for sure under the Patreon definition, since it has the same potential creepy factor,in a way even more since in most foster care situations you have to take care of a kid or young adult with several trauma's that you volunteered for. The thing with consensual incest relations is that they are at least based upon mutual dependencies that grew over a long period of time out of need that turned societal speaking wrong. :) (Now I am not talking of grooming or possessiveness by one of the partners).
 

Moonis

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I don't mind that there isn't incest in the game. I do mind, however, that we can't have sex with the hottest woman in the game (Amber). If daughter was butt-ugly I wouldn't need incest in the game, but as she's too hot not to be fucked, game clearly needs big dose of incest in it ;).
 

LWtbo

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True but there are short term and long term fostering and there is nothing to say that in long term fostering a mutual relationship can't develop.

Plus fostering is only the leagal version of a young adult living with a family friend or a freind family.
And of course I'm refering to young adults not the Kid stuff the japanese tend to use in games and comics.

Plus Patreon dosn't base their discrimination on creepyness otherwise they would have very little games of an adult nature on their site.

However it would be frowned upon and probably be cast as illigal in the fact it would be an abuse of power situation along the same lines as a Teacher that fucks one or more of their students.

Maybe that would get it Baned by Patreon though i'm not so sure.

PS. last comment on this it was just a thought but it is geting off topic.

Just Sayin.
 
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