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Heh Rena from acting lessons is here, now the cabin weekend makes sense and her ranger uncle teaching her how to defend herself. Cute.
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Yeah, Nikki, her friend and Rena's uncle also appeared in Acting Lessons at the end of latest episode
You can also spot Mrs. Pearson from Acting Lessons in this story if you pay attention, you see her in the clothing shop xD
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Haha, I knew I saw her in the background somewhere. Couldn't remember who she was until you mentioned it, thanks btw.Yeah, Nikki, her friend, and Rena's uncle also appeared in Acting Lessons at the end of latest episode
You can also spot Mrs. Pearson from Acting Lessons in this story if you pay attention, you see her in the clothing shop XD
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Haha, no problem, my pleasure
I just love how RTP and AL are connected, even if with just these subtle cameo appearances, appearances that makes sense to things since you get to see stuff from different perspectives, even if nothing major
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Yeah, it's a nice touch really. Made me smile, and I bet most people miss it and that's a shame.Haha, no problem, my pleasure
I just love how RTP and AL are connected, even if with just these subtle cameo appearances, appearances that makes sense to things since you get to see stuff from different perspectives, even if nothing major
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Which is why I've pointed out these cameos to people if and when they appear in newest updates, because it just may direct more attention to RTP and thus perhaps, and hopefully make it even more popular, it really deserves it
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seeing that pink cake is tester for this was kinda surprising (i assume they know each other somewhat) because the writing on this one is absolutely terrible. dev is not doing himself a favor with characters doing cameos from acting lessons (which has one of the best writing) reminding you of that game, which leads to the player to compare the two.
the story is pretty stupid, a 10/10 looking guy, being able to kick anyone's ass and on top of that he gets supernatural pheromones which make women go crazy for his dick which is now 30+ cm because of this power. so the dev kinda shot himself in the foot (twice now) when he has to write around this ridiculous plot.
dialogue is okay for most of the time but its pretty often that you will read something so stupid that you will look like this
the story is pretty stupid, a 10/10 looking guy, being able to kick anyone's ass and on top of that he gets supernatural pheromones which make women go crazy for his dick which is now 30+ cm because of this power. so the dev kinda shot himself in the foot (twice now) when he has to write around this ridiculous plot.
dialogue is okay for most of the time but its pretty often that you will read something so stupid that you will look like this
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MrKnobb is involved in Acting Lessons to some degree,as is DrPinkCake in this one, and it doesn't hurt neither one of them to have cameo appearances. And about people comparing one game to another, that's gonna happen regardless, cameo appearances or not. But comparing one thing to another is a pretty dumb thing to do in the first place, instead one should just take and appreciate things for what they are.
And the writing here isn't bad at all, the story is very enjoyable, I don't know how the story that's being told DOESN'T make sense, or maybe you're just not paying attention.
I'm quite sure the MC's abilities and conditions were explained in the story, so it's not like he was born that way.
Overall I think you're just taking things way too seriously...but hey, your opinion is your opinion and you're entitled to it, but with all due respect I have to disagree with everything you just said.
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I don't have access to Knobby's mind/plot, but I can think of one way right off the bat the "10/10, 30+, pheremone" guy could be anything but a shot in the foot.
What if, instead of writing a typical porn game MC (bang everyone with his new super sexy skills), he is written like a man with a real conscience. Then, these "gifts" would actually be a burden as he would have to battle his unnatural inclinations as well as the undesired attention of all those women.
He would have to fight off his own urges, the ladies' urges and his increasing guilt, all while trying to puzzle out how and why he has changed...and who or what did it to him.
See, no plot hole...actually a real plot.
Now, Mr. K may be going in an entirely different direction, but there's plenty of room out there for this to be a terrific story and it's much too soon to write it off so casually.
What if, instead of writing a typical porn game MC (bang everyone with his new super sexy skills), he is written like a man with a real conscience. Then, these "gifts" would actually be a burden as he would have to battle his unnatural inclinations as well as the undesired attention of all those women.
He would have to fight off his own urges, the ladies' urges and his increasing guilt, all while trying to puzzle out how and why he has changed...and who or what did it to him.
See, no plot hole...actually a real plot.
Now, Mr. K may be going in an entirely different direction, but there's plenty of room out there for this to be a terrific story and it's much too soon to write it off so casually.
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Yeah, exactly that. And besides, the story, and more specifically the things happening in the story is just about to really pick up, it's way too soon to judge the story fairly, and it should be done at a much later time, preferably when the story is finished, because only then you see the big picture, right now one would be judging only bits and pieces and that's not fair at all.
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if you say so... in fact he isnt really written at all. the thing that motivates him is that HS girl that was killed. thats his entire character. other than that he just goes with the flow when it comes to pretty much anything. speaking of characters, all of them pretty one dimensional. worst impression of bad writing was Victoria which goes all bossy and bitchy when you first meet her but instantly becomes kind and sweet all because MC tells her to shut up. that and because his magic pheromones (see my comment about writing suffering because of such story)
and there are a lot of games which go for supernatural stuff (like DoD which i love) but none of them really takes itself serious, its just an excuse to get more sex scenes. this guy tries to make it serious and realistic for story, characters everything but isnt competent enough to pull it off.
its not about the story but the bad writing and the way that its presented
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I may be biased, but I don't agree with you either.
You say that the main problem with this game is that it tries to be more serious and realistic than what the dev can achieve, but that in itself doesn't make sense.
How is a game realistic when the main point is an enhanced guy with over the top strenght and libido?
How is a game serious when there's constant 4th wall breaks and comedic scenes (like Christian flying over the garbage bin)?
If we go by your bases, then any 80s/90s tv series like Xena, Hercules, Sliders, etc... should be crap, considering they never went the extra mile to add a specific plot, expand and evolve the characters, or any other detail like that... or do you think they weren't taking themselves seriously, at that time?
Everyone has their own tastes, so I won't try to make you like the game, but you shouldn't try to address negative points that aren't really present in the game.
You could just say "I tried the game and didn't like it.", and nobody would say anything.
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Problem is thats not real conscience, thats being a dumbass. If the dude was getting girls getting thrown at his dick and he waved them off, then it would be "Why is this idiot rejecting everyone".
You could use the "He sad because his girlfriend died in highschool", but still, I prefer my porn games with some porn anyways, plus the writing is not as atrocious as this man is making it out to be, so I dont see that much that needs fixing.
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The game is utter porn schlock where you play as Gary Stu, should just take it for what it is
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to each his own, i personally try to take my time to take in a story to see where it leads,and pay attention to details.
if someone doesnt like this game that is his right, but please dont bash it, just move along.
yes this is the internet and anonymity gives you power.
but keep in mind, there's another person on the otherside that has spend hours,days,weeks or longer to make something,which he/she is proud off.
so to all
please keep mind that Developers are just human like you and me ( the opinions about me being human do vary )
have a nice day
if someone doesnt like this game that is his right, but please dont bash it, just move along.
yes this is the internet and anonymity gives you power.
but keep in mind, there's another person on the otherside that has spend hours,days,weeks or longer to make something,which he/she is proud off.
so to all
please keep mind that Developers are just human like you and me ( the opinions about me being human do vary )
have a nice day