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Lunna_

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I`ve draw her eye pupils (and a few other things)
If someone need it -
I hope I didn't mess up the files because of the RMMZ encoding. Just in case, make a backup of the "img" folder before replacing the files.
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You gave me an idea. Since there are some who like the current style of eyes, I will keep them, but I will add some colors and different eye style where you change her hair =3
 

Lunna_

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That's a shame. I really like her eyes this way, and these big blue eyes was what draw my attention to this game.
You're not the only one. So I made a decision to add colors and different design where you change her hair ;)
 
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Lunna_

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Too bad, there's no lesbian tag for this... Way too early to say this, i know! But it looks promising! If at any point, there will be a chanse to see lesbian tag, i'll give it a go.
Well... Not true lesbian content, but there will be scenes where she shares a man with another woman. Maybe if I find something cool story or side story related, I can add. But since I'm not a lesbian, I don't know how to put that into the game... But I will think of something. No promises though -_-
 
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Lunna_

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When I visit Cobalt City, Reya says she should change her underwear.
When I go to her clothes stall, she says that she has her underwear and it is also put on (actually, the old one remains activated).
If I now leave the clothes rack, the game gets stuck in a loop because she says she can't leave the house like that.

I have now tried all possible combinations of clothes and also used the automatic optimisation. Reya remains standing.
On Cobalt Town? I think the only place where she can change her clothes are side stories in Garnet Town and her house... Can you please tell me where you are on the game? I will see if that's a bug =3
 

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You gave me an idea. Since there are some who like the current style of eyes, I will keep them, but I will add some colors and different eye style where you change her hair =3
Dangerous decision: then we will ask you for a different breast sizes, piercings, tattoos, tans, socks, stockings, jewelry, different pubic hair and more :giggle:
 

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Well... Not true lesbian content, but there will be scenes where she shares a man with another woman. Maybe if I find something cool story or side story related, I can add. But since I'm not a lesbian, I don't know how to put that into the game... But I will think of something. No promises though -_-
I mean, it's your project. And i only said "If at any point, there will be a chanse to see lesbian tag, i'll give it a go." also "it looks promising!"...
 

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Dangerous decision: then we will ask you for a different breast sizes, piercings, tattoos, tans, socks, stockings, jewelry, different pubic hair and more :giggle:
Nah. I really like the idea and will definitely do this. Her breasts will be the same, I don't like tattoos and piercings and I don't plan on doing the other stuff, but her eyes could have other color and design options (lenses).
 

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I mean, it's your project. And i only said "If at any point, there will be a chanse to see lesbian tag, i'll give it a go." also "it looks promising!"...
Don't worry. I know what you mean. But it's like I said, if there's a point in the game where I think Reya can have a lesbian experience, I'll do. But no promises =3
 
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Mercedes

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On Cobalt Town? I think the only place where she can change her clothes are side stories in Garnet Town and her house... Can you please tell me where you are on the game? I will see if that's a bug =3
I followed the story.
Reya's father sends someone out, I leave the house, they tell me that my underwear is not clean, I go back into the house and activate the clothes rack in the room. There it hangs now.
 

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I followed the story.
Reya's father sends someone out, I leave the house, they tell me that my underwear is not clean, I go back into the house and activate the clothes rack in the room. There it hangs now.
Can you share your save file? There are two events when Reya's clothes are dirty. One at the beginning when Reya exchange her father's letters with the mayor and one with gramps in this last update. Both of them you don't need to change clothes at her room... So I'd ask for your save file to see what's going on =P
 

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Can you share your save file? There are two events when Reya's clothes are dirty. One at the beginning when Reya exchange her father's letters with the mayor and one with gramps in this last update. Both of them you don't need to change clothes at her room... So I'd ask for your save file to see what's going on =P
I'll send it to you on Discord, the file is not supported here.
 
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ustar

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I'll send it to you on Discord, the file is not supported here.
Tip: you can compress anything (to .zip for example) if you want attach it here ;)
The forum changes file name (adds random number) so it's better to compress anyway to have name unchanged.
 

rebel.eye

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Since there is no "Quests" or "Tasks", it's unclear what to do next.
I'm having Eddy as party member, but I can't go anywhere with him, Bar job is done, Clothes store is done (measurement), but Eddy stick to MC.
What purpose he joined the party? What to do with him?
 

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Since there is no "Quests" or "Tasks", it's unclear what to do next.
I'm having Eddy as party member, but I can't go anywhere with him, Bar job is done, Clothes store is done (measurement), but Eddy stick to MC.
What purpose he joined the party? What to do with him?
This is a bug. I fixed it already but I will release the fix in the next update. Also, I'm doing "Reya's thoughts" in the skills menu, so people can track what is next and missible events. I announced this a while ago on patreon and discord =3
 
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Joe Steel

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Played a bit of the game before I got softlocked, and mostly liked what I saw. The art is perfectly functional (though the White Walker eyes are a bit bizarre). The worldbuilding in RPGM is much better than average. In particular, the house interiors with lots of stuff to interact with adds a lot a enjoyment to the play.

The biggest problem I have (or, more properly, will have, since I haven't encountered it yet) is the kiddie porn. Making a character that looks, acts, and behaves like a ten-year old is okay, so long as they don;t engage in sex. Simply claiming that the obviously-ten-year-old character is really 18+ will not cut it anywhere. See Rule 7 here at F95 to see that they are not allowed here, either. Not a lot of countries make such depictions illegal (since they are fictional characters) but some countries do, so you'd be better-off not using the child characters here in sexual situations.

The story is okay, but suffers from the usual first-time-RPGM-author problem of the author not remembering that the player does not know what the author knows. So, when the author has a quest assignment to "pick 10 ingredients," the author has to tell the player what an ingredient looks like, so the player isn't irritated by having to click-click-click-click on everything to discover which things are actually what the quest is looking for. Similarly, when the quest is "go to your uncle's house," the author 9and the character) know where that is, but the player is forced to irritatingly check every building in the village to find the right one. Reya should just say "uncle's house is in the north-central part of town" after she leaves the house. Ditto for mayor's house.

There are also a few needlessly complex quest-ending requirements. At the pub, when Reya finishes, she talks to the barkeep, then her friend, then the bartender where she gets paid, and is told to change the dress. Nothing indicates that the dress should be put back in the drawer, but that's common sense. However, the quest finishing sequence isn't over. When Reya tries to leave, she says "I have to finish my shift." Uhhh... she has finished it and gotten paid. So what gives? There's no clue as to what to do next. It turns out that she has to talk to her friend again, and then the bartender again, but the player just has to blunder about blindly to discover that. Lots of things like that in the game; Reya can only open the buy screen in the store if she lacks the money to buy anything. Once she gets the money to buy something, it kicks off the "model a dress" quest and the woman selling clothing will not sell any clothing until "the dress is finished" in a week. WTF?

The game frustrated me quite a few times (and in the current game it is softlocked because Eddie joined the party when I tried to tell him his mother was looking for him (he says "let's go!" when he joins but there is nowhere to go and no way to get rid of him). I understand that this bug is being corrected, but it still means that I can't play on.

In spite of all of the above, I think that this game shows enormous potential, both for the game itself, and for the developer. There is a lot of attention to detail here, and the protagonist doesn't do the all-to-common FMC stunt of falling on a dick the first time she goes outdoors. She's a genuinely likable and clever, if a bit naive, personality. I also very much appreciate the dev eschewing Mutant Tits.

Can't wait for more.
 
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Joe Steel

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Oh, and please tell me that Garnet Town is named for the Garnet of The Adventures of Garnet. That game and character have a special place in my heart as the first "western" adult RPGM game.
 

Lunna_

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Played a bit of the game before I got softlocked, and mostly liked what I saw. The art is perfectly functional (though the White Walker eyes are a bit bizarre). The worldbuilding in RPGM is much better than average. In particular, the house interiors with lots of stuff to interact with adds a lot a enjoyment to the play.

The biggest problem I have (or, more properly, will have, since I haven't encountered it yet) is the kiddie porn. Making a character that looks, acts, and behaves like a ten-year old is okay, so long as they don;t engage in sex. Simply claiming that the obviously-ten-year-old character is really 18+ will not cut it anywhere. See Rule 7 here at F95 to see that they are not allowed here, either. Not a lot of countries make such depictions illegal (since they are fictional characters) but some countries do, so you'd be better-off not using the child characters here in sexual situations.

The story is okay, but suffers from the usual first-time-RPGM-author problem of the author not remembering that the player does not know what the author knows. So, when the author has a quest assignment to "pick 10 ingredients," the author has to tell the player what an ingredient looks like, so the player isn't irritated by having to click-click-click-click on everything to discover which things are actually what the quest is looking for. Similarly, when the quest is "go to your uncle's house," the author 9and the character) know where that is, but the player is forced to irritatingly check every building in the village to find the right one. Reya should just say "uncle's house is in the north-central part of town" after she leaves the house. Ditto for mayor's house.

There are also a few needlessly complex quest-ending requirements. At the pub, when Reya finishes, she talks to the barkeep, then her friend, then the bartender where she gets paid, and is told to change the dress. Nothing indicates that the dress should be put back in the drawer, but that's common sense. However, the quest finishing sequence isn't over. When Reya tries to leave, she says "I have to finish my shift." Uhhh... she has finished it and gotten paid. So what gives? There's no clue as to what to do next. It turns out that she has to talk to her friend again, and then the bartender again, but the player just has to blunder about blindly to discover that. Lots of things like that in the game; Reya can only open the buy screen in the store if she lacks the money to buy anything. Once she gets the money to buy something, it kicks off the "model a dress" quest and the woman selling clothing will not sell any clothing until "the dress is finished" in a week. WTF?

The game frustrated me quite a few times (and in the current game it is softlocked because Eddie joined the party when I tried to tell him his mother was looking for him (he says "let's go!" when he joins but there is nowhere to go and no way to get rid of him). I understand that this bug is being corrected, but it still means that I can't play on.

In spite of all of the above, I think that this game shows enormous potential, both for the game itself, and for the developer. There is a lot of attention to detail here, and the protagonist doesn't do the all-to-common FMC stunt of falling on a dick the first time she goes outdoors. She's a genuinely likable and clever, if a bit naive, personality. I also very much appreciate the dev eschewing Mutant Tits.

Can't wait for more.
Thanks for your critics. It really helps me fix things and get better at others. I'm doing a "Reya's thoughts" that will let players know what must be done. But I will fix some dialogs that you mentioned in game so the player don't need to keep using this skill.
I'm not so sure, but you're not soft locked entirely (that's why I didn't released a fix update just for that until now), but you can keep playing and when you return from the forest with Eddy, he will leave the party.
As for buying the clothes, it's not time yet, but I wanted to show players that this will be possible soon.
As for the Garnet Town, it's from Garnet of Final Fantasy IX lol. Some people asked me about the name of the town and the correlation but I didn't played this Adventure of Garnet yet. Oh, all cities and towns are named after stones, that's why.
 
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Lunna_

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Played a bit of the game before I got softlocked, and mostly liked what I saw. The art is perfectly functional (though the White Walker eyes are a bit bizarre). The worldbuilding in RPGM is much better than average. In particular, the house interiors with lots of stuff to interact with adds a lot a enjoyment to the play.

The biggest problem I have (or, more properly, will have, since I haven't encountered it yet) is the kiddie porn. Making a character that looks, acts, and behaves like a ten-year old is okay, so long as they don;t engage in sex. Simply claiming that the obviously-ten-year-old character is really 18+ will not cut it anywhere. See Rule 7 here at F95 to see that they are not allowed here, either. Not a lot of countries make such depictions illegal (since they are fictional characters) but some countries do, so you'd be better-off not using the child characters here in sexual situations.

The story is okay, but suffers from the usual first-time-RPGM-author problem of the author not remembering that the player does not know what the author knows. So, when the author has a quest assignment to "pick 10 ingredients," the author has to tell the player what an ingredient looks like, so the player isn't irritated by having to click-click-click-click on everything to discover which things are actually what the quest is looking for. Similarly, when the quest is "go to your uncle's house," the author 9and the character) know where that is, but the player is forced to irritatingly check every building in the village to find the right one. Reya should just say "uncle's house is in the north-central part of town" after she leaves the house. Ditto for mayor's house.

There are also a few needlessly complex quest-ending requirements. At the pub, when Reya finishes, she talks to the barkeep, then her friend, then the bartender where she gets paid, and is told to change the dress. Nothing indicates that the dress should be put back in the drawer, but that's common sense. However, the quest finishing sequence isn't over. When Reya tries to leave, she says "I have to finish my shift." Uhhh... she has finished it and gotten paid. So what gives? There's no clue as to what to do next. It turns out that she has to talk to her friend again, and then the bartender again, but the player just has to blunder about blindly to discover that. Lots of things like that in the game; Reya can only open the buy screen in the store if she lacks the money to buy anything. Once she gets the money to buy something, it kicks off the "model a dress" quest and the woman selling clothing will not sell any clothing until "the dress is finished" in a week. WTF?

The game frustrated me quite a few times (and in the current game it is softlocked because Eddie joined the party when I tried to tell him his mother was looking for him (he says "let's go!" when he joins but there is nowhere to go and no way to get rid of him). I understand that this bug is being corrected, but it still means that I can't play on.

In spite of all of the above, I think that this game shows enormous potential, both for the game itself, and for the developer. There is a lot of attention to detail here, and the protagonist doesn't do the all-to-common FMC stunt of falling on a dick the first time she goes outdoors. She's a genuinely likable and clever, if a bit naive, personality. I also very much appreciate the dev eschewing Mutant Tits.

Can't wait for more.
About the kids, they are all 18+, but shorties, I will try to fix some dialogs as they don't seems to be children (or prepubescent) and will redesign some drawings so the picture shows them as young adults and not men over 30s.
 
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Joe Steel

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As for the Garnet Town, it's from Garnet of Final Fantasy IX lol. Some people asked me about the name of the town and the correlation but I didn't played this Adventure of Garnet yet. Oh, all cities and towns are named after stones, that's why.
Your character Reya is very much like Garnet. AoG is probably older than you would want to play, having been started in RPGM 2000 and only upgraded to VX (i,e, no mouse support). Check it out only for some story ideas. Yours looks to be a better game.
 
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