RoadWulf
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- Nov 18, 2018
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I think you may misunderstand the term "slow burn". A slow burn would be something like reaching this far and only have gotten a hand job from the sluttiest character. I mean's he's already kissed the puritan girl and made her doubt her faith and virginity in 3 interactions. That's not slow... at all.
In fact, the whole pace of this game feels really rushed and almost absurd.
He goes from homeless highschool grad to working with a label and working for a drug cartel in less than a month. Not to mention sleeping with 3 big titted sluts when he apparently somehow was a virgin until he was 18.
and this is only the 4 version of the game... Unless you're planning to end it around version 10 you might want to rethink your pacing.
P.S.
Please have someone else write your sex scenes, you wrote the exact same dialogue for all 3 girls...
In fact, the whole pace of this game feels really rushed and almost absurd.
He goes from homeless highschool grad to working with a label and working for a drug cartel in less than a month. Not to mention sleeping with 3 big titted sluts when he apparently somehow was a virgin until he was 18.
and this is only the 4 version of the game... Unless you're planning to end it around version 10 you might want to rethink your pacing.
P.S.
Please have someone else write your sex scenes, you wrote the exact same dialogue for all 3 girls...
