VN Ren'Py Completed SandStorm (EraStorm Saga #1) [v2.01] [GleenX Studio]

[Canto Forte]

Banter lines are poor... most gurls do not taste shakespeare, not even in the wine.
Most babes are boooOOOOooring, they just want a juice throbbing MC to shower them in enthusiasm.
Most if not all the time, Mc has to come up with anything as an excuse to talk to babes so bored and lustless.

The only good thing about games in general, is the fact that anything good comes:
only when bombshells willingly seek out the thirstful fiery lust demon of any MC willing to throbb their world.

 

[HornyyPussy]

That is literally no excuse! Don't release it then! Or get a competent translator to edit your work! When a visual novel is 60-70% text it has to be good.

Or you know, move on to another game that doesn't piss you of as much...

Most of us doesn't care if the language isn't perfect and i have personally not had any problems with it

 

[Trikus]

Excuses like 'he's not a native English speaker' are worthless and it only damages the product they are trying to sell.

If it bothers you that much, why not offer your services as a proof reader.

 

[Trikus]

A short update but one that was worth it. There are plenty of alternative routes to go through and hot sex scenes at last. Still gotta say Rion on the romance path is my favourite path. Keep up the good work. That said, taking things slow with Nora was a really beautiful scene.

 

[NukaCola]

I only play Rion romance route. Which other route have hot sex scenes?

 

[dimale7582]

Really enjoying this game. I was travelling in Egypt right before COVID came so I know all these names, know how the Aswan dam looks, and love the country.... It is very fun seeing how it is all represented ( Makes me wish there were some sexy priestesses in Luxor or Abu Simbal)

I am looking forward to the next update, really enjoy Nora's story but I am also very keen on seeing what happens if we bang that other performer...

 

[BigStuffedTiger]

Rion and Nora are so adorably cute crushing on each other...

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

Well, I gave this a go since it first dropped. Writing is good. The very slight 'Engrish' is also understandable, no problems there. However, we get blueballed for 3 eps and this ep we get to take control with Maddie for just a second only to lose it a moment later. I don't call that a good time. I clicked twice more to see if we would regain control, but, that didn't happen. Not my thing. Not judging anyone who likes when a woman takes control, but, it's not for me. I wish the dev well.

 

[BigStuffedTiger]

Well, I gave this a go since it first dropped. Writing is good. The very slight 'Engrish' is also understandable, no problems there. However, we get blueballed for 3 eps and this ep we get to take control with Maddie for just a second only to lose it a moment later. I don't call that a good time. I clicked twice more to see if we would regain control, but, that didn't happen. Not my thing. Not judging anyone who likes when a woman takes control, but, it's not for me. I wish the dev well.

Umm....

"Wow Maddie became quite obedient."
"Good girl."
...
"It's like she is begging for more, as if I tamed her..."

doesn't sound like her staying in control to me. It's also unclear to me why you picked the feminist amazon control freak if you prefer someone more docile. Maddie prides herself on always being in control and prizes her independence and autonomy so she was never going to quickly or easily surrender control. There are other girls in this game like Rion and Nora who aren't so obviously preoccupied with being in control.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

Umm....

"Wow Maddie became quite obedient."
"Good girl."
...
"It's like she is begging for more, as if I tamed her..."

doesn't sound like her staying in control to me. It's also unclear to me why you picked the feminist amazon control freak if you prefer someone more docile. Maddie prides herself on always being in control and prizes her independence and autonomy so she was never going to quickly or easily surrender control. There are other girls in this game like Rion and Nora who aren't so obviously preoccupied with being in control.

After the whole incident in her room. Not sure what happened after she takes control on the bed as I was done. I picked her because of the whole Rion shit.

 

[GleenXstudio]

You are still in the early stages of the game then, it's not even v0.2. You haven't met Nora yet ? She's the one for you from what I understand of your tastes.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

You are still in the early stages of the game then, it's not even v0.2. You haven't met Nora yet ? She's the one for you from what I understand of your tastes.

Ok. I'll hang on again. When you drop the next update, I'll restart.

Edit

Where I am is after the hotel bar scene in Maddie's room. But, no. I haven't met Nora.

 

[GleenXstudio]

Yes, that's what I guessed. Because later, you have the possibility to have more control over Maddie, but that will come little by little. I think you confused us, as you said "after 4 episodes" and in the last episode it doesn't happen as you said. In fact, you were still in the middle of the 2nd episode .
Anyway, I guess you will shift to Nora as soon as you meet her .

 

[BigStuffedTiger]

I'll second GleenXstudio's recommendation with respect to Nora. She's my favorite too.

Maddie can be convinced to let the MC take control, but only after the MC has earned her trust and she feels comfortable enough to let down her guard. That takes time.

 

[Deleted member 1571716]

Yes, that's what I guessed. Because later, you have the possibility to have more control over Maddie, but that will come little by little. I think you confused us, as you said "after 4 episodes" and in the last episode it doesn't happen as you said. In fact, you were still in the middle of the 2nd episode .
Anyway, I guess you will shift to Nora as soon as you meet her .

I was going by the build number. So I said ep 4. Anyway, not sure when we meet Nora, so, I'll hold off till next up date, restart and stay away from the others.

 

[GleenXstudio]

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[Netgear]

Where can i order this nextgen Xray camera on your website ?
What the heck, i'll ask this too, can i order a full size Nora doll on your website ?

 

[GleenXstudio]

What the heck, i'll ask this too, can i order a full size Nora doll on your website ?

That's not impossible to do, but to find such a cute one, it will cost a ruby at least, if you know what I mean

Otherwise, temptation is lurking around. Will you be able to resist?

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[sevendustkorn1008]

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What is that? Are those previews for the next update (like a flashback)? Or are they just random renders?

 

[SamualHand]

I have to agree to a lot of the others, this is a really tempting game with another story, not this same story you see over and over and over again.
Keep up the good work, I really enjoy it and might even write a review.