DiscardedUnion

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Given the style and that this i's made in renpy I wanted to ask if you could make an Android version, IIRC you only have to click in Android in the renpy menu and it'll be automatically done.
I'll definitely look at doing this. It won't be quite that simple as I have custom UI elements that will probably require some changes on mobile to make things work nicely, but yeah, this should be possible.

Playing through this. It's cool that the lack of art didn't stop you from actually... making the game.
I've seen developments just grind to a stop because their artist flaked, or whatever.

I'm doing a dom-route at the moment, but... it feels a little weird.
In the first couple of days of blackmail, i'd stepped on her, felt her up and spanked her butt, but then after that it switches to giving her make-up and trying to convince her to wear a skirt.

I dunno, feels like the game is focusing way more on 'become more girly' than I was expected.
Given how the first couple of days went, I'm a bit surprised that there haven't been any other attempts to pressure her into sexual favours, or something.

Edit: Also, what dictates whether the Gym subplot pops up or not? In one playthrough, I never got the option to call on her, which causes her to mention it.
In another, I did.
Yeah, the obedience route is probably the least well-served by the shared content, and as such is the most hurt by the focus on that shared content recently. When I have limited development time, any updates that touch route specific content either do nothing or players not on that route, or provide a very small amount of content to each route, so that's been on the back burner for initial development.

I'll definitely be looking to expand the obedience content more, and will probably try to give it some specific extra love soon.

The gym thread is specific to the arousal route, occurring roughly at the same time as the obedience route's toy thread and the relationship route's date thread.

Im not a text guy so id like some art to accompany the good premise.
I understand this, and it is definitely part of the plan to get artwork in ASAP. Please keep your eye on Sculptor and hopefully it won't be long before some artwork is in and you can give it a go.
 

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I'll definitely look at doing this. It won't be quite that simple as I have custom UI elements that will probably require some changes on mobile to make things work nicely, but yeah, this should be possible.



Yeah, the obedience route is probably the least well-served by the shared content, and as such is the most hurt by the focus on that shared content recently. When I have limited development time, any updates that touch route specific content either do nothing or players not on that route, or provide a very small amount of content to each route, so that's been on the back burner for initial development.

I'll definitely be looking to expand the obedience content more, and will probably try to give it some specific extra love soon.

The gym thread is specific to the arousal route, occurring roughly at the same time as the obedience route's toy thread and the relationship route's date thread.



I understand this, and it is definitely part of the plan to get artwork in ASAP. Please keep your eye on Sculptor and hopefully it won't be long before some artwork is in and you can give it a go.
Dont get me wrong, i will play it regardless but i wont be having sexy times with it until it has art. Game stands on its own regardless of porn.
 
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Yeah, the obedience route is probably the least well-served by the shared content, and as such is the most hurt by the focus on that shared content recently. When I have limited development time, any updates that touch route specific content either do nothing or players not on that route, or provide a very small amount of content to each route, so that's been on the back burner for initial development.

I'll definitely be looking to expand the obedience content more, and will probably try to give it some specific extra love soon.

The gym thread is specific to the arousal route, occurring roughly at the same time as the obedience route's toy thread and the relationship route's date thread.
Hmm. The Dom and Date routes feel about the same, tbh. Dom lets you buy her some toys, date lets you go on a date. Neither leads to a sex-scene, as far as I can tell.
Well, that said, I couldn't try all the options in the date-scene, because you only have the opportunity to work your job for one weekend. After you've spent money on the girl's uniform, the job-scenes stop coming even if you wait for the weekend.
If you don't have enough money left to pay for the whole date at that point, then you have no way of getting more.
Also, your cash drains day by day if you buy food.
No idea what happens if you skip lunch too much. Maybe a bad-end where you starve? lol.

The Sex-route has you walking in on her masturbating again (which feels like maybe it could be a universal event, since it's a mirror to the scene that started the whole game off) and it also has the gym event.
I mean, it's fitting that the sex-route has the most sex, obviously, but it does leave the other two feeling a little barren, at the moment.
Obviously it's still a work in progress though, so that's going to go away in time.
 
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DiscardedUnion

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Hmm. The Dom and Date routes feel about the same, tbh. Dom lets you buy her some toys, date lets you go on a date. Neither leads to a sex-scene, as far as I can tell.
Well, that said, I couldn't try all the options in the date-scene, because you only have the opportunity to work your job for one weekend. After you've spent money on the girl's uniform, the job-scenes stop coming even if you wait for the weekend.
If you don't have enough money left to pay for the whole date at that point, then you have no way of getting more.
Also, your cash drains day by day if you buy food.
No idea what happens if you skip lunch too much. Maybe a bad-end where you starve? lol.

The Sex-route has you walking in on her masturbating again (which feels like maybe it could be a universal event, since it's a mirror to the scene that started the whole game off) and it also has the gym event.
I mean, it's fitting that the sex-route has the most sex, obviously, but it does leave the other two feeling a little barren, at the moment.
Obviously it's still a work in progress though, so that's going to go away in time.
Yeah, the fact that you can get soft-locked with money is a bug due to the nature of the game being unfinished, and my plan is to add a repeatable event to work a shift in the next release to make sure that can't happen.

Right now the lunch events are just filler, I intend to flesh them out more but they basically just serve to delineate time right now. You can just skip the meals with no side-effects.

I agree with the routes being a bit uneven, and as you say, that's definitely due to the nature of the game, but it's really useful to hear how they feel as it can be hard to get distance as a writer, so thanks for the feedback.
 

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In the arousal route, day 14, after you go into the bathroom the line "Woah, déjà vu." is attributed to Sam when it should be attributed to Callum.
 

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*Pukes*
I'll take the stick figure.
Not to say that HS graphics are ugly or anything personally but.. At this point, it all feels the same, and or am just generally tired of seeing so many games use it. Of course, the first point is debatably true for 2D too but, at that point it's just preference, and as much as I prefer 2D, if it turns 3D, just please. ANYTHING that isn't HS (Or if I'm frank, Daz either tbh.)
 
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I quite enjoyed this. Didn't care so much about the missing art; the chibi is really cute (and honestly preferable to yet more samey Daz models in my eyes) and text is enough for me. It was nice to get a cute little lezdom experience, which I don't see often. Obviously this is still very early days, but if I had any constructive criticism to offer it would be two things.

First, that the build-up could probably be a bit slower before the bully becomes so eager to please. I felt like I barely had to push her at all before she accepted a total reversal of our social dynamic, and that transition might be nice to explore a bit more.

The second is a more minor thing: I picked a very feminine girl main character, so I would have really loved being able to lean on my own experience in that department to pick out clothes and make-up and such for the bully without having to ask a storekeeper or whatever. - to just be a bit more of a girly girl who enjoys playing dress-up with her new toy of her own accord. I think it's also an interesting dynamic for feminization in general for the dom to be comfortably feminine in a classic way, as it makes the process more like the sub aspiring to be more like the dom and associates such overt femininity with a sort of strength instead of it being used strictly as humiliation. Doubly so if the bully is tomboyish out of a toxic sort of "not like the other girls / girly girls are stupid" sort of way. But that second part is mostly just luxury and me thinking out loud, especially considering this can be a yaoi game if you change a few settings. The way I set up the characters just got me thinking about this stuff.

At any rate, this is good stuff so far!
 

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Not to say that HS graphics are ugly or anything personally but.. At this point, it all feels the same, and or am just generally tired of seeing so many games use it. Of course, the first point is debatably true for 2D too but, at that point it's just preference, and as much as I prefer 2D, if it turns 3D, just please. ANYTHING that isn't HS (Or if I'm frank, Daz either tbh.)
I just dont like 3d. At least those HS or DAZ stuff used so oftem.
Just look at that monstrosity and compare her with the stick figure. The stick figure is more expressive and has a design foundation that the art that will be added must match.
The 3D one doesnt looks similar and really, it looks uncanny af compared again to the 2D expression. SFM stuff is okay though, mainly the ones about asian IPs which gives so much focus on character expressions.
 
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DiscardedUnion

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I quite enjoyed this. Didn't care so much about the missing art; the chibi is really cute (and honestly preferable to yet more samey Daz models in my eyes) and text is enough for me. It was nice to get a cute little lezdom experience, which I don't see often. Obviously this is still very early days, but if I had any constructive criticism to offer it would be two things.

First, that the build-up could probably be a bit slower before the bully becomes so eager to please. I felt like I barely had to push her at all before she accepted a total reversal of our social dynamic, and that transition might be nice to explore a bit more.

The second is a more minor thing: I picked a very feminine girl main character, so I would have really loved being able to lean on my own experience in that department to pick out clothes and make-up and such for the bully without having to ask a storekeeper or whatever. - to just be a bit more of a girly girl who enjoys playing dress-up with her new toy of her own accord. I think it's also an interesting dynamic for feminization in general for the dom to be comfortably feminine in a classic way, as it makes the process more like the sub aspiring to be more like the dom and associates such overt femininity with a sort of strength instead of it being used strictly as humiliation. Doubly so if the bully is tomboyish out of a toxic sort of "not like the other girls / girly girls are stupid" sort of way. But that second part is mostly just luxury and me thinking out loud, especially considering this can be a yaoi game if you change a few settings. The way I set up the characters just got me thinking about this stuff.

At any rate, this is good stuff so far!
Thanks for the detailed feedback!

The pacing is really hard to get right while doing the rolling release setup, so my plan is to add content quite liberally and then go back and try and move things around and add new content to get the pace right later. Feedback on where the pace feels fast/slow is really useful, as it can often be hard to feel what the pace is like when you are very familiar with the content as a writer. It definitely won't be a case of all new content happening after the current set, while that has mostly been the case so far as it's a relatively new project, I'll be going back and adding things and improving things for sure.

You are pretty much on the spot that it's a matter of how much variance there is in the setting that limits how deep I can go with specific cases, and with the feminine main character case, it's definitely also harder for me given that's not a viewpoint I have much experience from. That said, I've received a surprising amount of feedback (or at least, much more than I was expecting) from people who are playing the game with that configuration, so I'd like to do a little more to cater to it when possible.
 

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then bring art inside, now its looks like garbage, but i will keep an eye on it.
 
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