Great update!
MC: I even poked you a few times, but you didn't seem to know notice.
Nora: ... Don't it hurt?(not sure if its her way of speaking or if it should be Doesn't it hurt?)
Nora: ... Any girl would be like to have...
MC: ... I wasn't able to put my... penis in passed(past?) the head.
Nora: It don't sound crazy at all(not sure if her way of speaking or if it should be doesn't sound crazy at all)
MC: *smile* (Today want(went) as well as i planned,...)
Zoe's voice is full of desperation, so you're (your) intuition about her really wanting to keep the site was right.
Doesn't his plan just leave them in the same situation, mutually assured destruction?