Well, since I don't know Japanese, there's no way to really compare the Kagura translation with the fan translation. All I can say is that both were good, and Kagura's version just gave me an excuse to replay this short, but still very brilliant game.
What I did check was the number of events... and as far as I can tell, Kagura didn't skip out or censor anything. Yes, this includes the births. I didn't run into any bugs either on 1.02. So dunno what they fixed in 1.03.
Gotta say, probably for the second time, that I like the system they have in this game way more than what they had in any of the previous ones. It makes the lewdness more than just a problem for the heroine, especially since you can farm SP points by fucking people. The penalties in combat don't seem to be as severe as they were in say, Seed of Evil.
Though granted, I only played on Normal. I have no interest in harder difficulties on my Hentai. XD
Either way, it's been a very fun ride. I can't wait to see what their next game will be like, and I hope that it'll get translated fast.