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N2 ... i recall the about in version 2 .. yeah way back huh ...... in it you state this game was gonna be short .. kinda changed your mind .. did ya ... this is true .. but i'm not bitching .... it's turned out to be an awesome game ..... the space thing kinda threw me for a minute till i finished the update ....
once again you've stayed on my top 10 games i love to play and enjoy so very much .... wish like hell my retirement would go up so i could help support some of you dev's i enjoy games from ...
thanks from ......... a fan
once again you've stayed on my top 10 games i love to play and enjoy so very much .... wish like hell my retirement would go up so i could help support some of you dev's i enjoy games from ...
thanks from ......... a fan
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Thank you sir. And yes, I change my mind a lot. This has been a whole "learning while riding a bike with everything on fire and the bike is on fire and my hair is on fire" kind of deal. So I said things sometimes thinking "oh yeah, we're so doing this!" and then find out later - well, that ain't gonna work. Going to try to start keeping my big mouth shut until I actually make things happen from now on LOL. Glad you enjoyed the first ChapterN2 ... i recall the about in version 2 .. yeah way back huh ...... in it you state this game was gonna be short .. kinda changed your mind .. did ya ... this is true .. but i'm not bitching .... it's turned out to be an awesome game ..... the space thing kinda threw me for a minute till i finished the update ....
once again you've stayed on my top 10 games i love to play and enjoy so very much .... wish like hell my retirement would go up so i could help support some of you dev's i enjoy games from ...
thanks from ......... a fan
- Oct 24, 2019
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sorry i forgot to add ... sorry to hear about all the shit you had to go thru .. glad you've made it thru ....Thank you sir. And yes, I change my mind a lot. This has been a whole "learning while riding a bike with everything on fire and the bike is on fire and my hair is on fire" kind of deal. So I said things sometimes thinking "oh yeah, we're so doing this!" and then find out later - well, that ain't gonna work. Going to try to start keeping my big mouth shut until I actually make things happen from now on LOL. Glad you enjoyed the first Chapter
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For those who don't know, and have mentioned the "space" stuff from this last update:
Lili is a character that had a brief part in Oppai Odyssey. That is my friend, cryoxxx game. I liked her so much that I asked him if he wasn't planning to write her in anymore, if I could put her in Serenity. He agreed, so here we are. So, Lili was a direct card transfer from OO to Serenity and she'll have her own story like the rest of the girls. Spoiler: She'll ascend and change, become part of the harem at some point, etc.
Unlike the rest of the characters in Serenity, I did not create Lili. That credit actually goes to Cryoxxx.
Lili is a character that had a brief part in Oppai Odyssey. That is my friend, cryoxxx game. I liked her so much that I asked him if he wasn't planning to write her in anymore, if I could put her in Serenity. He agreed, so here we are. So, Lili was a direct card transfer from OO to Serenity and she'll have her own story like the rest of the girls. Spoiler: She'll ascend and change, become part of the harem at some point, etc.
Unlike the rest of the characters in Serenity, I did not create Lili. That credit actually goes to Cryoxxx.
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that would explain why she doesn't look quite as good as the other girls ..... no offense meantFor those who don't know, and have mentioned the "space" stuff from this last update:
Lili is a character that had a brief part in Oppai Odyssey. That is my friend, cryoxxx game. I liked her so much that I asked him if he wasn't planning to write her in anymore, if I could put her in Serenity. He agreed, so here we are. So, Lili was a direct card transfer from OO to Serenity and she'll have her own story like the rest of the girls. Spoiler: She'll ascend and change, become part of the harem at some point, etc.
Unlike the rest of the characters in Serenity, I did not create Lili. That credit actually goes to Cryoxxx.
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I enjoyed the game, but if I had one criticism, it would be that there are so many characters that I never really felt like I got to know any of them beyond a surface understanding. As things currently stand, to me they feel more like tropes than people.
I think some of the issue for me was that I felt the plot and pacing was rushed, particularly in the sense that the only actual drama in the story was how the MC would prevail. As he was set up as a more or less omnipotent figure, none of the threats really posed much of a threat to begin with. In fact, I would say Camilla was a bigger threat than Demitre, which given that Demitre was the final boss isn't necessarily a good thing.
For chapter two, I'd love to see you take the time to further develop the characters less as the MCs lieutenants and more as members of his harem that he loves and cherishes. More dates, more hanging out, maybe more group activities, and less focus on the villain of the update.
When we know the MC can wave his hand and make pretty much any problem go away (and he can--I can't imagine he couldn't send Lili back to her own universe with a thought), there's not much drama in the latest big bad to come along.
I think some of the issue for me was that I felt the plot and pacing was rushed, particularly in the sense that the only actual drama in the story was how the MC would prevail. As he was set up as a more or less omnipotent figure, none of the threats really posed much of a threat to begin with. In fact, I would say Camilla was a bigger threat than Demitre, which given that Demitre was the final boss isn't necessarily a good thing.
For chapter two, I'd love to see you take the time to further develop the characters less as the MCs lieutenants and more as members of his harem that he loves and cherishes. More dates, more hanging out, maybe more group activities, and less focus on the villain of the update.
When we know the MC can wave his hand and make pretty much any problem go away (and he can--I can't imagine he couldn't send Lili back to her own universe with a thought), there's not much drama in the latest big bad to come along.
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Thanks for the feedback
Much of what you said has already been said, of course. Even by me. So believe me, I'm aware
Chapter 1 was the first project I ever did, and it almost didn't happen (that story another time). With that said, I learned a lot from doing this and from 'constructive' and 'nicely said' feedback (like yours). So thank you for being one of those people that actually provides real, usable feedback that isn't just bitching and annihilating every syllable of my game. "I like this... but I might have liked it better if...".
Chapter 2 will be definitely more focused on the girls. And yeah, there are a lot of them now. More time getting to know them, silly moments, some minor drama, more funny moments, etc... And as always, my shameless easter egg lines inspired by different movies. I am confident this next Chapter is going to be a lot better. Not that I think Chapter 1 is not good - I love my work. But I know I could have done a lot of things better, but that's the same for most any dev, right?
Anyway, thanks for stopping by and for your feedback. Keep an eye out for Chapter 2 and lets see how you like that.
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You didn't miss anything. That was my bad. Just forgot to update the gallery before I released. I'll try to get some fixes out next week.
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the games has been going great until i got to where shade first appears, i keep getting errors everytime she talks or when it shows ppl on earth talking but when you go back to the harem girls its fine
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If you are using a mod or playing the web version, I cannot help. This has been reported by others who were using a mod or playing that web version you find on sites like gamcore (and others) - I did not created that web version. The error you are getting says that Shade is not defined, which is incorrect. For some, the error was when meeting Lili. Redownload the update from here, without any mods.
I just finished Chapter 1 and I loved it.For those who don't know, and have mentioned the "space" stuff from this last update:
Lili is a character that had a brief part in Oppai Odyssey. That is my friend, cryoxxx game. I liked her so much that I asked him if he wasn't planning to write her in anymore, if I could put her in Serenity. He agreed, so here we are. So, Lili was a direct card transfer from OO to Serenity and she'll have her own story like the rest of the girls. Spoiler: She'll ascend and change, become part of the harem at some point, etc.
Unlike the rest of the characters in Serenity, I did not create Lili. That credit actually goes to Cryoxxx.
I have to say the cameo's (characters and desktop scenes) from other games was surprising. I got super excited seeing Lili show up in this. I am sad to hear we wont see anymore of her in "Oppai Odyssey", but seems like with her being added into "Serenity" we will get more of her. So I have hope for more Lili in the future.
But all in all Keep up the Great work!
Going to have to check out "Last Human" in the near future.
PS. Holy crap for a Porn game this has some banging music!
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New public devlog posted:
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Some almighty king that MC, anybody and his dog can enter his room/space and do whatever they please with him, how that bafoon even alive still (why bother with spells, if you could easily kill him)? And his neko-subjects. Are they anything aside from sex dolls (damn sexy at that tho)? I mean, if they are supposed to... well they are quite useless as a guards since, see above. And they even more useless as a fighters since the only serious threat that they could play ACTUAL role in fending of took them out in... like seconds...
And don't even let me start about as a supposedly king of all dream writers succumbs to some medicor nightmare and can't tell "dream" from "reality".
P.S.: I understand the concept of a plot necessity, but why make your MC a supposedly an overpowered and almighty to only deep him with his head in a toilet? If you make him a damn "God" then show it! Or leave him a mediocrity he is and make him proudly overcome hardships.
And don't even let me start about as a supposedly king of all dream writers succumbs to some medicor nightmare and can't tell "dream" from "reality".
P.S.: I understand the concept of a plot necessity, but why make your MC a supposedly an overpowered and almighty to only deep him with his head in a toilet? If you make him a damn "God" then show it! Or leave him a mediocrity he is and make him proudly overcome hardships.
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I have really enjoyed this one and am sad to see it end. Happy to hear there is a chapter 2. thanks for the share and thanks for finishing and not letting it die in the middle like so many others do
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