Avaron1974

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You are expecting too much of this game and developer. He has a very specific story he is going to tell and nothing is going to change that. Frank will always be nervous and pathetic, why would you expect him to change after 12 updates? What would make you think that he is going to be any different at some point in the future? Supposedly Frank wants to do the right thing but if the player does the right thing it's a game over. Of course that's different from how the game began, in the beginning if you did the perverted thing then it was game over, regardless Frank hasn't changed at all - he's still a "helpless" man who can't say no to any of his "daughters" for fear that they will leave. He will fuck them all because he's so afraid they will leave even though it is "absolutely wrong" to sexually desire them. Except for the side fuck with Beth this is a rather linear story, it could have been done as a kinetic novel. It might have been better as a kinetic novel.
First he didn't want to lose his daughters, now his reasons just don't make any sense.

Now it's all "if they tell Shannon my life is over" because a grown man having relations with legal age women is somehow wrong in this world.

Yes they are his ex wife's daughters, no that isn't illegal in any country that I know of.

The worst thing she could possibly do is say really mean words to him so a typical day in Shannon land.

And therein lies my problem now. I was accepting of people saying they enjoyed him being flaky and showing restraint etc, etc, excuses blahhhh....

Except now he's throat fucked one of them, creampied another and sleeping naked with the last one...

It no longer makes any sense ... like at all.

It's weird, it's almost like the dev has no plans at all for the MC. All the girls have gone through some sort of growth, Lilith quite drastically so, but the MC hasn't changed since 0.1 and shows no sign of it.

I won't tell people what they can and can't enjoy but as far as the main character goes it's now entered terrible writing territory.

The other characters and the story itself has left him behind. He's now holding the game back.

I did the one thing I hate doing in story based VN's this update and I skipped nearly everything with Lil after her scenes. I couldn't take his whining anymore.

Obviously it has it's fans, some people enjoy it but it started ruining the story for me. It's hard to enjoy the good characters and what's going on when I can't stand any line the main character says.

This is the first time i've ever encountered an MC that just hasn't progressed since a launch. Even if it hadn't happened before, and honestly it should have started with all that's gone on with Becks, then this update should have been a massive kick start to it but he was straight back to being an annoying cunt.

I don't get how a game can have so many great characters but the main one, the one that should be holding the game up, is one of the worst written characters i've seen in a VN. It's like 2 different people are writing it, one for the MC and one for everyone else because they don't match up.
 

Majindevil

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You are expecting too much of this game and developer. He has a very specific story he is going to tell and nothing is going to change that. Frank will always be nervous and pathetic, why would you expect him to change after 12 updates? What would make you think that he is going to be any different at some point in the future? Supposedly Frank wants to do the right thing but if the player does the right thing it's a game over. Of course that's different from how the game began, in the beginning if you did the perverted thing then it was game over, regardless Frank hasn't changed at all - he's still a "helpless" man who can't say no to any of his "daughters" for fear that they will leave. He will fuck them all because he's so afraid they will leave even though it is "absolutely wrong" to sexually desire them. Except for the side fuck with Beth this is a rather linear story, it could have been done as a kinetic novel. It might have been better as a kinetic novel.
it should had the kinetic novel tag from the start, so i had never wasted time with it...

the game started great an on i really have no idea why the mc is pathetic he for once reacts realisticly.
my problem is updete after update choices become mor and more meaningless as an excample you were able to avoide scenes with the side chars and dont perv on chars you werent interested in but the last update with the forced becca scene ugh couldnt stand her behaviour since the beginning and pushed her always away and suddenly not possible forced scenes.

took a peek in the walkthroug and seems the lithith scene is avoidable with a game over... so why the hell even give the choice?
even when in the last update in the talk becca said it depents on him what happens

i really hate it when suddenly after 11 updates all your choices become meaningless without a hint before such games should really need an kinetic novel tag from the beginning. the dev just has to say "kinetic novel all choices only change some minor scenes"
so no one is suprised.
 

Avaron1974

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i really hate it when suddenly after 11 updates all your choices become meaningless without a hint
This I don't agree with because it's given a lot of hints that everything going on was to keep them all together.

It's been made very obvious that none of the 3 main girls will ever be optional.
 

Majindevil

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This I don't agree with because it's given a lot of hints that everything going on was to keep them all together.

It's been made very obvious that none of the 3 main girls will ever be optional.
oh didnt know it is necceserry to fuck your daughters to hold the family togerther.... ahh right porn logic...

this post may contain traces of eggs, soya, nuts, gluten, fish, crustaceans and sarcasm.
 

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Decided to do a walkthrough MOD for this one. Enjoy!

Edit: Updated to v0.12


Install: Extract to "game" folder, overwrite when prompted.

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Nice update. :love: Maybe in the next version the MC could give Abby a butt massage to move her story along.

Btw. a bunch of places have 'too' where it should be 'to'.
 
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m4pII

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Great update. I really like that the plot and characters develop and move forward.
I thought Becca was crazy) But after today's update with Lilith, I'm not sure anymore)
 

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OK, I absolutely LOVE this game! The renders are great, the story is well written, the characters are unique and all have lovable psychotic quirks! My only complaint is, MY GOD, can't MC get over his Fng hangups already??? It's been, like, 10 updates and he still won't just accept that he's GOING to have a 3 girl harem with Lilly, Becca, and Abby. Just follow the plan! I was all about him being hesitant and all reluctant for a while, but
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Single Again [v0.12] - Compressed

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Cernunnos.

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I guess we're stuck with Lilith no matter what because rejecting her leads to a game over. Here's hoping she doesn't cheat on the MC like she did her previous boyfriends. That side story made me far less sympathetic to the fact that he cheated on her.
 

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OK, I absolutely LOVE this game! The renders are great, the story is well written, the characters are unique and all have lovable psychotic quirks! My only complaint is, MY GOD, can't MC get over his Fng hangups already??? It's been, like, 10 updates and he still won't just accept that he's GOING to have a 3 girl harem with Lilly, Becca, and Abby. Just follow the plan! I was all about him being hesitant and all reluctant for a while, but
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I agree!!!
"What if someone finds out...." "This is wrong..." "What'll happen if someone..." every time MC had those thought I was like stop thinking those and get over it because nothing is going to happen!! The girls Lilly and Becca are NOT your daughters or even related to you in anyway as you are no longer married to their mother and they are not minors and they want to do it with you- MC is not forcing it on them. You are not going to get in trouble or go to jail!!! Just accept it that the girls want to have harem with you..
 
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