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oh..damn..i guess i never noticed that..so many creampies so little noticing details...guess my eyes got glassyOne issue I have with your analysis - it's stated fairly early on that all 3 daughters are on the pill.
oh..damn..i guess i never noticed that..so many creampies so little noticing details...guess my eyes got glassyOne issue I have with your analysis - it's stated fairly early on that all 3 daughters are on the pill.
but birth control is not 100% effectiveOne issue I have with your analysis - it's stated fairly early on that all 3 daughters are on the pill.
Agreed, even little Rachel says it after taking her first load inside her... I do think @ThunderRob might be right on Preacher's Wife though... I can see her getting preggo, the Preacher going nuts and taking his morality policing to the next level and driving the MC and his family out of town... where they go back to Isla Paradiso and keep fucking with Rebecca and her Daughter.One issue I have with your analysis - it's stated fairly early on that all 3 daughters are on the pill.
Day 20, Rachel says "Yes, [m_name] made sure each of us got a prescription for the pill as soon as we were ready."oh..damn..i guess i never noticed that..so many creampies so little noticing details...guess my eyes got glassy![]()
Why bother with telling us they're on the pill if it's just going to fail? Better to have them not be on the pill at all.but birth control is not 100% effective
well, the brunette GF in Triangle was on the pill and she still got pregnantDay 20, Rachel says "Yes, [m_name] made sure each of us got a prescription for the pill as soon as we were ready."
Day 30, Bellay says "But you know I'm on the pill, right?"
Why bother with telling us they're on the pill if it's just going to fail? Better to have them not be on the pill at all.
and Rachael seems to me to be the kind of girl who would stop and not tell her "boyfriend"The problem with the pill is that the person has to take it.. But what if they stop?
In most VNs the pill works as a way to allow riskless creampies, similar to how pulling out never gets the girl pregnant.well, the brunette GF in Triangle was on the pill and she still got pregnant
well the MC can get a girl pregnant on a certain path in "My Hot New Roommate" even though he pulls outIn most VNs the pill works as a way to allow riskless creampies, similar to how pulling out never gets the girl pregnant.
I have no idea what Triangle is.well, the brunette GF in Triangle was on the pill and she still got pregnant
That is completely different, and would be handled by the story. "Oh, yeah, I stopped taking the pill and now I'm pregnant" is horrible writing, if you're not writing a soap opera.The problem with the pill is that the person has to take it.. But what if they stop?
Well, now I have something to do, I'm gonna check that game.well the MC can get a girl pregnant on a certain path in "My Hot New Roommate" even though he pulls out
https://f95zone.to/threads/triangle-v0-8-neverlucky.18909I have no idea what Triangle is.
I'm not saying that they would keep it a secret, just that they would be open to take the riskI have no idea what Triangle is.
That is completely different, and would be handled by the story. "Oh, yeah, I stopped taking the pill and now I'm pregnant" is horrible writing, if you're not writing a soap opera.
Foreshadowing, your clue to quality literature.
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And waxing political, this 30+ year old strip sure foreshadows the Russians hacking Hillary's email server...
Well, now I have something to do, I'm gonna check that game.
https://f95zone.to/threads/triangle-v0-8-neverlucky.18909
"Girl on the pill randomly gets pregnant" is almost always a bad writing choice. Unless your story is about her surprise pregnancy, or, as I said, you're in a soap.Triangle its a VN
Unless I was sniffing the stuff that comes off the insulation on the walls when I played that particular update I remember her saying she forgot to take the pills a couple of time and that's why she got pregnant.well, the brunette GF in Triangle was on the pill and she still got pregnant
Yes , for errorBut he seems to have deleted to post, so maybe not!![]()
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I deleted first post for error xD