Please don't play this version (if it is the test release). It's full of bugs and a couple of events are unreachable.
@Perverteer
I'm sorry to say, but I did play it. I just couldn't wait. But let me just complement you on an amazing update, even if this isn't the final version, what's here is SO good.
Regarding bugs and/or errors , I did find one, if that makes up for playing this version. I found:
The only bug I ran into was when Rachel comes to you about going out, just after Mom came and you invited her into the woods. I just went like 'IGNORE' and I think by doing that I skipped the whole part that followed. This by the way happens in both the Love And Dom versions I have.
And regarding the story:
I loved the possession ring part, for obvious reasons . I'm just curious about one thing, did you already plan on doing it that way? With the ring? Or did I manage to inspire the great Peverteer? Also the way it was presented felt very heartfelt. Of course now the relationship has to be fleshed out further and I have full confidence in your abilities.
Thank you once again.
EDIT: somehow the normal spoiler insert doesn't show up for me (or maybe even for no one) so I used the 'Inline Spoiler' insert