VN Ren'Py Slave U [v0.42] [SecondClass]

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Avaron1974

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noway1 said:
In the complete world, there is no hope for men. You cannot even make some kind of possible goal to escape that school, because everywhere it is the same.
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There is no hope for men, that's the point to it.

There is no reversal, there is no escape. The only chance is to find a gentle dom. It's a pure femdom game.

MangoMeta said:
so is this going to have actual sex?
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It will have plenty of penetration probably .... just not from the MC.

He'll be the one getting penetrated.
 
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Avaron1974 said:
It will have plenty of penetration probably .... just not from the MC.

He'll be the one getting penetrated.
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You are needlessly scaring the normies away. PiV can be femdom. PiV femdom bondage is my absolute dream - so simple, yet people prefer pegging for some reason.

A few ideas that I've written in my 5-star review.

1. There is one sentence in the inner monologue during [optional] pegging that ponders whether the main character likes femdom because he was neglected as a child. It's silly and perpetuates the stereotype. I was neither abused or neglected myself.

2. A fear that I have is that the seemingly-gentle femdom route with Mei will be too gentle, or degenerate into maledom. I hope, the habit of giving the player choices won't dry up.

3. Another fear would be forced monogamy - the hero is actively looking for a girl to defend him against other girls, but it would still be nice to have variety. (Brainstorming: avoidable capture by other girls that only strengthens the relationship, i.e., reverse NTR.)

4. I wonder how the author would deal with the issue if the girl proved out too weak to protect the hero. (Brainstorming: the hero might intentionally and covertly betray her.) I'm saying this because the issue was raised in v.0.13.

5. And lastly, don't forget about femdom magic bondage, it would be a dream come true for me to have it with these renders!

P.S. Segragation - a typo in the dining hall scene.

And are you [the author] set on the name Mei? It needlessly invokes Overwatch in my head. (My choice would be Yuka, but I'm biased.)
 
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Avaron1974 said:
There is no hope for men, that's the point to it.

There is no reversal, there is no escape. The only chance is to find a gentle dom. It's a pure femdom game.
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On second thought, I disagree. I'm not a world-class fiction writer, but an insurrection plot where the main character can join in and spy on and give his comrades out (like Hitler spied on Communists, or see Darktoz's games) could be cute.

taco7 There's something else I need to tell you. It might be an unpopular request but... if/when the hero cums, could you not centre the camera on his dick? It's a habit some pornography directors seem to have, but I never understood it. I would much prefer the girl's face captured in the frame, too.
 
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taco7

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Ianuda said:
On second thought, I disagree. I'm not a world-class fiction writer, but an insurrection plot where the main character can join in and spy on and give his comrades out (like Hitler spied on Communists, or see Darktoz's games) could be cute.

taco7 There's something else I need to tell you. It might be an unpopular request but... if/when the hero cums, could you not centre the camera on his dick? It's a habit some pornography directors seem to have, but I never understood it. I would much prefer the girl's face captured in the frame, too.
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I'll probably still keep doing the close up image, because I like it. But I'll see about adding some Quick Cuts to the women's reaction afterwards.
 
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Sounds like this is my kinds of game, as long as there isn't any torture porn and/or toilet pased fetish's in it that you can't skip (pee and defication) I should like this plenty
 
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taco7 said:
I'm not sure yet. I'm trying to have this game be my more mass appeal game, but we'll see how things go.
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Gotcha(y) If it is to attract more people, scat is not the best choice (even if you do it avoidable:confused:) and i wish you all the best with this game.
but still secretly hoping that you can add it:ROFLMAO:
 
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taco7 said:
I can definitely understand some people's desire for a more written out novel type game, but I'm personally not a fan of those. When I play a game that has a ton of story in-between scenes, I tend to just skip through the dialog. I prefer a simple story that functions as a backdrop to the scenes. So I wouldn't expect a ton of in depth story telling from my games.
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Before I start my critics: I really love the direction, this game is going. I'm also a big fan of "Second Class"!

But you asked for opinions, so...

As you wish to attract the masses I think some more story and goals would be desirable. "Second Class" was in fact better in this regard. However I agree that a lot of text is not the way to go.

For me the events come way too fast. There is no build-up of tension. There also should be more teasing before the events.

If you haven't already played I recommend playing SummerTimesSaga. Even if you're not into this type of game (I myself don't liek 2DCG, mega big boops, ridiculous big penises and so on) - the story telling is excellent and a lot of fun to play, sometimes I even did skip the sex scenes to be able to continue with the story. :D
And I think this is the main reason, DarkCookie is the most successful adult games writer on patreon, according to
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I'm dreaming of some real story like this behind the events.

Also graphical it's mostly long-shot. Think of making a movie with different camera angles. If people are speaking, focus on portraits maybe? Zoom-in to her body parts. Be more creative with the camera.
Think about a sex scene as an own story with prologue, teasing, tension-building, action, climax, ending...

My opinion is, that these points are more important than the question, if there is [fill with fetish someone doesn't like] inside the game.

I hope you understand my comments as constructive critic.
 
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bip77 said:
Before I start my critics: I really love the direction, this game is going. I'm also a big fan of "Second Class"!

But you asked for opinions, so...

As you wish to attract the masses I think some more story and goals would be desirable. "Second Class" was in fact better in this regard. However I agree that a lot of text is not the way to go.

For me the events come way too fast. There is no build-up of tension. There also should be more teasing before the events.

If you haven't already played I recommend playing SummerTimesSaga. Even if you're not into this type of game (I myself don't liek 2DCG, mega big boops, ridiculous big penises and so on) - the story telling is excellent and a lot of fun to play, sometimes I even did skip the sex scenes to be able to continue with the story. :D
And I think this is the main reason, DarkCookie is the most successful adult games writer on patreon, according to
You must be registered to see the links
.
I'm dreaming of some real story like this behind the events.

Also graphical it's mostly long-shot. Think of making a movie with different camera angles. If people are speaking, focus on portraits maybe? Zoom-in to her body parts. Be more creative with the camera.
Think about a sex scene as an own story with prologue, teasing, tension-building, action, climax, ending...

My opinion is, that these points are more important than the question, if there is [fill with fetish someone doesn't like] inside the game.

I hope you understand my comments as constructive critic.
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I'm glad you liked the game, and I want to genuinely thank you for taking the time to leave some feedback.

For sure. I do feel the scenes are a bit rushed. Honestly, there is a lot of incentive as a new creator to be pushing out new content on a regular basis. Also personally I feel bad taking people's money without having some kind of release at least every other month. I should probably try to slow down with the next release, maybe include a few less scenes, but flush the remaining ones out more.

That's good advice with the graphics. The reason I focus more on long shots is because of the animations. It's a lot of added time/effort/game-size to create multiple animations per scene. I can try and mix in some more still images though.

Even after almost a year, I'm still learning so much as I go. A lot of that is thanks to people like you taking the time to give honest feedback, so thanks again.
 
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Ianuda

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bip77 said:
Before I start my critics: I really love the direction, this game is going. I'm also a big fan of "Second Class"!
"Second Class" was in fact better in this regard. However I agree that a lot of text is not the way to go.

If you haven't already played I recommend playing SummerTimesSaga. Even if you're not into this type of game (I myself don't liek 2DCG, mega big boops, ridiculous big penises and so on) - the story telling is excellent and a lot of fun to play, sometimes I even did skip the sex scenes to be able to continue with the story. :D
And I think this is the main reason, DarkCookie is the most successful adult games writer on patreon, according to
You must be registered to see the links
.
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I might be missing something, but I think, Slave High has a far better story implemented than Second Class, let alone story potential. In the very beginning, you both can choose your reaction to the teacher, and a girl.

I played through Summertime Saga's first day - the artstyle makes me suicidal - but the beginning itself was dragging on for so long. Obviously, Slave High is only a demo at this point, but it starts out on such a strong note. Imagine an even longer exposition when you meet the bus conductor (you don't in the game, this would be my idea). Obviously, more characters need to be added, but even then there should be some spacing.
 
bip77

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Ianuda said:
I might be missing something, but I think, Slave High has a far better story implemented than Second Class, let alone story potential. In the very beginning, you both can choose your reaction to the teacher, and a girl.

I played through Summertime Saga's first day - the artstyle makes me suicidal - but the beginning itself was dragging on for so long. Obviously, Slave High is only a demo at this point, but it starts out on such a strong note. Imagine an even longer exposition when you meet the bus conductor (you don't in the game, this would be my idea). Obviously, more characters need to be added, but even then there should be some spacing.
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You shouldn't quote me incomplete putting my sentences in wrong context.

I didn't say that Second Class has the better story, but at least it has some story.

Slave High has - at least now - as much story as a porn movie, which is IMHO unfortunate because I too see the potential for great storytelling.

At the moment some random guy enters some random school and has some fun with some random teacher, some random principal, some random girls. So why should the player be interested in or care for the characters there or how and if this continues? It would be nice to have some background about the persons, before they meet each other, no? And of course I can only comment on what's already there and not, what might come in the future? If I'm just for the sex scenes I can spent my time better at Pornhub etc.

That's why I mentioned Summertime Saga, as an example for nice story telling and character development. And you can't ignore the success DarkCookie has with this, even if you don't like his style.

Maybe I could make my statements clearer?
 
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Slave High [0.13] SecondClass

Original Size Win/Linux: 721 MB
Original Size Mac: 704 MB

Compressed Size Win/Linux: 139 MB: MEGA
Compressed Size Mac: 122 MB: MEGA

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i need apk how i downloaded?
i installed this file but i don,t find the game
 
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