Good story line and entertaining so far. Nice balance between humor and drama.
Needs a proofreader but isn't anywhere near as bad as other games around here.
A couple of favorite points. The old lady ?Li?, I really enjoy all the scenes with her. They did a fantastic job of making her, well, old. Other games I've played say a character is old, or a grandmother, but use an image of a 25yr old. It's really distracting. Her scenes are really great, but that's also a kink of mine I suppose... I hope there are more.
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I think Susan has been written/developed the best so far, simply because you've shown some of her vulnerabilities which adds depth to the character. Great job.
With regards to the timing of the transitions such as when a character moves around. They did a great job. It's not long enough to be annoying and not quick enough to make them seem like they are running around....
Might be interesting to see threesome sex w MC's harem especially if I could choose which ladies such as the two Japanese girls or maybe Susan and one of them. I know somebody posted against the thought of a Susan lesbian scene, but I think it could be nice if handled correctly, maybe a soft vulnerable moment with someone. Just options to make Susan feel more 'wanted' in the 'clan'. Pregnancy seems a given since, where I am in the story, they keep talking about heirs and expanding his harem. Could be interesting.
Keep up the good work!