A few things i have criticism about, 1st of all i would say that the game really needs a proper main menu and or an introduction to the game instead of just forcing u strait into the game without knowing what's going on.
2nd the no rollback thing while u have mentioned is intentional i believe is a wrong move for a visual novel especially if there is only a limited amount of save slots like it seems there are atm
and lastly the stat building element feels like there are too few ways to actually build them up b4 the next part of the story picks up, i feel like it's just one story bit right after another (other than in certain places like the outrider cell) without any real way to improve your stats, it seems like the stats are an afterthought only put in to force the player to choose humiliating options where they wouldn't normally.
this one is just a suggestion but maybe just like how the stats pull down option that is mostly always there i think the relationship tab should always be there beside it and another one for characters that gives the player details on each character u have met based on what u currently know about them like some harem games do ie what faction they are with, what species they are and a basic description of who they are as a character for example Mother: she is the dom warden of sector A that really likes whores or something like that (and also a small picture so u know which character is which)
other than that it seems like a solid game, the idea is great (there are waaay too few branching path games out there in the porn section that i have seen) the artstyle while looking like it was made by someone just learning to draw works imo, u could of made it purely a text based game but went the extra mile and made the artwork yourself despite not being an artist and to me that speaks wonders to how dedicated u are to making the game the best it can be, now having an actual artist do the artwork wouldn't be a bad idea if u could get one to so though, all in all the character designs are pre decent and their personalities are great so keep up the great work and i hope this helps u out in any way.
Side note i myself am an artist and i would love to make some artwork for u for this game but as u have said about other artists without the incentive of payment i am pre lazy when it comes to actually doing anything surrounding my artwork because i just have so many other things to do and my artwork which is the thing i love doing the most suffers (but wouldn't if i was being paid) because of it.
Hello. Thank you for the detailed appeal, I just can't pass it by.
1. The main menu is present in the game, and the fact that it immediately throws you into the game is a bug of this version, in the following it is already fixed.
2. I will remove the rollback in the final version, which is under development and will be available already in this version for Patrons.
3. About the system. Yes, there are some problems with it, such as not knowing the characters and not being obvious about the choices. Initially, the game was conceived as a sub-dom, but the closer to the end, the more there is a feeling that people only want SUB-roots, since most do not see even half of the content in the game at all. After all, in the latest version, I will get about 45k lines of plot text, which in fact is not the smallest book.
4. I'm really not an artist, but I'm getting better every day, so I'm not going to stop. If you want to help me with art, you can write to me in the BOS and show examples of your work. Everything has already been drawn for this game, but I'm about to start the next project, so you could participate in its development