VN Unity Abandoned Star Maidens [Ch. 2 v0.2] [Banana Juice]

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∞LUST∞

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hold up!

WTF did i just played in this update? 2 min of clicking with a cliffhanger at the end and this is can be called a version? WTF?

bunche of renders in different possition.

PROBABLY the most dispointing update so far on this site. unless i didnt figure out something hidden.
 

WaveOfPig

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May 12, 2017
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Banana Juice For some reason the mac app cant be opened. Might be a permission thing, but whatever it is, it wasn't an issue with the last version.
 

secrecy

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hold up!

WTF did i just played in this update? 2 min of clicking with a cliffhanger at the end and this is can be called a version? WTF?

bunche of renders in different possition.

PROBABLY the most dispointing update so far on this site. unless i didnt figure out something hidden.
Just check this week Milf Resort update to see same level of laziness.
This seems the typical game that will not arrive to 3rd or 4th chapter. Just a good start, developer got some ideas for an erotic/porn game, knows how to create beatiful renders, but is unable to develop everything in a reasonable lapse of time and doesn´t know how to continue.
The moment I see a supposedly erotic scene with only 1(one!) render and a lot of descriptive text including things you don´t see on screen, game is dead imo.
This kind of talented for rendering people should take on equally talented writers. Otherwise these kind of projects are condemned to failure.
 

hax

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well this was short but on his patreon he said "We hope that next week we will please you with new scenes "....
 

robotsdontcry

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Mar 18, 2018
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Mac user here, I did the chmod command and that didn't help. Still doesn't work. If anyone else has pointers concerning the mac version, otherwise no problem, I'll wait for a next version.

thank you!
 
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phreadom

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Just wanted to say that my single turn-off so far is the tattoos. There are some beautiful models in this, but the tattoos just ruin it for me. :( It's like scribbling on the Mona Lisa with a crayon. It detracts from the natural beauty and, at least for an older guy like me, just makes the girls look trashy. I grew up in a culture where the only people who had tattoos were biker bitches, trashy people, criminals, etc. I understand that tattoos are much more trendy today, but I still hate them more than ever and have very bad associations with them. :( (At the very least the women I see with them tend to be attention whores or not very intelligent still... definitely not the high class girls from good homes.) Another user noted the same thing.

I do not personally see a problem with the tattoo that are shown, once again, and not suggesting that any are removed, just would not be that common at the the age of the girls, with any sort of decent home life.
That's basically saying what I said... girls with tattoos like that, for us older guys, tend to be associated with trashy women. (bad home lives, troubled teens, etc...)

Of course it's your game and you can do what you want... but since some others here have commented about the tattoos, while not asking that you remove them... I figured I'd add my two cents to say that, unlike the developers themselves, I'm very much *not* a fan of them and wish we'd been allowed to enjoy the natural beauty of the girls' skin.

I'm particularly disappointed in the girl on the left in the leotard in the last preview image. Not only does having a tattoo ruin an otherwise incredible looking girl, but the tattoo itself even looks bad. :(

Sorry for all the complaining. I was just quite disappointed to see them on models that otherwise looked so good in a game that sounded quite interesting.
 
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roy anderson

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Mac user here, I did the chmod command and that didn't help. Still doesn't work. If anyone else has pointers concerning the mac version, otherwise no problem, I'll wait for a next version.

thank you!
chmod +x Star\ Maidens\ Chapter\ 2\ v.0.1\ mac.app/Contents/MacOS/*
 

F.Lord

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The game looks really nice, but I can't continue because the text turns into Russian after I enter the class.
 

Bolero

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Well I had no problems with the game. It has some hot chicks with good renders and the story has potential, definitely will be following this.
 
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qyx455

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Banana Juice same issue here....i've attached a copy of the output log
Ok, so... tried again <just for shits and giggles...> Got the same results... It's official, Juice... I give up... I would like to say though, the renders look great! Nice model choices :) I do wish you the best of luck with this project! :) Be well, Nanerneko! :)
 

Banana Juice

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Just check this week Milf Resort update to see same level of laziness.
This seems the typical game that will not arrive to 3rd or 4th chapter. Just a good start, developer got some ideas for an erotic/porn game, knows how to create beatiful renders, but is unable to develop everything in a reasonable lapse of time and doesn´t know how to continue.
The moment I see a supposedly erotic scene with only 1(one!) render and a lot of descriptive text including things you don´t see on screen, game is dead imo.
This kind of talented for rendering people should take on equally talented writers. Otherwise these kind of projects are condemned to failure.
About our laziness.
We are working on the job. On average, 10 hours a day, 5 days a week. We come in the evening and spend another 2-3 hours on the game. Not every day. We do not work on the game at the weekend, as everyone should sometimes relax. What do you need to do to release at least such a short update? Let's see. Four art (3-6 hours each), three backgrounds(1-2 hours each), a new character (6 hours to create an image), 3 portraits for a new character (3 hours), 15 pages of script (12 hours), scene coding (this includes the search for sounds, music, portraits, particle effects, translation, testing - a total of 20 hours), builds for 4 platforms (1 hour), placement on file sharing (30 minutes). Let's count: we've got about 50 hours of clean working time. We published the previous update on July 18. Since then, it has been 15 working days (as I mentioned we rest on weekends, as we have families, friends, and we can not sit for work 7 days a week). So to release this update we had to spend 50 / 15 = 3.33 hours a day. Every day.
About being condemned to failure.
Let's read what we say about deadlines on our patreon page.
"How often will updates be released? It will take us 1 to 3 months to create each Chapter."
The previous Chapter was released on July 8. But we spent 2 weeks creating new features that players asked for (fast forward, rollback, gallery, etc.) We tried to implement as soon as possible. After such a hard crunch, we rested for about a week. So we started to develop a new Chapter on July 29. We released this update 2 weeks later.
Yes, it's short, but we promised to release an update by that date, and we didn't want to break that promise.
Total passed 15 days from the declared 3 months. That's about 15 percent. You also need to consider that we published not all of that had to do with that time, but only fully finished material.
P.S. This is a forum where people share their games absolutely for free. If you support someone financially, and that someone doesn't keep their promises, breaks all deadlines, you can write to him on his patreon page or anywhere else where you support him. There is no point in splashing out your negativity on the developers here. Especially if these developers have not done anything wrong. Peace to all!
 

WaveOfPig

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Just wanted to say that my single turn-off so far is the tattoos. There are some beautiful models in this, but the tattoos just ruin it for me. :( It's like scribbling on the Mona Lisa with a crayon. It detracts from the natural beauty and, at least for an older guy like me, just makes the girls look trashy. I grew up in a culture where the only people who had tattoos were biker bitches, trashy people, criminals, etc. I understand that tattoos are much more trendy today, but I still hate them more than ever and have very bad associations with them. :( (At the very least the women I see with them tend to be attention whores or not very intelligent still... definitely not the high class girls from good homes.) Another user noted the same thing.



That's basically saying what I said... girls with tattoos like that, for us older guys, tend to be associated with trashy women. (bad home lives, troubled teens, etc...)

Of course it's your game and you can do what you want... but since some others here have commented about the tattoos, while not asking that you remove them... I figured I'd add my two cents to say that, unlike the developers themselves, I'm very much *not* a fan of them and wish we'd been allowed to enjoy the natural beauty of the girls' skin.

I'm particularly disappointed in the girl on the left in the leotard in the last preview image. Not only does having a tattoo ruin an otherwise incredible looking girl, but the tattoo itself even looks bad. :(

Sorry for all the complaining. I was just quite disappointed to see them on models that otherwise looked so good in a game that sounded quite interesting.
I like tattoos. There are plenty of great models in other games, as well as this one, that don't have any. It's only fair that every once in a while we get a character or two with tattoos to respect the wishes of others such as myself.
 
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