Do what better, exactly? Spend 2 extra seconds making it so the text is more descriptive and engaging than literally "Story Scene #2...Story Scene #3"? Or, spend 5 extra minutes in HoneySelect to make sure the MC doesn't look like a skinny potato goblin struggling with puberty? Which of these particularly
low bars am I being asked to overcome here? Lol.
Interesting reaction to criticism, though. Makes me wonder if you actually modeled the MC after yourself.
It wasn't "proper" criticism? How convenient. You actually think pointing out how overly technical it is to label your scenes as "Story Scene #x" as the flavor text isn't the literal definition of criticism? How are you a mod on this forum? You can insult me all you want, but you're forgetting that your game is yet another Engrish game in a sea of thousands of KK/HS games on these forums as well.
Look this is pretty awkward, I didn't expect to be right on the money with the MC being your personal self insert. All the more reason for me not to play your game, though. And if you read the thread, I'm not the only one who reacted this way to his looks. I didn't know he was you. My bad.
He's uh... super handsome.