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VN Ren'Py STWA: Unbroken [Pt. 7] [STWAdev]

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Tremonia

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I guess he is a gay or something but it does not matter, he is just being fun-blocker all the episode, always being grumpy, sitting on the side alone or disappearing completely, he acts like he is on the edge of unexpected suicide. That is a big shame for me, I like when there are normal male characters in VNs but McNaab seems to be losing that position.
He's having trauma from his experiences in war. I expect him being "not normal".
 

MF_DOOM

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Still, he supposed to be one of the main characters and I got feeling that random ring girl got more attention than him. No one gives a shit about him tbh which is weird and sad.
It's expected in a porn VN not to care about male side characters. I understand what you are saying but it is what it is.
 

MF_DOOM

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Depends on particular VN. There are some raw porn ones and the ones more focused on the story where porn is a nice add-on. I would say that STWAdev is somewhere in the middle with aspirations more to the second one with his overall good writing and talent for characters creation and that is why McNaab character development makes me little sad.
Just be thankful Valentine's best friend is not the typical "idiot douchebag" like in most shitty VN's(you know, like being a dik and leap of faith).
 

Tysonator2000

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There's few visual novels where I actually like most of the characters, to the point that choosing a love interest is a hard choice. Unbroken is definitely one of those games. Even though they're completely different as far as personalities go, I gravitate more to Vi and Elspeth. I'm sure them being redheads doesn't have any bearing on that decision. :whistle:

Also I'm pretty sure that McNabb wants to slobber on Valetine's mcknob. :KEK:
 

RoryTate

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Still, he supposed to be one of the main characters and I got feeling that random ring girl got more attention than him. No one gives a shit about him tbh which is weird and sad.
That's...not at all my experience. I wrote in my initial review of pt 6 that I "really enjoyed the way MC was able to support and get closer with Amrit and McNab". I think this update really did a lot for him, especially in the way he was so chill about MC not being aware of his likely sexual preference for guys. I appreciated that there was no drama or narcissistic proclamation following the awkward moment, and he was just: "Ah, you'll figure it out." Add to that the close bonds of celebrating Amrit's victory and her upcoming shot at the title, the way MC and McNab immediately started working together and discussing how to evolve their tiny and no longer sufficient training room to the next level, and even just seeing him make progress on his parallel path to MC in regaining his former glory/status in the MMA world. There's a lot that part 6 established in his storyline that worked for me. Maybe it didn't work for everyone, but objectively speaking, he definitely got much more attention than some random side character in the story.

Even though they're completely different as far as personalities go, I gravitate more to Vi and Elspeth. I'm sure them being redheads doesn't have any bearing on that decision. :whistle:
Besides being redheads, those two share something else in common. Another...ahem..."natural" asset that makes them quite attractive I think.
 
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RoryTate

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don't you mean assets?
Yes. Yes I do. A pair of assets to be quite clear. Two very large, round, firm...er, eyes. :oops: Yes, Vi and Els both have very beautiful eyes. In fact, I could gaze at their eyes all day long. What else did you think I was talking about?
 
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MF_DOOM

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That bugfixed version is not released so far. At least on patreon and on the devs discord I have not found a post/link for that. Probably still in developement.
I think it was, I visited his Patreon and if you click on the download link it downloads a version called 6.3.
I think he updated the download links and forgot to make a post about it.
 

cxx

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Anyway, it is almost disability how big Els's breasts are... Shame, not a fan of big "assets" but mostly I'm ok with that. Here on the other hand it is too much and girls with smaller breasts but still big for the real life standards are insecure about them, wtf... Are there any chances to STWAdev consider lowering median a bit?
yes but will that happen is diff. thing, might introduce some a/b-cup char but that's it. author had more variety.
 

RoryTate

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Here on the other hand it is too much and girls with smaller breasts but still big for the real life standards are insecure about them, wtf
Well, I see it more as the fact Amrit and Vi have no experience being with a man sexually. Plus, Vi is very self-conscious about the scars on her face and elsewhere. So it makes sense that they would both feel intimidated by Elspeth. Honestly, I think it's more unrealistic to expect that women wouldn't compare themselves to the most beautiful woman in the room. Now I wouldn't go so far as to say that is always the case, but it is at least extremely common behaviour in most social situations.

And we'll just have to disagree on the idea that Elspeth's breasts are "too much". The "slim and stacked' body type does exist in real life, even if it is somewhat uncommon. I know you didn't mean it in this manner, but what you say here does remind me uncomfortably of the new sexual puritanism that seems to pop up from time to time in various conversations nowadays – it is often initially presented as just minor concerns about "safety", "representation", and such, but at its core it is fueled by an intense underlying hostility towards healthy human sexuality – and I hope this kind of thinking doesn't make make any headway within the world of adult VNs. Els is just perfect and fine exactly the way she is. She doesn't have to represent every woman, because no single character can represent an entire group of people. In the end, every woman is an individual (apologies for going off on a bit of a tangent here in my response to your comment).
 
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Tysonator2000

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That's...not at all my experience. I wrote in my initial review of pt 6 that I "really enjoyed the way MC was able to support and get closer with Amrit and McNab". I think this update really did a lot for him, especially in the way he was so chill about MC not being aware of his likely sexual preference for guys. I appreciated that there was no drama or narcissistic proclamation following the awkward moment, and he was just: "Ah, you'll figure it out." Add to that the close bonds of celebrating Amrit's victory and her upcoming shot at the title, the way MC and McNab immediately started working together and discussing how to evolve their tiny and no longer sufficient training room to the next level, and even just seeing him make progress on his parallel path to MC in regaining his former glory/status in the MMA world. There's a lot that part 6 established in his storyline that worked for me. Maybe it didn't work for everyone, but objectively speaking, he definitely got much more attention than some random side character in the story.



Besides being redheads, those two share something else in common. Another...ahem..."natural" asset that makes them quite attractive I think.
Yes such beautiful eyes I could get lost in. :KEK:
 

Ilhares

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She's this game's Aoife
That would certainly explain why I have zero interest in her. Aoife was easily in the bottom 3 for me.
So McNab has the gay?
Was that not obvious before? His reaction to suggesting he have a go with Elspeth sealed it for me. Not agreeing would have been fine, but he actually reacted in the negative. The only thing he wants is his own slice of Valentine.
 

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That would certainly explain why I have zero interest in her. Aoife was easily in the bottom 3 for me.

Was that not obvious before? His reaction to suggesting he have a go with Elspeth sealed it for me. Not agreeing would have been fine, but he actually reacted in the negative. The only thing he wants is his own slice of Valentine.
It could be because they grew up together so he can see Els as his sibling. After reading from the beginning paying more attention to him yeah, I think he's gay. At first I though it was just banter between friends, but his aversion to females this update sealed the deal.
 

BGRW2020

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Has there been any addition to the tags, ie: harem, or anything else - seems funny to me that Els didn't seem to mind the MC having a go with others
 
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