- Jan 27, 2018
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This is a fun short game so far. Your english is a bit..... off..... in a few places, but still understandable. I have played and enjoyed far worse written games in the past. Keep it fun and and with a refreshing different art style and I personally will forgive a lot of minor issues. All in all I would say you are doing a great job.
As far as reducing the writting in the future - that is up to you as the artist. I think the current writing is fine, but if it is a problem for you and prevents you from doing what motivates you to create more - than don't do it. It is perfectly possible to tell a story with pictures alone (but that is probably harder than throwing in a bit of writing).
Keep up the good work. I look forward to future updates.
As far as reducing the writting in the future - that is up to you as the artist. I think the current writing is fine, but if it is a problem for you and prevents you from doing what motivates you to create more - than don't do it. It is perfectly possible to tell a story with pictures alone (but that is probably harder than throwing in a bit of writing).
Keep up the good work. I look forward to future updates.