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About your made-up scenario with Eve, it sounds naive and formulaic, but I like it. It's better than nothing.
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Definitely agree here then. The constant "milking" posts are one thing that really grinds my gears here. They are so repetitive and annoying.
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Eve's psychological trauma for life and do you want them to meet again? I think there should be fight
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Hey, I spent like 10 minutes on that post (not 10 months), cut me some slackEve's psychological trauma for life and do you want them to meet again? I think there should be fight
.But seriously, you are correct, both of my scenarios are shit (that's why you never go with first draft). I just wanted to add something more descriptive for the girls that got pretty much nothing out of the chapter.
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No, they're just ordinary. Nothing shitty. Although the moment where Eve was supposed to kiss MC is very naive.
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And what about a player on every paths? They're not entirely exclusive yet, you can pursue multiple girls at once even though you will have to choose one to end with later on. Furthermore it would have taken more months to do it
If this one is something, it is defo polished.
Perfect UI design, even the usually hated by me freeplay scenes played smoothly.
As mentioned - it suffers from the scope size, there's just tooooooooo many girls.
I believe it would shine with something like 3+2 setup. Cut away whole car lady arc, tinder and the strip club that I feel like is a part of a different game that glitched into this one somehow.
Renders are top notch, great "first stage" ones especially, you don't see that often. And I'd say reasonably mature writing, excluding dirty talk. Whenever there's dialogue during spicy scenes, it feels like I am reading those subtitles for deaf people in movies.
Perfect UI design, even the usually hated by me freeplay scenes played smoothly.
As mentioned - it suffers from the scope size, there's just tooooooooo many girls.
I believe it would shine with something like 3+2 setup. Cut away whole car lady arc, tinder and the strip club that I feel like is a part of a different game that glitched into this one somehow.
Renders are top notch, great "first stage" ones especially, you don't see that often. And I'd say reasonably mature writing, excluding dirty talk. Whenever there's dialogue during spicy scenes, it feels like I am reading those subtitles for deaf people in movies.
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hmm, i believe it would be better with something like 4+2 setup - they need to cut away all (useless) girls arcs, and to leave jzst cat, cass, tinder milf, and hot barista. beseides them helen and miller deserves their arc/s too.
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Yes, I was aware of that issue when writing it
. The easiest way out would be to simply let the player decide (like in the case of Sophie/Mia), but I don't really like that. So maybe let the people leave at various points with the player having the option to join would be better. Another quick idea is to base it on previous interactions (spending time with girls, being nice to them and so on). This would artificially increase the playtime since to get the other scenes players would have to replay the previous day to make the correct choices. Not sure if the community would like that.And obviously, it would require a different allocation of resources (since this would be planned way before rendering even started), maybe more time, maybe less renders somewhere else... I'm not trying to write the game for the devs, I don't even know if I like half of the stuff I came up with
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I don't think artificially increase the playtime would be a benefit, especially if it necessitated many playthroughs and therefore saves to keep track of in order to pick the "right" choice. Those are always red flags to me that a game that it is more interested in wasting my time than entertaining me.
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You make me laugh
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I refrained from commenting when chapter 5 came out, it had a lot of content, but I kinda disliked the direction.
Almost all the girls were throwing themselves at MC! It was overload really. Especially Jenni, what was that about? Felt like easy mode. Perhaps a competition between Sophie and Bree might be plausible, but this early?
Don't get me wrong, I like that there's a chance to get closer to all the girls in the game (except Helen), but all at once in one chapter?! Too much.
Both the interactions with Sophie and Bree, of course, had their moments, but like I said, the timing.
And Eve...man she's starting to come alive, naughty girl, a bit unexpected specifics, but I'll roll with it.
Now Mia... I love her..."reaction" towards the end of chapter 5 is both sad and really hot at same time, you know?
She has to up her game to stay relevant? That nature of it was very unexpected and so hot.
Which brings me to chapter 6...shorter affair, but with big revelations.
I can like that.
Mike and Helen hitting it off...had to happen I guess, odd one's out find each other
Mia gets to shine more, that's always a plus, its getting hard (pun intended) not to go for her, she's so adorable and fine.
One thing annoyed me though...when you talk with Mike about the girls you saw at the club, you can't mention Hannah?!
Easily the cutest and most interesting of the 3(bartender...maybe, don't see that one going anywhere though), need more Hannah, she might give Mia some competition
So yeah, this game is still on my top 3, but some times...less is more?
Not all of the girls have to throw themselves at the MC in the same chapter, that should be reliant on player choices.
And again...more Hannah!
Almost all the girls were throwing themselves at MC! It was overload really. Especially Jenni, what was that about? Felt like easy mode. Perhaps a competition between Sophie and Bree might be plausible, but this early?
Don't get me wrong, I like that there's a chance to get closer to all the girls in the game (except Helen), but all at once in one chapter?! Too much.
Both the interactions with Sophie and Bree, of course, had their moments, but like I said, the timing.
And Eve...man she's starting to come alive, naughty girl, a bit unexpected specifics, but I'll roll with it.
Now Mia... I love her..."reaction" towards the end of chapter 5 is both sad and really hot at same time, you know?
She has to up her game to stay relevant? That nature of it was very unexpected and so hot.
Which brings me to chapter 6...shorter affair, but with big revelations.
I can like that.
Mike and Helen hitting it off...had to happen I guess, odd one's out find each other
Mia gets to shine more, that's always a plus, its getting hard (pun intended) not to go for her, she's so adorable and fine.
One thing annoyed me though...when you talk with Mike about the girls you saw at the club, you can't mention Hannah?!
Easily the cutest and most interesting of the 3(bartender...maybe, don't see that one going anywhere though), need more Hannah, she might give Mia some competition
So yeah, this game is still on my top 3, but some times...less is more?
Not all of the girls have to throw themselves at the MC in the same chapter, that should be reliant on player choices.
And again...more Hannah!
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Side girl syndrome, she doesn't matter to the story so anything can happen at any time, it's to distract you from how little is happening in the actual story, but it worked in that update because a lot happened.
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Super short chapter but I look forward to more Mia.
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This is the exact opposite of what I want.