This is really a great game. Eve as a character and her model are superb, one of my favorites in any VN.
There are a lot of paths with differences both major and subtle that I didn't appreciate on an initial playthrough, so there is a lot of content that is really easy to miss. Perhaps my sole gripe would be that some of these 'key' decisions that lock/unlock these paths are not really discernible based on narrative context or available information. A hint or warning would be appreciated for some of these as a quality-of-life improvement so that I'm not reliant on walkthroughs (which I generally try to avoid).
I also wish there was a path for Eve/Cassie love that didn't involve the phone call from Jane. There's a 'corruption' undertone to Jane's call that, IMO, unnecessarily detracts from the throuple relationship. I'd prefer if the Jane call supports a harem ending involving Kelly, but could otherwise be avoided for the throuple ending.