Goddammit, I was trying to continue playing and finish chapter 1 but reading latest posts discouraged me so...
Melody is definitely the best one. DMD I stopped on the first update from chapter 2 I have the feeling the same will happen with SL. This Sveltana or whatever and Nicole stuff, If I want to watch this kind of stuff, I'll turn on the TV and watch some brazilian soap operas, there are channels 24/7 with that.
The writing in Melody is definitely better even if not the best, I actually played and got some of the endings. I can't stand playing DMD for some reason.
Maybe it's just me but when I see a game from this guy, I stay clear. The writing is completely sterile and uninteresting. I really tried with Melody but for someone in her age range, she was very dry and boring to read. There's very little personality that comes through in many of his characters.
Yeah also the writing sometimes feels robotic(?), especially when the character explain something. Honestly, I'm here cause I like the childhood friend/sister's look (please let me be shallow here I'm not like this irl I swear

) and I figured most people are here cause of incest not the writing. I hate (how they write) the mc so much I put the game on hold.