RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.45] [Fujino]

[kinglionheart]

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Timestop is unnecessary. Complete concealment can make Kirito not know already.

I want to see Kirito have to cover Asuna to see the battle harassment. If Kirito don't we see Asuna clothes damage. Kirito must unknowing (or knowing) help Inoda have fun with Asuna.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

The question isn't even more cgs or less its about how fast we get them. And most likely the slowburn would probably lead to more cgs in total since the game would take longer.

Also im kinda curious how kicking out hebishima would really work because from the way things were going I was going to assume it would've been like inoda gets asuna,mom,liz and hebishma gets suguha,sinon,alice(with maybe some of them getting the good old public toilet treatment). Maybe we'd get a full Inoda harem?

Alice was, at least at first glance, clearly being set up to be a separate story from Hebishima's or Asuna/Inoda, though: Her, Kirito, and Klein were setup to be investigating that porn/prostitution ring that affected both VR and IRL, so in my eyes either Klein was gonna get some or they would fuck-up and Alice would end up dragged into the prostitution ring herself, but at least from the setup in the game so far she didn't seem like it would really have her meet Hebishima.

And well, I wouldn't mind us getting Full Inoda Harem honestly, as long as that let me see a Suguha+Asuna threesome, but I also think it could work in its favor. Like, I see someone complaining Hebishima should stay because they want Inoda to fully focus on Asuna, but IMO him getting Suguha (And Shino too eventually as she was related to Hebishima) just would naturally hurry up Asuna 'succumbing' again, if she starts seeing him fucking literally every single girl she knows/around her except her, and the girls can be used to more easily set up scenarios for her and Inoda to be left alone, like him having them partner up with Kirito during a Quest or distract him IRL/in VR (As I would imagine was the plan for Liz) without causing things to be suspicious as they would be if it was her mom doing something, given they interact with Kirito every day anyway (Also, it could probably allow for more harassment battle shenanigans if there were more of them, like Inoda fingering Asuna while 2 of the other girls "cover" her without Kirito realizing, or even outright fuck her while they're fighting some loud monster and the other 2 girls use that as an excuse to make loud noises/shout that cover up the sounds of Inoda fucking Asuna).

Also, given how SAO is NOT actually a Harem series despite all the accusations against it, seeing the ugly NTR fatso getting a real Harem Ending with its girls would be kinda like a sorta poetic ending for a game of it, lol.

 

[MeepMoop123]

Probably because the whole of Ep1 was a build up to the end, and Ep2 started without really paying out for that build up. We didn't want a timeskip, nor did anyone want Asu/Ino's relationship to reset. We wanted Ep2 to start with a day of Inoda molesting Asuna around the map on their date, and then a drawn out PoV of the fucking scene. We wanted Ep2 to pick up where Ep1 left off.

Hard disagree, the end of Part 1 and the beginning of Part 2 are a huge payoff for what Part 1 was building towards.
The reset was implemented BECAUSE people where upset that there wasn't any more buildup and Part 1 just ended in sex.
It's more that people are really impatient but having Asuna now just be a cumdump for the rest of the story would have made making a "Part 2" absolutly pointless.

 

[Rubyrosesilver22]

Probably because the whole of Ep1 was a build up to the end, and Ep2 started without really paying out for that build up. We didn't want a timeskip, nor did anyone want Asu/Ino's relationship to reset. We wanted Ep2 to start with a day of Inoda molesting Asuna around the map on their date, and then a drawn out PoV of the fucking scene. We wanted Ep2 to pick up where Ep1 left off.

You know I asked the creator is still going to do pov and he said yes that was from the last update but I’m interested that he decided to ask about Hebishima is possible we get an ending we’re inoda gets a harem with a slow burn because that would be good that would mean a lot of hidden sprite sex scenes

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

You know I asked the creator is still going to do pov and he said yes that was from the last update but I’m interested that he decided to ask about Hebishima is possible we get an ending we’re inoda gets a harem with a slow burn because that would be good that would mean a lot of hidden sprite sex scenes

Also, something people should consider, whether Hebishima stays or not, Suguha and Shino's storyline IS gonna happen regardless, the difference is that Fujino will have one less character to write and center a whole story around (Hebishima "NTR-ing" them and his own issues/requests with Kirito), so instead those could be further dedicated to Inoda's story and his goal of making Asuna's his too. Inoda getting them won't really "reduce" his time focusing on Asuna as some feared, it will actually allow for time that was gonna be dedicated to Hebishima fucking them in the background as its own storyline anyway to instead be dedicated to Inoda turning them into tools to further advance his goal for Asuna, so getting rid of Hebishima would in fact increase the amount of focus in Inoda's storyline and goals, rather than reduce them XP

 

[kinglionheart]

One fun way to get rid of Hebishima. One of his "girlfriends" gifts him a knife in the stomach. Then he gets isekaied off to a future spin-off game where he gets a spear and develops into a lolicon and beastiality.

 

[Olerme]

Also, something people should consider, whether Hebishima stays or not, Suguha and Shino's storyline IS gonna happen regardless, the difference is that Fujino will have one less character to write and center a whole story around (Hebishima "NTR-ing" them and his own issues/requests with Kirito), so instead those could be further dedicated to Inoda's story and his goal of making Asuna's his too. Inoda getting them won't really "reduce" his time focusing on Asuna as some feared, it will actually allow for time that was gonna be dedicated to Hebishima fucking them in the background as its own storyline anyway to instead be dedicated to Inoda turning them into tools to further advance his goal for Asuna, so getting rid of Hebishima would in fact increase the amount of focus in Inoda's storyline and goals, rather than reduce them XP

Also it would probably also make it so those people who complained about suguhas story line not being that compelling(me) are a bit more satisfied. It also lets the suspicion meter be used for more than just asuna.
The only real problems I see is how hebishima gets written out and how having a harem or trying to build one effects inoda because as much as I like him fucking Kyoko(asunas mom), it did kinda betray his loser personality.
Basically what I’m saying is vote for slow burn ntr without Hebishima.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Also it would probably also make it so those people who complained about suguhas story line not being that compelling(me) are a bit more satisfied. It also lets the suspicion meter be used for more than just asuna.
The only real problems I see is how hebishima gets written out and how having a harem or trying to build one effects inoda because as much as I like him fucking Kyoko(asunas mom), it did kinda betray his loser personality.
Basically what I’m saying is vote for slow burn ntr without Hebishima.

Pretty much, yes, this way Suguha's storyline is no longer a "distraction", as those who didn't care for it saw it as, it instead becomes just another cog in the big goal of Inoda eventually turning Asuna into his #1 slut. This honestly feels like the best of both worlds for those like me who liked (Prefered over Asuna even) Suguha's scenes and those who didn't want the Hebishima storyline to be a distraction from the Inoda&Asuna main one (The fact that I didn't like Hebishima myself because of how Sugu would inevitably end under his influence and that I also really wanted to see a Suguha x Asuna threesome is just an extra for me).

Those were the options I also did choose, because yeah, I mean, to be fair it COULD be hurried, because when you get down to it the entirety of this game's "plot" is based off everyone acting OOC and/or stupid for it to happen at all, the actual SAO characters would never fall for even half of what fucks them over in here and is all for the sake of NTR, but at least when it goes slow burn it feels more realistic and plot-moved than your average 20 page SAO NTR doujin does. Inoda technically discovered he was a sex god by fucking Asuna in-game, he's your average NTR loser that has never had sex but has a massive dick and is a pro at using it the first time enough to make anyone forget about their husband/boyfriend/love interest already, hell, despite being blackmailed into it the videos of Asuna's mom in the blog already show he's apparently fucking her better than any of her fuckboys did, and he literally fucked Asuna silly to the point she fainted the rainy night when they did, and that with him using a condom (And we all know the Hentai rule of the girl's pleasure going up for like a hundred when no condom is used, especially in NTR, lol). So him being able to subdue the other girls with his dick wouldn't be too farfetched honestly, especially as none of them have an actual boyfriend like Asuna and are mostly suffering from Kirito not paying attention to her (Hell, Suguha already became a low-key sex-addict who just hasn't fully lost her actual personality just yet, thanks to Hebishima).

As for "how to deal with Hebishima", that honestly would be surprisingly easy regardless of wht Fujino decides...like, the only reason he's getting away with what he does is because he's being protected by NTR Guy logic, where authorities don't exist, nobody is smart enough to report them to them, etc. If Inoda finds out about him fucking Sugu and then tells Kirito about it, they could use Kirito super-hacker skills ton just expose his entire collection of videos and other incriminating evidence he no doubt has on his phone and PC to the police and he would be fucked for life (After all we know Fujino at least kept Kirito being able to do such things in this story despite making him a chronic idiot, when he had him nuke the anonymous school forum from Part 1).

 

[Olerme]

Pretty much, yes, this way Suguha's storyline is no longer a "distraction", as those who didn't care for it saw it as, it instead becomes just another cog in the big goal of Inoda eventually turning Asuna into his #1 slut. This honestly feels like the best of both worlds for those like me who liked (Prefered over Asuna even) Suguha's scenes and those who didn't want the Hebishima storyline to be a distraction from the Inoda&Asuna main one (The fact that I didn't like Hebishima myself because of how Sugu would inevitably end under his influence and that I also really wanted to see a Suguha x Asuna threesome is just an extra for me).

Those were the options I also did choose, because yeah, I mean, to be fair it COULD be hurried, because when you get down to it the entirety of this game's "plot" is based off everyone acting OOC and/or stupid for it to happen at all, the actual SAO characters would never fall for even half of what fucks them over in here and is all for the sake of NTR, but at least when it goes slow burn it feels more realistic and plot-moved than your average 20 page SAO NTR doujin does. Inoda technically discovered he was a sex god by fucking Asuna in-game, he's your average NTR loser that has never had sex but has a massive dick and is a pro at using it the first time enough to make anyone forget about their husband/boyfriend/love interest already, hell, despite being blackmailed into it the videos of Asuna's mom in the blog already show he's apparently fucking her better than any of her fuckboys did, and he literally fucked Asuna silly to the point she fainted the rainy night when they did, and that with him using a condom (And we all know the Hentai rule of the girl's pleasure going up for like a hundred when no condom is used, especially in NTR, lol). So him being able to subdue the other girls with his dick wouldn't be too farfetched honestly, especially as none of them have an actual boyfriend like Asuna and are mostly suffering from Kirito not paying attention to her (Hell, Suguha already became a low-key sex-addict who just hasn't fully lost her actual personality just yet, thanks to Hebishima).

As for "how to deal with Hebishima", that honestly would be surprisingly easy regardless of wht Fujino decides...like, the only reason he's getting away with what he does is because he's being protected by NTR Guy logic, where authorities don't exist, nobody is smart enough to report them to them, etc. If Inoda finds out about him fucking Sugu and then tells Kirito about it, they could use Kirito super-hacker skills ton just expose his entire collection of videos and other incriminating evidence he no doubt has on his phone and PC to the police and he would be fucked for life (After all we know Fujino at least kept Kirito being able to do such things in this story despite making him a chronic idiot, when he had him nuke the anonymous school forum from Part 1).

yeah I agree with you agreeing with me.
also could you come up with an ntr scenario that the sao characters would actually fall for. I have had ideas about doing my own game at some point and would like to here what you think would work.

 

[Kilometer Immorales]

Probably because the whole of Ep1 was a build up to the end, and Ep2 started without really paying out for that build up. We didn't want a timeskip, nor did anyone want Asu/Ino's relationship to reset. We wanted Ep2 to start with a day of Inoda molesting Asuna around the map on their date, and then a drawn out PoV of the fucking scene. We wanted Ep2 to pick up where Ep1 left off.

I mean....its not a complete reset. It makes sense within the context of the story, she is avoiding him cause she feels guilty but thats not gonna last for long. As for wanting a proper flashback.....ya I expected more. But who knows, we might get one later from Inoda's perspective or something.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

yeah I agree with you agreeing with me.
also could you come up with an ntr scenario that the sao characters would actually fall for. I have had ideas about doing my own game at some point and would like to here what you think would work.

LOL, that may be asking for too much...see, the inhering issue with most NTR plots is that they would never work at all with the actual characters from the series they are from, be it because the characters wouldn't be that stupid, because they use unrealistic plots, because they have the characters be OOC, etc. Hell, like 95% of SAO's NTR/rape doujins use plots or 'logic' that Canon completely invalidates, be it because VR doesn't work like the doujin artists think it does or has countless restrictions that prevent such things from happening, or because ironically despite the seething hate most people have for him Kirito canonically not only is good at sex but is almost too much for a girl to handle (Because the author is obsessed with his main ship so much he literally made a collection of sidestories expanding upon their honeymoon, and while there is nothing explicit there's countless implied scenes that are borderline teasing Hentai honestly).

A "NTR plot the characters would fall for" almost never would come up because it would require the characters in question to not have their "anime character personalities", they would need to be more like real people who fall for such things or that hesitates/has doubts rather than the perfect everything-overcoming love anime characters have in most series except those that are specifically romantic comedies/dramas or overly realistic. SAO is firmly of the former type though, KiriSuna's love is so absurdly unrealistic no NTR plot should realistically be able to break them apart ever, so honestly I would just give up in wanting something like that and just write your game as you want it to be, really XD I myself don't even particularly like NTR really, and even like the SAO cast and Kirito a lot, but the only good Hentai of the series is 99% of the time NTR so here I am, lol (Helps that the quality of Fujino's games is quite great honestly, even with how many NTR stereotypes he uses he somehow makes them work in a very fun way).

Ironically, the most 'possible' NTR of SAO to happen wouldn't be everyone and their grandmothers stealing Asuna and/or the other girls like most doujins do, it would most likely be the non-Asuna girls stealing Kirito away through rape or underhanded means themselves (Hell, Suguha literally has the strength of a national-level kendoka and lives literally in the next room, she would have), but that would also imply they're all OOC and not the ultimate best friends of Asuna who are content with swallowing their feelings as long as those two are happy (Outside Alice, that is...and she practically had that part of her character excised and toned down in the next arc because the KiriSuna fans were all bitching about it too much, funnily enough). And aside from that, practically nobody ever does or writes/cares for Reverse NTR of SAO, I think I only ever saw one doujin along those lines, which was Liz drugging Kirito and having sex with him until he forgot about Asuna, almost everyone is so into the usual "the girls must be fucked/raped/stolen by some random"-NTR that they don't realize for anyone who isn't Asuna it would be way more NTR to rape Kirito and steal him from her rather than being fucked by other men because they not only do not have an actual relationship with Kirito in the series but even actively support him and Asuna together regardless of what they feel/felt XD

 

[kinglionheart]

I mean....its not a complete reset. It makes sense within the context of the story, she is avoiding him cause she feels guilty but thats not gonna last for long. As for wanting a proper flashback.....ya I expected more. But who knows, we might get one later from Inoda's perspective or something.

We all have to get past the stormy night. For whatever reason Fujino made the stormy night the way it is and most people don't like it. Instead of wanting him to go back to fix it, let us wish him to make better future things like:
- A more exciting battle system.
- A more coherent story where all the SAO girls are involved.
- A interesting way to view all POVs
- A branching storyline where our choices make a difference.
- And of course hotter sex scenes.

Let us be excited for the future of this great game instead of complaining about the past.

 

[yemdomo]

We all have to get past the stormy night. For whatever reason Fujino made the stormy night the way it is and most people don't like it. Instead of wanting him to go back to fix it, let us wish him to make better future things like:
- A more exciting battle system.
- A more coherent story where all the SAO girls are involved.
- A interesting way to view all POVs
- A branching storyline where our choices make a difference.
- And of course hotter sex scenes.

Let us be excited for the future of this great game instead of complaining about the past.

Honestly one of the better things I've read in this thread. Just let the man cook.

 

[MeepMoop123]

We all have to get past the stormy night. For whatever reason Fujino made the stormy night the way it is and most people don't like it. Instead of wanting him to go back to fix it, let us wish him to make better future things like:
- A more exciting battle system.
- A more coherent story where all the SAO girls are involved.
- A interesting way to view all POVs
- A branching storyline where our choices make a difference.
- And of course hotter sex scenes.

Let us be excited for the future of this great game instead of complaining about the past.

I fully agree with you.
Honestly there is nothing to "fix" he already transformed something that people where so angry at they where screaming how disappointing it all is into a genuinly interesting continuation of the story that people still speculate about.
But due to the fact he had to move and that he remade all the maps didn't give him a lot of time to make CGs, which now in turn makes people want "faster progression with more CGs".
It is honestly a bit annoying that people are not looking at this 0.1 as an 0.1 and rather as an ending, just give it a couple of updates.

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

I fully agree with you.
Honestly there is nothing to "fix" he already transformed something that people where so angry at they where screaming how disappointing it all is into a genuinly interesting continuation of the story that people still speculate about.
But due to the fact he had to move and that he remade all the maps didn't give him a lot of time to make CGs, which now in turn makes people want "faster progression with more CGs".
It is honestly a bit annoying that people are not looking at this 0.1 as an 0.1 and rather as an ending, just give it a couple of updates.

People will be people at the end of the day, sadly, hell, I wouldn't be surprise if quite a few of the people around now have no idea or never bothered to look deeply into why he had to "vanish" for a couple of months, so they feel extra-entitled to being disappointed at a literal 0.1 update being so "lacking" in their eyes. I agree with you all that for the circumstances he was under and how he set up the ending this was a great start, and as exciting as I may be at the possibility of altering a certain development of the story I wanted with this new poll, I still would prefer if Fujino did it at his usual pace and however he thought it was better rather than rushing it to create more sex scenes (Hence why my vote to get rid of Hebishima was paired with the game being better as a slow-burn).

In the end, whatever happens, it's better to let the creator go at their own pace, especially one who literally left his country and changed his whole lifestyle to be able to continue doing this...he could just have taken the "easier" way and dropped doing H-content entirely but he did the opposite and craziest option instead, so that alone gets Fujino all of my respect, he's a true dedicated dude.

 

[EnterYourNameHere]

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Nah, he have already a powerful ability, the invisibility. He can fuck her while she is with Kirito.

 

[erfqwef]

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SAO is an online game. You cannot put it on pause

 

[unevenlove0]

Since this is Part 2 v0.1, is there a part 1 that's completed?

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Since this is Part 2 v0.1, is there a part 1 that's completed?

Yeah, it's on the very first post too, check it again and you should see it.

 

[LordFrz]

Since this is Part 2 v0.1, is there a part 1 that's completed?

Yea, download is on the first post.