Ren'Py Abandoned Sylphine [v.024] [Glacerose]

[Deleted member 331233]

hmm, try it a little...but honestly not my cup of tea so far.
the renders are great and so, but the characters are to oversubscribed for my liking.
it's an alpha and i hope for a little polish in this direction.

I really liked Sylphia Island, this was one of my favorites.
i hope sylphine comes very close to that with time...

Oh no! I'm sorry to hear you aren't enjoying it.
Could you elaborate on what you mean by oversubscribed? So I can know what's not working for you

 

[tormented]

alright so far not a bad start to a game. characters are beautiful and they each have their own personalities. only downside about it is that you can finish the demo/alpha build within roughly 30-40mins not sure if I missed anything if there is any secrets in the game or not. but off to a good start. cant wait for future updates

 

[DeeCanon]

i loved the HS version, really hope you stick with it

 

[Deleted member 331233]

i loved the HS version, really hope you stick with it

With how fun Daz is and the amazing reception everyone has given me it's impossible to not stick with it ❤

 

[Deleted member 331233]

alright so far not a bad start to a game. characters are beautiful and they each have their own personalities. only downside about it is that you can finish the demo/alpha build within roughly 30-40mins not sure if I missed anything if there is any secrets in the game or not. but off to a good start. cant wait for future updates

The 6 story events and the repeatables in the girls bedrooms are all for now . I'm glad you liked what's there and sorry there wasn't more, I planned my first release to have more content but the leak caught me off guard. I hope you enjoy the future (and very soon) updates!

 

[DeeCanon]

With how fun Daz is and the amazing reception everyone has given me it's impossible to not stick with it ❤

glad to hear it

 

[Canade]

in advance. I'll play it after some more development. Requesting the inclusion of some ass angles for future H-scenes in advance, as well.

 

[Quartz]

This looks amazing, really looking forward to try this one. Just one question, since it says so in the description, but not any more on the Genre-Spoiler: will there be Harem in this? I just have a really hard time deciding which one I like best...

 

[DA22]

Renders are great, game has still got the warmth from original start, maybe let MC grow up a little bit, he is supposed to be over 18 so he should have dated and kissed before if not more. Only thing that might be something to look at, it makes sense Alex is only available evenings, but a bit much all events are now only available at the evenings. Try to spread those a bit more over morning and afternoons for the others, so you also have time to get some relation points with Alex besides events or make her available for mornings at least.

 

[tormented]

The 6 story events and the repeatables in the girls bedrooms are all for now . I'm glad you liked what's there and sorry there wasn't more, I planned my first release to have more content but the leak caught me off guard. I hope you enjoy the future (and very soon) updates!

yes it's a good game so far. as for the leak I am sorry I had no idea that happened. but I am looking forward to the final release, wish you luck with it in the future!

 

[Omnikaiser]

Visually it's great. Really really great. Can't wait to see more of it.

My only "complain" would be the dialogs. Maybe that's just me but I feel a bit bored about it.
I can't really put my finger on the problem, if it's the style or if it feels like it's dragging a bit.
I don't mean the characters must go straight to the point and the game be a porn slideshow. I like them to have real relationships and all for sure.
Maybe (again, to me, at least) the characters are a bit "pals" too much ? (that's hard to describe to be honest) or like the conversation is not going forward fast enough and the dialogs somehow give you a "okay I got it" feeling.

Hope you won't take it bad. The game really look awesome and look forward to play it.

 

[matschbirne]

Oh no! I'm sorry to hear you aren't enjoying it.
Could you elaborate on what you mean by oversubscribed? So I can know what's not working for you

well...
celeste is celeste...it's bitchy as in SI, that's ok.
lillian is like the gamer girl as in SI, thats ok
gracie the nature lover, it's ok...so far so good

alex is a little to much pampering the mc, more like in SI, it's not my thing
serra, well serra has fertile imagination...it hurts to read much as i'd like to

it's my opinion so far for my first try, maybe in 2-3updates it make *pling* and the girls find a way to my heart
could also be the memory of SI be, that tarnishes my gaming experience *sorry*

 

[Deleted member 331233]

well...
celeste is celeste...it's bitchy as in SI, that's ok.
lillian is like the gamer girl as in SI, thats ok
gracie the nature lover, it's ok...so far so good

alex is a little to much pampering the mc, more like in SI, it's not my thing
serra, well serra has fertile imagination...it hurts to read much as i'd like to

it's my opinion so far for my first try, maybe in 2-3updates it make *pling* and the girls find a way to my heart
could also be the memory of SI be, that tarnishes my gaming experience *sorry*

Understandable. That may be because the first 2 events of the characters are meant solely to give the new players a baseline of what to expect and what the character unlocks. E.g, the first event shows personality, the second shows what you'll gain by talking to them, in Alexs case you'll meet Willow and unlock her offices, in Gracie's you'll meet Lexi/Sophie and unlock the bistro. Events further down will have deeper interactions because I won't need to 'set the stage' so to speak of each characters storyline

 

[Deleted member 331233]

Visually it's great. Really really great. Can't wait to see more of it.

My only "complain" would be the dialogs. Maybe that's just me but I feel a bit bored about it.
I can't really put my finger on the problem, if it's the style or if it feels like it's dragging a bit.
I don't mean the characters must go straight to the point and the game be a porn slideshow. I like them to have real relationships and all for sure.
Maybe (again, to me, at least) the characters are a bit "pals" too much ? (that's hard to describe to be honest) or like the conversation is not going forward fast enough and the dialogs somehow give you a "okay I got it" feeling.

Hope you won't take it bad. The game really look awesome and look forward to play it.

Oh I don't take it bad at all! I love getting criticism it definitely helps me improve. If you'll read my comment above this maybe it'll explain why they're so basic and slow in the beginning. To give new players a baseline of each characters story. I'll definitely take this into consideration though and try to spice it up a bit.

 

[Pilmou]

It's great. I'm sorry you had to experience a leak.

 

[Deleted member 331233]

It's great. I'm sorry you had to experience a leak.

It's okay. Wonderful people like you have been leaving so many nice comments that it's worth it

 

[landrin]

Super start, amazing looking renders, nice Story.
Thanks for this, waiting for more

 

[matschbirne]

Understandable. That may be because the first 2 events of the characters are meant solely to give the new players a baseline of what to expect and what the character unlocks. E.g, the first event shows personality, the second shows what you'll gain by talking to them, in Alexs case you'll meet Willow and unlock her offices, in Gracie's you'll meet Lexi/Sophie and unlock the bistro. Events further down will have deeper interactions because I won't need to 'set the stage' so to speak of each characters storyline

ok, understandable, i mean to memorized on SI U make a rework from the beginning and that work's fine for me(and others,maybe) because the characters have been retained in their personality.

this is a complete new game, and so far from the comments i read, good work Glace
I'm looking forward to the new experience (in 2-3updates)

 

[callmemaximous]

great looking renders. will keep an eye on this one

 

[Deleted member 331233]

great looking renders. will keep an eye on this one

Thank you!