VN Ren'Py Taking Advantage [v0.04] [SSHGAMES]

[MrJay]

Three

At least some little logic would be nive to have...but we get sloopy second wife imstead and cuck alpha mc

And i must say that i have some share in games here and not everyone is as dumb and base on believing on not having sex for years of marrinage and three kids with diferent ages as this master piece... When we dont see it it doesnt mean that is not exist u know...but maybe brother was drunk every day in 18+21ears? And just did not fucked her, cause i believe

some ewas even sophisticated

Sorry, I got a headache just trying to decipher what you "wrote".

 

[OWSam000]

View attachment 2634956 ..such a large brigade of girls will not be fucked until 2050

Too many girls. Will the mc cuck his sons?

 

[SshGames]

No idea if the dev reads these forums, but in case they do:

I really like this game, it's a little bit unpolished but it has a ton of potential and is already really enjoyable in its own right, this just means it could go even further if this keeps up!

The only real issue I see for now is that there seems to be an almost bigger focus on flashbacks than events happening in the current timeline. I get why, because of how the story is set up, but there's still a lot of leeway and I think there are risks with doing too many flashbacks. The problem with flashbacks is they will never feel as rewarding as something going on in the main timeline. It's even more of an issue here because the game has introduced or hinted as so many different characters so it will feel extra unrewarding being stuck in the past doing stuff that is essentially "old news" when we could be meeting all these new interesting characters and develop our relationships with them in a timeline where it feels much more rewarding.

That being said, I'm not saying stop doing flashbacks altogether, I think with how the story is set up they become pretty necessary. But there should be a lot of careful thought put into how much development time and "screen time" is put into the flashbacks, these scenes should probably be as short as they can be while still holding the same information and only happen when very, very necessary. Most of the time from the players view should be spent in the "real" timeline.

The flashback needs to be added to show back story of characters, but still I'll try to balance them.

Too many girls. Will the mc cuck his sons?

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[masterdc1976]

great update , love the game!

 

[Sonico]

Too many girls. Will the mc cuck his sons?

Everything seems to indicate that yes. Even grandsons, if the opportunity arises in the future.

 

[Radagastt]

SshGames nice game.
Hope u keep working on it
One question...will there be pregnancy content with daugt*rs as well ??
And also will there be pregnant sex ??

 

[pepiteaux12]

thx

 

[quiboune]

Decided to give this update a shot to check if the dev had improved the writing since the last update, both on old scenes and on the new ones. Didn't. It's all the same trash. Not only does that make the scenes bad, it actively makes development worse, as more images need to be rendered to fit the story.
I'm just criticizing because I'm extremely disappointed as I see great potential in this game. It could have an extremely hot story with incredible scenes, like the breastfeeding one, but the writing is so trash that it's all fine at best.

 

[damien_sensei]

This pure slugfest of repeating the same shit for 10 mins straight needs to stop.... i get that the dev is doing this to make the update seem longer, but all it did was made me skip through text when i read "I Love you" again for the thousandth time

 

[cooties69]

I used an old save but didn't have that problem.

However game is still incredibly short, especially if you skip parts you've already seen. No reason to not just start a new game.

I fixed it. Originally I was over wrighting the old game files. I got it working by just making a whole new folder.

 

[michael1984]

So yeah all fun and good times at the brothers home

But when are we going back to the MC own home

Also the story doesnt seem to progres alot caus of all the back story stuff

So it feels like we still stuck at the start point

 

[_Fabi_]

Thx

 

[Margon27]

German translation of v0.02 available
Deutsche Übersetzung von v0.02 veröffentlicht.
LINK: Taking Advantage - German translation/Deutsch-Übersetzung

 

[truten]

Nice one

 

[4bcb-af8b-08aba12cb28a]

and what's with the "18 y/old" youngest acting like she's 5 and doesn't know about sex?

Or "hello, I have some decent sized tits but somehow both have never had nor heard of a period."

I get some things are lost in translation on these things, but come on.

I guess it's supposed to be cute for female characters to be ignorant morons?

Also "you're on your period so I'm going to fingerbang you" is going to look like a murder scene.

There's a lot to lol at clicking through this.

 

[lucifer2430]

Hello, could you help me translate it into Spanish?

 

[≋T≋h≋e≋H≋u≋n≋t≋e≋r≋]

Looking forward to the next update are there any progress so far?

 

[Froan21]

definitely on my list. can't wait for the updates

 

[KhaiFirst]

Like it! Keep it up!! and dont mind waiting 3-5month for longer update..

 

[T00mmer]

First and foremost, nice work so far; wonderful mix of kinks (for me at least). I would suggest working on the dialog to make it more "realistic". Don't use love too much and build up conversations in a more subtle way. Also, please don't use the default text boxes, they make lots of VNs look cheap. I know, everyone is a critic nowadays. Best of luck with your work.