FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!!!
ejem!. i mean... dear DEV if you can read this CONSIDER!! the following.
check and double check your typo horrors (see what i did there?) specially on the spanish writing.
a few examples:
when you say "oh" ("oh") is a expression of surprise mostly or to remark someting, it works the same in english or spanish
ex; oh, really?/oh, i didnt know that/oh ¿en serio?/ ¡oh, no lo sabia!.
but when you say "o" ("or") is used for comparison of one thing from another.
ex; one way or anoter/ choose me or choose him/ de una forma o la otra/elegime a mi o elegilo a el.
when you say "hay" ("there is") is to express that there is something, could be a object or something to do. (the contrary would be "no hay" ("there i´snt")
ex; there is enough of that/ there is something to do/ HAY suficiente de eso/ HAY algo que hacer.
NOW! when you say "ahi" ("there") you are pointing to something, wich could be anything.
ex; is there!/ there i go!/ ¡esta AHI!/ ¡AHI voy yo!
AND WHEN YOU SAY ejem!... when you say "ay" ("ouch") is a expression of pain.
ex; ouch! i hit my toe/ ouch!, im the diccionary of the royal academy of spanish language and somebody is butt-fucking me real hard...probably the writer
of a erotic game.
¡ay! me pegue en el dedo del pie/ ¡ay!, soy el diccionario de la real academia española y alguien me esta follando realmente duro por el culo... probablemente
el escritor de un juego erotico.
im not a expert on spanish or language, but those errors cannot be tolerated in any work, (and do not dare to use the stupidity of the MC because that is not a valid escuse)
if i write this, is because this errors above, apear from the very beggining.
good luck with your work, and i hope you get very far.
Tl;DR version: the typos on this games are anoying.
ejem!. i mean... dear DEV if you can read this CONSIDER!! the following.
check and double check your typo horrors (see what i did there?) specially on the spanish writing.
a few examples:
when you say "oh" ("oh") is a expression of surprise mostly or to remark someting, it works the same in english or spanish
ex; oh, really?/oh, i didnt know that/oh ¿en serio?/ ¡oh, no lo sabia!.
but when you say "o" ("or") is used for comparison of one thing from another.
ex; one way or anoter/ choose me or choose him/ de una forma o la otra/elegime a mi o elegilo a el.
when you say "hay" ("there is") is to express that there is something, could be a object or something to do. (the contrary would be "no hay" ("there i´snt")
ex; there is enough of that/ there is something to do/ HAY suficiente de eso/ HAY algo que hacer.
NOW! when you say "ahi" ("there") you are pointing to something, wich could be anything.
ex; is there!/ there i go!/ ¡esta AHI!/ ¡AHI voy yo!
AND WHEN YOU SAY ejem!... when you say "ay" ("ouch") is a expression of pain.
ex; ouch! i hit my toe/ ouch!, im the diccionary of the royal academy of spanish language and somebody is butt-fucking me real hard...probably the writer
of a erotic game.
¡ay! me pegue en el dedo del pie/ ¡ay!, soy el diccionario de la real academia española y alguien me esta follando realmente duro por el culo... probablemente
el escritor de un juego erotico.
im not a expert on spanish or language, but those errors cannot be tolerated in any work, (and do not dare to use the stupidity of the MC because that is not a valid escuse)
if i write this, is because this errors above, apear from the very beggining.
good luck with your work, and i hope you get very far.
Tl;DR version: the typos on this games are anoying.