VN Ren'Py Onhold Tales of Unity [v0.11] [Stronkboi]

[Karnewarrior]

I see that Geurilla Gobbo in your avatar, don't think I don't.

Are we about to see Chu Girlvera in the flesh?

 

[Stronkboi]

I see that Geurilla Gobbo in your avatar, don't think I don't.

Are we about to see Chu Girlvera in the flesh?

Oh the art is from the Fancy MateDolce that I can never thank enough for his amazing work

(He also holds all the fancy commie references)

 

[Zeldinor]

The uploader's account seem to be banned, I got really scared, I thought it was mine.

I'll get you a link PC : Mega

MAC : Mega

ANDROID : Mega

Thanks. Did get one of the others to work; interesting game so far, not that I'm super far in yet.

 

[Pentha]

Oh the art is from the Fancy MateDolce that I can never thank enough for his amazing work

(He also holds all the fancy commie references)

do you already know you keep misspelling planes as plans in Chapter 2?

 

[Stronkboi]

do you already know you keep misspelling planes as plans in Chapter 2?

Fuck it, now we sayin Jack Nicholson instead of planes

 

[Karnewarrior]

do you already know you keep misspelling planes as plans in Chapter 2?

Local Frenchman full of plans, shortstack goblins, and crazy elf chicks
More news at 11

 

[Raf-Raf]

Hail dev, May I ask what's the progress on the next update or what to expect on that one?

 

[Stronkboi]

Hail dev, May I ask what's the progress on the next update or what to expect on that one?

I've been facing a lot of stress due to my relationship with my wife coming abrubtly to an end.

I've lost a full week of work because of that, that said I'll post an update soon publicly here and on Patreon.

I'm aiming for early March for the public release of 0.9 !

 

[Raf-Raf]

I've been facing a lot of stress due to my relationship with my wife coming abrubtly to an end.

I've lost a full week of work because of that, that said I'll post an update soon publicly here and on Patreon.

I'm aiming for early March for the public release of 0.9 !

Oof, Hope it gets better soon.

 

[DogManSalad]

I've been facing a lot of stress due to my relationship with my wife coming abrubtly to an end.

I've lost a full week of work because of that, that said I'll post an update soon publicly here and on Patreon.

I'm aiming for early March for the public release of 0.9 !

Fuck, man, sorry to hear that. Don't kill yourself with additional stress, better a delay than a burnout.

 

[Stronkboi]

Oof, Hope it gets better soon.

Fuck, man, sorry to hear that. Don't kill yourself with additional stress, better a delay than a burnout.

No worries, you know sometimes shit happens, gotta keep the eyes on the prize !

And my prize right now is finally getting back into a schedule because now I realise that I started being late on schedule since I started dating lmao !

 

[Raf-Raf]

And my prize right now is finally getting back into a schedule because now I realise that I started being late on schedule since I started dating lmao !

Indeed, only virtual characters gets to have a date, the real ones don't!!!
Life is cruel...
Singles for life

 

[Pentha]

No worries, you know sometimes shit happens, gotta keep the eyes on the prize !

And my prize right now is finally getting back into a schedule because now I realise that I started being late on schedule since I started dating lmao !

stay strong frenchboi

 

[JMccovery]

And my prize right now is finally getting back into a schedule because now I realise that I started being late on schedule since I started dating lmao !

Girls ain't nothin but trouble (holy hell I just made myself feel ancient).

 

[Raf-Raf]

Girls ain't nothin but trouble (holy hell I just made myself feel ancient).

WREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE- Change girls to dates!!!

 

[Skeltom]

The writing seems incredibly simple to me. Also the fade to black used for transitions in the scenes breaks immersion and makes them seem like a slideshow rather than an event.

 

[Stronkboi]

The writing seems incredibly simple to me. Also the fade to black used for transitions in the scenes breaks immersion and makes them seem like a slideshow rather than an event.

In early stages I only knew fade to transition so I edited fade to be less obnixious, and now I use dissolutions.

As for my writing, it's purely subjective some will think that it's awfully basic others will think that it's amazing.

I think of my game as an Original one, with an original story if anything.
IF I handled those "Original themes" well, that relies on the player.

 

[Skeltom]

In early stages I only knew fade to transition so I edited fade to be less obnixious, and now I use dissolutions.

As for my writing, it's purely subjective some will think that it's awfully basic others will think that it's amazing.

I think of my game as an Original one, with an original story if anything.
IF I handled those "Original themes" well, that relies on the player.

It's not so much the theme as it is the pacing of the plot and emotions of the girls, you are there for one day and Chumee is all but throwing herself at you and Elise somehow knows all the secretes of the war and is in love with you so much that she can't stand to lose you, there is no buildup.

I wasn't trying to insult the game but it's lacking pretty heavily in that department imo.

 

[PrimeGuy]

It's not so much the theme as it is the pacing of the plot and emotions of the girls, you are there for one day and Chumee is all but throwing herself at you and Elise somehow knows all the secretes of the war and is in love with you so much that she can't stand to lose you, there is no buildup.

I wasn't trying to insult the game but it's lacking pretty heavily in that department imo.

Honestly there aren't a lot of adult games where the buildup to love is realistic. You'd either have to montage long periods of time, or make the game super long. A lot of players aren't willing to deal with that.

 

[Walnutt]

Yeah it's a side effect of the genre. You have to have the buildup be written almost to perfection or else everyone will complain about it just dragging out