Game could really do with someone proof reading, a lot of weird word choices and grammar errors, typos, missing closing brackets etc.
the light-headed one : (what does that mean? light-headed usually means dizzy, it can mean ditsy but no one showed they were ditsy or dumb. Their skin tone is roughly the same color.)
The invite them over for lunch text goes outside the text box.
licking game also goes off text box
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Art is good, the plot curves keep you on your toes. Also the small face changes are nicely done.
UI, colors are fine until you try to overwrite/load a save then you can't read the yes/no
Allowing text box opacity change would be nice.
The options menu having a scroll bar on the far right could probably be removed by shrinking the text 1 font size.
The random black bar in the back of the menu area.
Names not standing out that well in game.
Personally not a fan of the font.
When allowing player to change relations and name people. It would be nice to show their Default Name prior to it changing. Otherwise if player's leave it empty they might think it will be blank.
With the "Friends" the recommended names should probably all have an S at the end to tell the player it is for multiples
Character names are a bit high on the text box so they slightly go outside of it.
The borrowed anime backgrounds kind of look off against the character aesthetic.
Tasting game MC cut off is weird that he stops prior to top of screen
Would have been nice if tasting game kept the other items somewhere on screen, like a table or on the bed/floor
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Decent game so far.
