I was really happy with the new reworked prologue. But I also ran into and agree with
Impregnator_Erectux about the dialogue inconsistencies.
All the landlady in the dialogue text is also not necessary I believe. Most VN’s have this unfortunate problem, because no one calls their landlady “landlady” in conversations or when addressing them, they just call them by their name. For me personally it really ruins the immersion when that happens.
Another personal pet peeve is that a lot of VN’s are incest and just turn the father and mother into landlord and landlady to avoid censorship. But the way the sentences are constructed, they only work if the terms mother and father are used and landlady just simply doesn’t fit into the sentence. This again breaks the immersion for me, because pure full incest isn’t really something I enjoy in these games. I prefer the unrelated step-mom or sister but not the full blood related family stuff. So I hope that in the following releases there is still a place for the landlady angle. I am interested in the rest of the story.
With the patreon being removed is there already a new place where updates and release dates will be posted?
I gave her one of my special custom unique names that I invented for extra hot characters. For me, the fairy girl is the real prize in this game. 
