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Wow nice one . Is there any chance something like this with Isabel.
That is still a part of her, though buried deep below lots of baggage.Sadly the lovely Luna before kidnapping only exists in dreams now
Well the MC did get her to wear a dress and heels just by asking so ur probably rightThat is still a part of her, though buried deep below lots of baggage.
MC might be able to tickle some of this back to the surface.
I think the person who wrote the characters and built this world in his imagination has a better idea of what his game is actually about. You can be sure about thatThe dev needs to change the "Luna's kidnapping" scene. At least "reverse" so to speak Sofia's fate. I get that the kidnappers are beyond cruel, but as presented in the same scene, Sofia is a bright, hopeful and angelic child whose death by starvation is just too much, especially the hallucination part and the night before she dies. It's just too much. And it doesn't follow the rest of the game either. It's a game filled with humor and this part no only is in stark contrast, its brutality is unnecessary.
nah, it is what built luna to what she is atm, it is totally necessary. She wouldn't be Luna De Loca if the kidnapping incident was a walk in the park.The dev needs to change the "Luna's kidnapping" scene. At least "reverse" so to speak Sofia's fate. I get that the kidnappers are beyond cruel, but as presented in the same scene, Sofia is a bright, hopeful and angelic child whose death by starvation is just too much, especially the hallucination part and the night before she dies. It's just too much. And it doesn't follow the rest of the game either. It's a game filled with humor and this part no only is in stark contrast, its brutality is unnecessary.
I think the whole Luna (long BG) is exactly right. The death of Sofia, although extremely sad and sadistic especially the death of Sofia is what is needed to push Luna over the edge and explain her current characteristics and tendencies. That's because Luna's character is to be loyal to those she feels very close to. Without Sophia in her bg she would not be so over the edge IMHO.The dev needs to change the "Luna's kidnapping" scene. At least "reverse" so to speak Sofia's fate. I get that the kidnappers are beyond cruel, but as presented in the same scene, Sofia is a bright, hopeful and angelic child whose death by starvation is just too much, especially the hallucination part and the night before she dies. It's just too much. And it doesn't follow the rest of the game either. It's a game filled with humor and this part no only is in stark contrast, its brutality is unnecessary.
NO.I think the person who wrote the characters and built this world in his imagination has a better idea of what his game is actually about. You can be sure about that
LOL, so you know better? Amazing!
The thing is though, it is what defines her personality. Is it overdone? Arguably so. Does it hit a very sombre note in a game which consists of a lot of humor? Certainly so, but it's not the only instance.I did not mean the entire thing, just that death. It's too much. This isn't a drama. Yes it has some elements of a drama such as the death of that arrogant Fazio dude because of the impact it has on his father but overall this is more like a comedy, it has an enormous amount of funny moments. And Sofia's death kind of ruins the tone since the game is a collection of comedy stuff interrupted by somber apex moments. Sofia's death isn't a somber moment, it's a downright ocean of sadness, misery, pain and despair, too much. Don't forget Luna's staying in the small cage and the abuse and suffering she endured there is what actually scarred her mentally.
isn't the answer to that. Because of course he knows how he wants it to be. Not everybody might agree, some people might be turned away, others may like it (they certainly do here), it may be a cut into his financials if patreons drop, but in the end an author has the competence, and needs to have it, how his work shall be. Whether he then reaches the goal is a different question, and hints and nudges towards what may be going wrong are certainly not bad per se, but yes, the author knows what the game should be about - we only know what we want the game to be about, which usually just isn't the same.
Are you being obstinate on purpose? Genuine question. This isn't about building a world..." I think the person who wrote the characters and built this world in his imagination has a better idea of what his game is actually about " even though this one doesn't know what critics do. This is about critiquing a certain scene, just as people did that to the first Prequel because Jar Jar. If you aren't capable of comprehending that, it's not my problem.LOL, so you know better? Amazing!
The thing is though, it is what defines her personality. Is it overdone? Arguably so. Does it hit a very sombre note in a game which consists of a lot of humor? Certainly so, but it's not the only instance.
Now I get that you're not saying the whole scene should be scrapped, just a part of it, but still it is within the author's discretion how he wants to play stuff out. And
isn't the answer to that. Because of course he knows how he wants it to be. Not everybody might agree, some people might be turned away, others may like it (they certainly do here), it may be a cut into his financials if patreons drop, but in the end an author has the competence, and needs to have it, how his work shall be. Whether he then reaches the goal is a different question, and hints and nudges towards what may be going wrong are certainly not bad per se, but yes, the author knows what the game should be about - we only know what we want the game to be about, which usually just isn't the same.
You're the one who's saying part of the story "needs" to be changed because you didn't like it, and when you got told otherwise you started claiming to have a better idea of how the story should go than the dev, the only one being obstinate here is youAre you being obstinate on purpose?
No, this is about YOUR opinion of that scene somehow being more important than that of everyone else's (including the person who wrote it)This is about critiquing a certain scene
Sorry buddy, we're just stupid and we don't understand your grandeur. Maybe you should move to another thread and save people from their own opinions there.Maybe I should explain my argument a bit more: I get that Luna's past is tragic, she got mentally scarred and is a bit.....Luna Lovegood only way more sadistic and trigger happy. And I get that the first part is supposed to be very sad, emotional, it's supposed to prepare us, sort of, for the truly disgusting abuse that occurred while alone in that small cage and then she was beaten and almost disfigured by that degenerate (not calling him a beast cause animals don't do that to their children) but, again, Sofia's death is too much and/or unnecessary. Those children's suffering is enough to motivate us to hate The Mysterious Six as they're are the villains in this chapter of the story (and maybe later they'll prove to be the villains of the story, we don't know yet) and obtain the result the author is seeking, but the death part is overdone...Luna was already forced to kill the animals and drop her child innocence and be infused with despair and Sofia's departure makes her miserable but it doesn't break her mind like we see her later treatment does. I suggest that the dev change slightly the scene....Sofia's suffering can stay but it should be toned down a bit, not much, to make it believable, but enough that she'd survive....Luna being taken from Sofia and vice-versa would have the necessary emotional outcome, would make Luna as miserable without overdoing it like Sofia being permanently gone does.
Sorry Real Kreten I disagree with what you just said because BadWarThunder was simply stating their opinion and explaining that position. I get the feeling that he/she likes the game apart from about maybe 2 mins of it. For that reason I gave a like to what they said although I disagree with that position.Sorry buddy, we're just stupid and we don't understand your grandeur. Maybe you should move to another thread and save people from their own opinions there.
I have no problem with his opinion. I myself would have preferred if all the girls from Luna's past were alive.Sorry Real Kreten I disagree with what you just said because BadWarThunder was simply stating their opinion and explaining that position. I get the feeling that he/she likes the game apart from about maybe 2 mins of it. For that reason I gave a like to what they said although I disagree with that position.