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So guys. I know somebody of you can't hunderstand if ther all male are exterminated or not. I said in game more or less ae dead, other are in safe with her females. Some of those males are became futa, other are powerfull like futa are. But those guys here are Vampire Hunters don't get confused with Guardians. those guys are discendent of the Guardian's Traitors who betrayed their creators killing females pregnant vampires. This is why no one Guardian can be trasted those guy live to kill vampire and this why Siria wanna kill all them, without mercy. those are present in a route and will be present in anothers too.
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I respect them! At least someone remained a man))
I hope they win the war :)
 
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88Michele88

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Here is my analysis: of v0.0.2.0.1 I have not played any previous versions of this game.


The game has one review. The reviewer claims: "Worst game I've ever seen on here!" Well, I see such a review to be a challenge accepted moment. Surely this can't be the worst game on here could this reviewer be correct? Let's find out!

A game can be basically broken down into 3 main parts. Visual art, writing, and code. I'll evaluate the 3 portions individually.

Visual Art: What nice thing can be said about the visual art... I do like the hover over choices GUI. That's a classy red with gold trim and a neat little logo on the side, but if I'm choosing to compliment the GUI how bad can the visual art be? At certain times the game puts in poorly drawn hand sketches? Are these placeholder images? unclear... The character sprites lack a range of emotions as well, sometimes a background is missing.

Writing: The Engrish is strong in this one, and that is an understatement. I shall post a single excerpt of one of many very Engrish situations. "Good. are you male right? You wonna rape same females with a lot stuff, like blackmail and others kind of?" Need I say more about the writing level? Okay I'll give you the following line too after your answer to the affirmative. "Fuck Yes!!! Yes, yes, yes! YES, YES, YES, YEEEEEEESSSSSSS!!! Please i wont play it." The writing does not get much better or worse in the entire game. It's always at or near that level. Which to some degree I find impressive in a fucked up way. It would be difficult to write worse than this even if one tried to write poorly.


Code: This is the game's strong point, but unfortunately it's still a weak point. Like saying which athletic competition is a 100 year old best at? I have seen games with more bugs. This is a definitive bug:

Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 1374, in script
st Siria Iris Arelius "I know she will be disaponted with me. I wont talk with her. If this don't help me I'm gonna fight fo 100 years and I never gonne lost in this Century with her. But if she gonna kill me or worst"
File "C:\Users\Frank\Desktop\TheDestinyOfSiria-v0.0.2.0.1-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 678, in execute
who = eval_who(self.who, self.who_fast)
File "C:\Users\Frank\Desktop\TheDestinyOfSiria-v0.0.2.0.1-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 576, in eval_who
raise Exception("Sayer '%s' is not defined." % who.encode("utf-8"))
Exception: Sayer 'st' is not defined.

There are more subtle bugs. The buttons seem to work well enough when it comes to the stats menu, and character scenes seem to work as well... so long as you meet such a character already. In these little bio scenes it's just weird stuff I think. The ages are all off the wall crazy randomness. For instance one character is 3222 years old? another 25,000 years old someone else is "loladyo" years old? The poor writing invaded into the code. The character scenes also get stuck on the screen and are never called back which is bad, but can be coded in. (it's possible to remove them by loading a previous save, starting over, or rolling back before you looked.)

Another bug I have seen is in the code of the animations. It sometimes does strange image jumps during an "animation" if you call it that. It's not anywhere near a "keyframe" and will change to a completely different camera angle whirling you around in a confusing image. It makes me feel like a gorilla trying to fuck a football...

Is the game "fixable"? Could it be made "Great"? That's definitely a long shot.

This is a list of things I have seen playing through the game that would make improvements upon the game.

1) The number one biggest problem is dialogue. It has to be more than the first random thing that pops into the writer's head without spelling or grammar checks. I honestly can't give an example of a game with worse Engrish. This is as bad as it gets.

2) Animations: Can't be jumping to different random sex poses mid animation. Think "Key Frames"!

3) Stat system: Seems pretty useless... start it out with like 9999999999 money and 9999 this and that... Why even show this? start it at like 0 or 10, or maybe like a thousand bucks or something. Starting out with arbitrarily high and random stats does not help matters at all and it's more like a proof of concept. Why does money mean anything ot me if I already have millions of dollars? If I got a buck fifty sucking that dick for 20 bucks may make some sense.

4) Character bio buttons: This was a good idea! It should be filled out better.

5) Get rid of those fucked up sketches that don't go along with the rest of the art and look like shit.

6) Put more focus on improving what is made already instead of what is going to be made later. If I am building a car, but I put flat tires on it... Don't move on to putting the engine in yet... No dude, you take them flat tires off and put ones that can get air in them on, and if you can't do that patch the tires somehow and work on that before working on the next thing.

7) Don't release stuff in its current state if it's really bad. Hold onto it for another couple of days. Polish it up more. Look for bugs. Fix spelling mistakes and so on.

Anyhow good luck with your game, keep working on it, maybe it will be good one day, but as of now you got a lot of work to do.
I working right now on update e fired the where you have already reported, thanks. I working hard on update and I do my best to make reading enjoyable.

To be clear all or less characters are vampires and they become older extremely slow, it rare to see a vampire with white hair. most of them like Siria and her family. Other vampires have aged much higher then those. Nobilium Family for example the are most ancient Royal Vampire Family, their Ancestors ar much other and powerful the others. The vampire age is also make sho hoe are strong and powerful, but this not only age to make know there are too stong but also experience and by blood or training themself as much as them can. The is also important in vampire races, like wher you are born or which our feily or your family is.

2) For animations I try to find a way to make the same position (I'm not good with this) hope to make much better in the future.

3) For the stats system. I want make you know Siria is from the Royal Family, they are really rich most then others, like others royal families. In the future I make this clear if she become a slave or not. I she became slave all money gon down to 0, why? well you see this in futures updates why. The strength and other is because in Student Hall of Fame, she study and trying really hard.

4) Thanks, I think on how I can improve all button system, for the future.

The future update will have a lot changes and some fix in the script. I hope to make it much butter then look now it is.
 
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Frank Rosario

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Here is the Italian translation of "The destiny of Siria" version "0.0.2.0.3".
This translation is "unofficial" and "made by a fan".

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Ecco la traduzione italiana di "The destiny of Siria" versione "0.0.2.0.3".
Questa traduzione "non è ufficiale" e "fatta da un fan".

Il link è:
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Well I'm conflicted, Futa are my thing but to be honest it's hard to fap to The sims 3(for my tastes of course), and I have some advice for you,I think we share the same language and i mean Italian so if you want to clarify some point of this feel free to PM.

1)I'm a sucker for words especially Latin words, you used Nobilium which is great but, if they have the Royal Guard so they are not just a noble family, for term purpose, in my opinion it's better to use the genitive case of "regalis"

2)This is a common thing in this topic and i get it, you used english for more audience or even for learning purpose, but for now it's better if you use something like google translate, dont take this as an insult, but as I said before i'm not an English native speaker and I can assume not everyone in this server are English native, So like me they have to double up the efforts for get your story and it's a shame, the main plot seems good.

3) I looked at your Patreon and well the same english pattern repeated there, at first look for the poor english and the little content i thinked you was a scammer, but after i looked all of this thread i changed my mind so for the patreon i will advice or you try to use your best english there or at least try to feed more content there.

For now this is all,I wanted to write all of this cause as a game devolper(not this type of game) I know the struggle to try to say your story and all the rough words you can get when you try but well, i hate when everyone try to bring someone down.
 

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Well I'm conflicted, Futa are my thing but to be honest it's hard to fap to The sims 3(for my tastes of course), and I have some advice for you,I think we share the same language and i mean Italian so if you want to clarify some point of this feel free to PM.

1)I'm a sucker for words especially Latin words, you used Nobilium which is great but, if they have the Royal Guard so they are not just a noble family, for term purpose, in my opinion it's better to use the genitive case of "regalis"

2)This is a common thing in this topic and i get it, you used english for more audience or even for learning purpose, but for now it's better if you use something like google translate, dont take this as an insult, but as I said before i'm not an English native speaker and I can assume not everyone in this server are English native, So like me they have to double up the efforts for get your story and it's a shame, the main plot seems good.

3) I looked at your Patreon and well the same english pattern repeated there, at first look for the poor english and the little content i thinked you was a scammer, but after i looked all of this thread i changed my mind so for the patreon i will advice or you try to use your best english there or at least try to feed more content there.

For now this is all,I wanted to write all of this cause as a game devolper(not this type of game) I know the struggle to try to say your story and all the rough words you can get when you try but well, i hate when everyone try to bring someone down.
Thanks, man. I doing it for some reason, for me are very important. Improv my English as well. For my self as well, make the greatest story with The Sims 4, Not The Sims 3.

Thanks for you kind word. The Nobilium are Royal Family most important in vampire world. I do my best to make it much funny and pleasant to jerk off for you, my friend. Hope you had explored all routes in this version of the game.

3) Thanks, this more important for me making people happy with my project. If you happy I'm happy as well. I do both, but I need find out a compressor games form the staff.

By the way Nobilium will be my second project in future. I had more to say about them.

Thank you so much. Have fun and good day.
 

bentalos

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Have to say I love futa content, BUT futa is normally a woman who grows a penis. When it is a man becoming a futa it kind grosses me out and loses all its appeal. Tried playing the game and to be honest all the characters look far too much alike and couldnt follow the story as the English was too bad. You cant make a game based on any kind of complicated history if your English is this bad. Wish you luck but sadly cant say I will be following this. My advice would be to find another way to do the artwork for this game and find someone else to translate for you. Sorry to be so negative but the truth is you can get away with bad English and good art or Bad art and a good story, but you cant get away with both.
 
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here is my android port of The Destiny of Siria 0.0.2.0.3 + Compressed
 

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News on and on

Hey there!



As I had in my old patreon account for major or never saved memory problems, I opened a new patreon, this will be my new patreon. But is it still me, Games? because we have video games. Let's go back to us and the new up date as the title says The destiny of Siria will have a big udate. The update will have other feelings to undertake for the choices to make. Some are still short case I'm looking for a way to add combat, this will be added later, but I don't know when. Working on the other choices as you see there are some that will have some slight changes from clothed to naked to slave to be added in the future.



The images you see here are some choices and consequences that can be negative or positive. There will always be choices, Spirit too.



New characters will be introduced in the next update and in the future also something that made them what they are today. Royal family surnames will be introduced with this update I'm working on. Some of them will be introduced in the future and like some of them with their stoia and their past.



One of the characters in one of the sentries that the player will undertake will not be home is studying, but will still be mentioned and the conversine will lose that direction as a result.

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Some News on and on for the next udate only for patreon and subscibestar. If you want see some news support me on there, if you want obiuvesly

new scene into accademin int The Destiny of Siria, some scene will be replace andother 3 news scene will be added, ther will other scene in next update I woking on. Other placeses as well and some of thoe futa vampires will have a wife by their side as like Siria told some female had merried with same honorable futas. But not these slaves who get fucked.

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Ther will be let news scenes like that in future.

See ya next time, my friends.
 
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Here for you new update of The Destiny of Siria. Here you will find out changes logs as well. Let me now if I had forgot somethink to fix.
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