Ren'Py Abandoned The Fox Goddess's Village Rework [v0.13a] [Master Hyo]

[Hyohyo]

Sorry, I worded that incorrectly. I meant that if you click on Mei's or Kiho's doors on the second Saturday (and probably later), it just lets you in to interact with them like you would normally, rather than them telling you to go away like they do during week 1. The Tomo part of it works fine, I should have mentioned.


That's fair. If that's the way you want to make it, sure.

There's one other thing I forgot to mention, which is to confirm that the Tomo examination on Wednesday morning isn't implemented yet? Also, I since noticed that Mei's tattoos seem to be absent in her room scenes, whether intentional or not, I think it's worth mentioning.

Thanks for you work regardless. I certainly don't want to seem negative.

First of all. I asked for criticism so you are not being negative at all. Secondly... regarding the tattoos. I guess I fucked up there. Worst case I will need to redo the renders. I'll look into what happened with Mei and Kiho's events on Saturdays.

Once again thanks

 

[NPC041188]

Skip function doesn't work
Set it to skip unseen text but wouldn't let me, even after the intro

 

[kgqijufq]

The first version of the rework is out! Please give me feedback and report bugs you might find!

Most have already mentioned what I would have mentioned. Main feedback would be the font usage. I would stick to choosing special fonts and colors for their names only. Changing the text that's meant to be read to a different font and color each line is not an enjoyable experience. If there is a way to separate the name text box and the dialog text box also so the lines of text don't jump up and down slightly on each screen during conversations, that would help too.

 

[caxhub]

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[molitar]

Not sure if I can get past the 3D characters. Even trying to make them look Japanese it still feels like cheap Western 3D Porn style. I miss the old style. For 3D art I prefer the Koikatu style because they have the Japanese 2D appearance as it was designed in Japan.

 

[Hones]

Not sure if I can get past the 3D characters. Even trying to make them look Japanese it still feels like cheap Western 3D Porn style. I miss the old style. For 3D art I prefer the Koikatu style because they have the Japanese 2D appearance as it was designed in Japan.

Where do you think Honey Select 2 is from?

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[Emelex]

In light of the new edition game, I've made another batch of spelling and grammar corrections to it and attached it below. I haven't played all the scenes yet, so while I do, I'll probably tweak a few more minor issues and post a new version of the fix/mod. The quote on line 1389 was particularly vexing for me, as I was unsure if it was already grammatically sound or not:

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I also changed 1.40cm to 1.40m, since the former is less than an inch and the latter is just above 4 ft 7". I assume that was the author's original intent, but I can't be totally sure.

 

[Hyohyo]

In light of the new edition game, I've made another batch of spelling and grammar corrections to it and attached it below. I haven't played all the scenes yet, so while I do, I'll probably tweak a few more minor issues and post a new version of the fix/mod. The quote on line 1389 was particularly vexing for me, as I was unsure if it was already grammatically sound or not:

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I also changed 1.40cm to 1.40m, since the former is less than an inch and the latter is just above 4 ft 7". I assume that was the author's original intent, but I can't be totally sure.

Yep sorry, I am used to writing it like that but mixed up cm and m.

 

[Hyohyo]

Not sure if I can get past the 3D characters. Even trying to make them look Japanese it still feels like cheap Western 3D Porn style. I miss the old style. For 3D art I prefer the Koikatu style because they have the Japanese 2D appearance as it was designed in Japan.

This comment is quite possibly the stupidest thing I have read in many years of being on this site... and that's a fucking achiefment!

 

[Emelex]

Yep sorry, I am used to writing it like that but mixed up cm and m.

That's fine, just checking. By the way, I just updated the fixes again and reattached them to my last post.

 

[anna94]

just wondering why this game doesnt have a patreon?

 

[Hyohyo]

just wondering why this game doesnt have a patreon?

Cuz I am not doing it for money. Also it would be troublesome for me to accept money for it, since that would screw up my taxes.

 

[Twistty]

Hyohyo
Glad to see you making this again!

 

[Dirk220]

It's good to see this one back on track. Loved the old one and was sad when it went dead.
By the way, when you meet with the mayor she mentioned first that there are 200 people living in and around the village,
but then stated that there are 100 including the 20 girls...confused me a little, but if I remember correctly,it was the same in the original.
So with that aside, keep up the good work.
cant wait for the next release.

 

[Emelex]

I finished the current version of the rework, and with it, a new version of my fixes mod for it. I couldn't fix the stat cards, and the weekly ceremonies and Wednesday morning checkups have yet to be added into this version of the game, but I assume those are things the developer would presumably work on at some later date if and when Hyohyo has the time to do so.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

Master Hyo, may I say that I absolutely adore your rework of this game! I was already very much enjoying the original, but you've greatly improved things, and the work you've put into it shows. You have done a great job creating adorable characters, better backgrounds, and more interesting and engaging dialogues between the characters. I also like that you've kept much less of the initial ceremony hidden from the players (for now, at least). That helps build curiosity and suspense, which is excellent for this type of story. From what I've played so far, I think you've done a great job! I hope you get a lot of enjoyment from making this game.

I do have a question for you; perhaps you can offer some guidance. The MC has visited Tomo for the first time at her home and then returned to where he is staying. When he enters the kitchen, I am given this description: "You can hear kiho humming in the living room to the left." I have tried using the left arrow, but it takes me back to the upstairs hallway. When I use the right arrow (even though the description says "to the left"), I see the television and couches, but there is no one present.

Should I be going back down the stairs to speak with Kiho? I have clicked things such as the curtains or the table or couch, in case she is hidden, but so far I have not been able to find her.

 

[mipol87782]

Nice game

 

[oceanbobo4]

I visit here now and then to see if there is more to this game. I really really like it. I hope it continues. It is beautiful and mysterious.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

I visit here now and then to see if there is more to this game. I really really like it. I hope it continues. It is beautiful and mysterious.

True, it's been a little bit now, but don't let the OP fool you. My comment (a few above this one) was posted right after the first version of the reworked game was released, at the beginning of 2021. I'm guessing Master Hyo is still working on the next version of the game (which has improved quite a lot from the original and is very promising now IMO).

 

[Hyohyo]

Master Hyo, may I say that I absolutely adore your rework of this game! I was already very much enjoying the original, but you've greatly improved things, and the work you've put into it shows. You have done a great job creating adorable characters, better backgrounds, and more interesting and engaging dialogues between the characters. I also like that you've kept much less of the initial ceremony hidden from the players (for now, at least). That helps build curiosity and suspense, which is excellent for this type of story. From what I've played so far, I think you've done a great job! I hope you get a lot of enjoyment from making this game.

I do have a question for you; perhaps you can offer some guidance. The MC has visited Tomo for the first time at her home and then returned to where he is staying. When he enters the kitchen, I am given this description: "You can hear kiho humming in the living room to the left." I have tried using the left arrow, but it takes me back to the upstairs hallway. When I use the right arrow (even though the description says "to the left"), I see the television and couches, but there is no one present.

Should I be going back down the stairs to speak with Kiho? I have clicked things such as the curtains or the table or couch, in case she is hidden, but so far I have not been able to find her.

sorry for the veeeeery late answer. Life has been hectic. That should be a bug. Usually a click to the right (me stupid and wrote the wrong direction as usual) should start the scene. I'll go and see what the issue with that is.

On another note, I have started development of a new update and hopefully it should be up relatively soon (at most a month in my estimation). Right now I am focusing on improving the mechanics and currently available content, but there should be some new stuff coming as well.

Edit: I'm also looking for people to play the game through and look for any bugs/ improvements on the technical side of things. So if anyone is interested, pls dm me here or on discord!