VN Ren'Py Completed The Goblin's Brides [v1.0] [TrustyOldPatches]

[Yotobi]

Weekly preview, hope you like it!
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I think I've become addicted
From now on I won't check this section just to not spoil me anything, may I ask you broadly speaking if you have some date in mind for 0.4?
PS. Beside the work, a great thank you for dedication and attention to fans, keep it up man

 

[TrustyOldPatches]

I think I've become addicted
From now on I won't check this section just to not spoil me anything, may I ask you broadly speaking if you have some date in mind for 0.4?
PS. Beside the work, a great thank you for dedication and attention to fans, keep it up man

No date yet, I'll give one when all the renders for the next update are done.

 

[Yotobi]

No date yet, I'll give one when all the renders for the next update are done.

Thanks for the info, see ya soon then

 

[TrustyOldPatches]

Don't mind the clothes, I'm working on them. But is that hair better?

 

[Konstantinus]

Don't mind the clothes, I'm working on them. But is that hair better?
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I want to grab her and impregnate her.

 

[moxatt]

Hopefully nax can have a few moments with her

 

[Susan Xandera]

Don't mind the clothes, I'm working on them. But is that hair better?
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Yup, the hair fixed it. Thanks hun.

 

[jojobizarrefucker]

Big fan of this game, the girls, and the plot.

Kind of curious though, the first choice you get has a greyed out choice you can't select, "We don't have to do anything Morgana, he knew the risks."

Is there a way to select this? I'm up to the current ending as of now.

 

[TrustyOldPatches]

Big fan of this game, the girls, and the plot.

Kind of curious though, the first choice you get has a greyed out choice you can't select, "We don't have to do anything Morgana, he knew the risks."

Is there a way to select this? I'm up to the current ending as of now.

Not yet, that path was going to lead to a bad ending. But not sure yet if I'll implement them or not, as some of the ideas I had for possible bad endings included rape(For example the MC get captured by an ogre), which isn't allowed by patreon. For now I'll leave it there while I decide if I should include some bad endings as an external patch or not.

 

[Reinherz99]

i hope the next update have a romance scene with the goblin.

 

[Deleted member 3477186]

We need impregnation!

 

[Konstantinus]

Not yet, that path was going to lead to a bad ending. But not sure yet if I'll implement them or not, as some of the ideas I had for possible bad endings included rape(For example the MC get captured by an ogre), which isn't allowed by patreon. For now I'll leave it there while I decide if I should include some bad endings as an external patch or not.

OH and I thought that is the first hint about him using magic so they will be inclined to do it despite not wanting it

 

[Dualcode]

Not yet, that path was going to lead to a bad ending. But not sure yet if I'll implement them or not, as some of the ideas I had for possible bad endings included rape(For example the MC get captured by an ogre), which isn't allowed by patreon. For now I'll leave it there while I decide if I should include some bad endings as an external patch or not.

Why not make it a "dominant" Yharnam route. Instead of being seduced by Nax, she decides when and how the sex happens. Basically a variant storyline with a more assertive female lead but it still follows the same overall storybeats.

 

[quiboune]

Why not make it a "dominant" Yharnam route. Instead of being seduced by Nax, she decides when and how the sex happens. Basically a variant storyline with a more assertive female lead but it still follows the same overall storybeats.

A completely on control Yharnam wouldn't let herself be seduced by a goblin, that only happens because of some sort of magic Nax has going on that makes them docile.

 

[Unknown_Beta]

Not yet, that path was going to lead to a bad ending. But not sure yet if I'll implement them or not, as some of the ideas I had for possible bad endings included rape(For example the MC get captured by an ogre), which isn't allowed by patreon. For now I'll leave it there while I decide if I should include some bad endings as an external patch or not.

No need to overwork yourself -- as much as I'd enjoy some good ogre rape -- bad endings aren't totally necessary and the NTR hater crowd will still give you shit for having some one else sex the girls even if it's a "bad ending".

I think having the choices you have so far, choosing which girl you want to see in any given scene, like the first where its Yharnam bj, Morganna bj, or both. That's enough to make it a 'game' rather than a kinetic novel. If anything you could have those choices lead to different endings, e.g., solo girl, or harem routes. IDK. Just spit balling really.

Personally, I'd love to see you keep plowing ahead with the main story, rather than back track for bad endings and getting bogged down in divergent paths.

 

[TrustyOldPatches]

A completely on control Yharnam wouldn't let herself be seduced by a goblin, that only happens because of some sort of magic Nax has going on that makes them docile.

More than magic I was thinking about pheromones, they push the girls to mate with Nax when they smell them from his cock. But I don't plan to turn them into mindless sluts outside of sex, they'll still retain their will, allowing them to have a more dominant or submissive relationship with Nax.

 

[TrustyOldPatches]

No need to overwork yourself -- as much as I'd enjoy some good ogre rape -- bad endings aren't totally necessary and the NTR hater crowd will still give you shit for having some one else sex the girls even if it's a "bad ending".

I think having the choices you have so far, choosing which girl you want to see in any given scene, like the first where its Yharnam bj, Morganna bj, or both. That's enough to make it a 'game' rather than a kinetic novel. If anything you could have those choices lead to different endings, e.g., solo girl, or harem routes. IDK. Just spit balling really.

Personally, I'd love to see you keep plowing ahead with the main story, rather than back track for bad endings and getting bogged down in divergent paths.

It would be two or three scenes top, not a lot of work needed for them, and If I end doing them, it will be when the main story is finished, while I prepare the groundwork for the next game. But right now I'm more inclined to not do them, not sure how I'll feel at the end of the game.

 

[Denis777]

Not yet, that path was going to lead to a bad ending. But not sure yet if I'll implement them or not, as some of the ideas I had for possible bad endings included rape(For example the MC get captured by an ogre), which isn't allowed by patreon. For now I'll leave it there while I decide if I should include some bad endings as an external patch or not.

Could there be a variant For example the girls get captured & raped by an ogres, but the goblin saves them?

 

[Denis777]

Not yet, that path was going to lead to a bad ending. But not sure yet if I'll implement them or not, as some of the ideas I had for possible bad endings included rape(For example the MC get captured by an ogre), which isn't allowed by patreon. For now I'll leave it there while I decide if I should include some bad endings as an external patch or not.

Or, for example, a choice - the girls discover a camp of orcs who are raping two very young girls captives - and you have a choice: watching to wait for the night and try to save the girls, but at the same time
may be find yourself in the clutches of the orcs (the correctness of actions depends on a complex chain of choice); or waiting for the night and quietly run away.

 

[boulimanus]

Don't mind the clothes, I'm working on them. But is that hair better?
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It is better. The front looks more natural and the colour difference with the back is less obvious.