VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Intoxicating Flavor [v0.10.6] [PixelsLab]

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albul

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hey PixelsLab i saw some posts about english translations, so i am curious whether you speak english at all (and you use an online translator or something like that for posting here) or you just think you aren't fluent enough in english to properly translate the original russian text?
 
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PixelsLab

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hey PixelsLab i saw some posts about english translations, so i am curious whether you speak english at all (and you use an online translator or something like that for posting here) or you just think you aren't fluent enough in english to properly translate the original russian text?
Yes, when I communicate in English, I translate the text using an online translator. Only occasionally correct the text. To be honest, my English is terrible. I tried to fix it, I used the services of a tutor for two months. Then my video card burned out, I had to save.
 
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Vitez

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Top tier game for me since im looking for a story these days rather than "adult fun".
I do not overanalyze how story and actions are made since it's either up to your imaginations, experience or is left out on purpose and would be explained in the next updates.
So my concern is that author is going to take criticism to heart and make them their game and not his own. Which would be a shame.
Big plus is that MC isn't a total moron too!
 
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Why is it that I feel like I gotta drop acid to get this game?
 

Trapezio

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The story is quite nice, but the grammar is so damn bad. "You has" and so on... sometimes I can't even grasp the meaning. :rolleyes::rolleyes::rolleyes:
So, "facepalmers" and "wondering dudes", please tell me what the hell "And if to remember that you have some kind of plans with my mother, I don't even know why I need to talk to you" means. Down here:

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Most of all, what the damn is this "and if to remember that" crap that you keep writing over and over?
 

CPL_Jimmy

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So... I spent a couple years in Iraq, and this game said something that I would never have expected. You see... I have quite the collection of sunrise and sunset pictures from that time, because they were simply amazing, so bright and colorful. The pinks, yellows, oranges, reds... just painted the sky on a daily basis.
So when Inanna said "And the dawns back there! They were the only reason I chose this place..." while talking about Iraq... it brought back some memories and told me that maybe I was not the only person to appreciate those sunrises.
 
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Vitez

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Trapezio

MC is bringing up the fact that she is in some kind of connection with his mother, hence the caution. If you read it two times you could understand it even tho it is not grammatically correct... The writer has problems with when to use "was/were" and "have/has" mostly.
 

sdadag

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Does any know thew name of the melody that starts playing while you and Katherine both lay down near the ocean? Thanks :) Capture2020.JPG
 
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