I can see this VN getting a bigger fan following.
The only issue I see is the MC and Penny finally having sex.
DMD built chapters 1 and 2 leading to the daughter and her father having sex, then after it happened some fans lost interest.
I've heard this refereed to as the I Dream of Jeanie Syndrome. The 1960's TV series was built around a hot blonde genie trying to become romantically involved with the guy (astronaut) who found her. When they finally got together the point of the series was more-or-less over.
If the MC and Penny have sex early on then it becomes part-and-parcel of the VN, but if their getting together becomes the under-current of the game (Ross and Rachel) then getting them together can have a post-Christmas let-down response.
Again David Tennant's Doctor (Dr.Who) and his companion Rose Tyler had a romantic attraction. But it wasn't until the end of his time as the Doctor that they (nearly) expressed their feelings for each other.
Love it! ... Then Penny grabs it from him and turns him into Johnny Bravo. LolThe great thing about sci-fi (not SyFy) is how much latitude it gives for creativity.
Besides the cameo's from past sci-fi shows you can add a lot of odd plot elements, look at classic Dr.Who.
Penny ending up in an I dream of Jeanie outfit is not impossible, even giving her blonde Jeanie hair, there can always be a device that let's the MC create his fantasy girl and POOF! Penny is Jeanie, or Ginger from Gilligan's Island, a cave girl like in One Million Years B.C., or Judy Jetson.
Arrrrrrr.. that would be a brilliant plot twist, bucko!Penny seems like she's pretty resourceful, she may end up rescuing the MC from the aliens.
That one is done by an artist called RRWard.Arrrrrrr.. that would be a brilliant plot twist, bucko!
Those renders look great; are you doing those yourself?
I would love to see a whole Penny series develop, exploring these themes and countless more.Penny the space pirate.
The thing about sci-fi is you don't need a spin-off to explore new themes. Space is only limited by our imagination. Nearly anything from Time Lord Penny to Terminator Penny to something as far out of left field as catgirl Penny is possible.I would love to see a whole Penny series develop, exploring these themes and countless more.
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^ this.Right after you shag the hag a second time - make it memorable!