This board is for people to air their ideas/frustrations/comments about a game. Many are not supporters, but might be considered potential supporters. Even if they are not, this is the place to air your opinions. The only thing I hate are the people who just absolutely shit on a devs work. Calling it lazy, unoriginal, etc, when they themselves do nothing along these lines.
That said, there is room for criticism, and this game has many aspects that could use review/discussion. In my mind (and my opinion is worth what it costs to read ($0)) there are a few places that could be tweaked/tightened without killing the dev's vision. The ideas of ZagorTeNay above are well-thought out and very workable, but it might not fit the Dev's vision. The dev likes the idea of lots of strings-free sex, and has run down that path. The two areas he could plus-up without killing his main vision are the MC and Lucy. The MC is a cipher, with very little in the way of personality or really anything that makes him interesting. If he does have something to offer (other than being the MacGuffin holder), the dev might want to get that plot thread rolling soon. Bottom line, MC is weak.
Lucy is an awful character thus far. Yes, I get the casual sex for intel (and other reasons), but it is her relationship with the MC that is thus far infuriating. She is a mess, at once cool and bitchy to the MC, her attitude turning on a dime. Efforts to explain this as a byproduct of being half-fairy, or him being the keymaster fall flat. Her active cock-blocking of the MC, again with no good justification, rounds out her unsavory nature. The Dev for Second Girls Happiness ran into a world of grief because he unwittingly made the characters unlikable at the start, and while he did recover eventually, the damage was done. The same thing is happening here, as I find Lucy increasingly repellent.
Otherwise, the game has a ton of world building and great renders. I wish the dev all the best. I will not be offended if he takes none of my advice; he is the creative here, and is building a game that suits his vision. Good luck, I really do hope for the best.
