So I just played the main game from start to finish (yet to do the xmas special) and all I can say is
SpeedPostx don't change a thing with how you are writing this story, Sure there is some secrets going on but none that have made me want to hate the writing style or the characters.
I hope you keep the group sex/bi thing going or at least make it optional but don't cut it out it's not that strong that the game deserves hate from it and it helps build the current story setting, it's not overused in this title.
This was a great read, sure a tad different to the standard mini drama and then everyone jumps on the MC's cock within the first two chapters but there is nothing wrong with this at all. Can't wait for the next chapter to see if some of these secrets are shown and how the characters romance builds with the MC.
Great job so far keep up the good work.