What an intriguing game this is. I've only made it a short bit but I can already tell that the potential here is enormous.
The renders are very good but were this really shines is the core aspect of dominance. From the seemingly confident, assertive bravado, and even belittlement that the women exercise against the main character, down to the muscular and ridiculously well toned bimbofied characteristic they exude, it makes or will make dominating them all the more satisfying. Almost poetic irony is how I perceive.
Story is fantastic and it leaves you gripping for more. The ability to sway someone's will through some sort of telepathy holds promise for a interesting back story, and other things I wont mention to not spoil too much.
Though I must say that little bit with Cleo was brilliantly thought out as well as extensively well executed, specially with the connotations of the words.
I'm not a behavioral psychologist, but I used to work for one once and I can see how a game like this could potentially help a man, or anybody for that matter, with a low self esteem overcome it, if enough thought is put at least. Your writers touched on something special here.
Well done, I'll keep a close eye on this in the future.