That is pretty annoying... I'll check it out and see why that happens.
Super happy to hear it. Though I do suggest to give Synafae a chance, if you like centaurs at least
. Do point out the text formatting problems if you have the time. I'll adress them as I goIt was mainly Italics [/i] formatting during a few scenes so the text remained so for multiple paragraphs plus a couple </p> instances sprinkled at the end of one scene or another. I think the most egregious one was during Nefail's sex scene once she asks for a joke. The entire page is italicised from that point on. There's also a few typos here and there if you'd like them pointed out. Would screenshots be better for chasing these sorts of things down?
Don't get me wrong, I think Syn is a cool and complex character but she's not my type. I can't quite exactly tell you why but if I absolutely had to elaborate I suppose she's too... cloak and dagger, and seemingly for the hell of it. Which ordinarily wouldn't be such a bad thing - again, as a character she works great - but so far it's not coming across as particularly sexy or endearing to me. Rather, the Chapter 5 scenes she took part in are indeed sexy but it's in spite of Syn rather than because of her.
Anytime. And don't think I didn't catch that self-reference in the theatre. You sly bastard you.
Au contraire. That is EXACTLY how I wanted her to come across. She is a villain
.Anytime. And don't think I didn't catch that self-reference in the theatre. You sly bastard you.
Villainy is precisely the vibe I got from her. The nuggets here and there certainly led me to believe that was the case but I didn't want to assume lest it coloured my feedback. This certainly reinforces my perceptions and strengthens Syn as a character tremendously. She's quite fantastic.That is EXACTLY how I wanted her to come across. She is a villain
Well, you pretty much nailed it! Now the only mistery to solve is: why is she like this? I hope this will encourage players to see all pathsVillainy is precisely the vibe I got from her. The nuggets here and there certainly led me to believe that was the case but I didn't want to assume lest it coloured my feedback. This certainly reinforces my perceptions and strengthens Syn as a character tremendously. She's quite fantastic.
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... Also I just realised that Syn could be a raging sexual narcissist so the reason she's even bothering to give Elifael the light of day is because she wants to mould her into her own image. Mannerisms and all so she could, quite literally, pleasure another Syn. Disguising doing so as tender kindness and love. That... would actually recontextualise everything she's done so far and make her an even more incredible character... and make it quite hot. God dammit.
If that's the case then hats off to you, mate. This is ingenious.
I changed the id of the game by mistake. I fixed that and uploaded the correct version. I will also attach it here for your convenience. Happy reading
Of course! If I manage to gather enough chaching, I'll be able to commission a new cover for book II. That would be nice
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Of course! If I manage to gather enough chaching, I'll be able to commission a new cover for book II. That would be nice
I have no idea how it actually works for developer side, sorry.Not being american complicates things a little, but I'll give it a go. Thanks
I am very glad to hear it. Here is how it works.
Thank you so much for reading my stuff
. I am very glad you liked it. Consider dropping a review and/or a like, it would help me a lot...
