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Yup.

All I'm saying is that we'll still have a semi-realistic, slower pacing for most of the girls, if not just for the sake of telling an interesting story for each (instead of jumping straight to mindless sex). Makes sense?

I don't see the point in writing porn without such developments, as I feel they end up hollow and uninteresting. That's why the prologue alone already has so much world-building, characterization and other non-porn related scenes and so on.

But yeah, once these are out of the way... Expect tons of degeneracy for plenty of the ladies.
Don't worry, I'm still hanging onto the game so far, for sure. Despite my comments, I do enjoy it. I can tell that you have put some considerable effort into it, it was just my initial pretty knee jerk reactions. Looking forward to see what else you may cook up!
 
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Don't worry, I'm still hanging onto the game so far, for sure. Despite my comments, I do enjoy it. I can tell that you have put some considerable effort into it, it was just my initial pretty knee jerk reactions. Looking forward to see what else you may cook up!
Thanks friend :coffee:
 
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Allright, gave version 0.2.1 a try as I've said ( Didn't even realize it's been out already ) So far I'm having a blast, the story is a clusterfuck though. The beginning was a bit confusing ( Like for example why was Penny ( Lilith ) in the club, how did the other two chicks know about her? Is she fucking around in there? So many questions and no answers ) and.....but this is just my personal taste, feel free to disregard it. There's a bit too much girl on girl action going on for my taste, don't get me wrong I love the fact that the girls are turning into filthy horny sluts, that's the next thing though. Them turning into sluts is fine, as long as they're MY sluts and mine alone. Not sure where you're going with this but so far I'm getting some serious NTR / Sharing / Gangbang / Swinging vibes from this, if that happens I'm definitely out. As for the girls, they're fucking hot, well....most of them. One thing I really appreciate though is the good grammar / spelling, didn't really notice anything mayor being off there. The overall "production quality" is really good too, not quite on the level of games like Pale Carnations / The Inn / Eternum / Deviant Anomalies but I can immidiately tell that you're putting a lot of effort in this. Keep it up, this has the chance to become something big.

Edit : Allright, just finished all the available content. As I've said this is already fucking good, really enjoying it so far. There's only one little nitpicking I have to mention : Pretty much all the girls have the same identical nipple color, I fucking love that some of the girls have giant tits with those massive aureolae, totally my kinda thing. But I'd REALLY like it if at least some of them had a bit of variation in their color too, especially some darker shades. For example the mom is a perfect candidate for slightly darker more brown-ish nipples since she actually gave birth several times already which naturally already makes most nipples a few shades darker. Some going into grey-ish / red-ish territory would be great too.
 
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Allright, gave version 0.2.1 a try as I've said ( Didn't even realize it's been out already ) So far I'm having a blast, the story is a clusterfuck though. The beginning was a bit confusing ( Like for example why was Penny ( Lilith ) in the club, how did the other two chicks know about her? Is she fucking around in there? So many questions and no answers ) and.....but this is just my personal taste, feel free to disregard it. There's a bit too much girl on girl action going on for my taste, don't get me wrong I love the fact that the girls are turning into filthy horny sluts, that's the next thing though. Them turning into sluts is fine, as long as they're MY sluts and mine alone. Not sure where you're going with this but so far I'm getting some serious NTR / Sharing / Gangbang / Swinging vibes from this, if that happens I'm definitely out. As for the girls, they're fucking hot, well....most of them. One thing I really appreciate though is the good grammar / spelling, didn't really notice anything mayor being off there. The overall "production quality" is really good too, not quite on the level of games like Pale Carnations / The Inn / Eternum / Deviant Anomalies but I can immidiately tell that you're putting a lot of effort in this. Keep it up, this has the chance to become something big.
I'm glad you decided to give it a try :cool:
Clarifying a bit on Lilith's predicament: Penny had told Abbie and Emily about her crush for the MC, as well as showing them her "new identity" and so on. She also knew that MC was planning on going to the Night Club, since he sucks at covering his tracks (it's implied in the car ride). However, the girls didn't know she'd be there already, so they had to improvise a bit when they found out inside.
And as I've said plenty - the Sandbox will certainly hammer in the emphasis on turning these girls into the MC's harem properly. I hope I don't disappoint. There will be absolutely no NTR, and all lesbians will be a part of the harem, dedicated to the MC.
Thanks for the kind words buddy! Stay strong, always.
 
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I'm glad you decided to give it a try :cool:
Clarifying a bit on Lilith's predicament: Penny had told Abbie and Emily about her crush for the MC, as well as showing them her "new identity" and so on. She also knew that MC was planning on going to the Night Club, since he sucks at covering his tracks (it's implied in the car ride). However, the girls didn't know she'd be there already, so they had to improvise a bit when they found out inside.
And as I've said plenty - the Sandbox will certainly hammer in the emphasis on turning these girls into the MC's harem properly. I hope I don't disappoint. There will be absolutely no NTR, and all lesbians will be a part of the harem, dedicated to the MC.
Thanks for the kind words buddy! Stay strong, always.
Ah, now it makes a lot more sense, had a feeling that's what is was but wasn't sure. By the way, did a little edit in my previous post that I forgot to mention. Again, just personal preference shit, but I think there are many others out there thinking along the same lines. Might be something to take into consideration, either way you've got my full support on this game. Hope you have a great day, see you around later.
 
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Ah, now it makes a lot more sense, had a feeling that's what is was but wasn't sure. By the way, did a little edit in my previous post that I forgot to mention. Again, just personal preference shit, but I think there are many others out there thinking along the same lines. Might be something to take into consideration, either way you've got my full support on this game. Hope you have a great day, see you around later.
Did you like Cassie, btw? I've never seen aureolae like hers in other games, so I had a lot of fun coming up with it.
 
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I think the aureolae type / size is awesome, however not a fan of the color, especially since Cassie seems to be a bit older already and she has a bit of that gloomy / unhealthy type going on with the bags under her eyes and everything. I think she'd be a perfect candidate for a more darker brown / grey-ish color, with the nipples themselves less small and pointy and more thick and wide, would go along great with the gigantic aureolae.

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Kinda like this, just with the nipples themselves bigger.

But so far my personal favourites are : The mom / Marianne / Ms.Claire / Natsumi / Cecil / Chloe
 
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Yup.

All I'm saying is that we'll still have a semi-realistic, slower pacing for most of the girls, if not just for the sake of telling an interesting story for each (instead of jumping straight to mindless sex). Makes sense?

I don't see the point in writing porn without such developments, as I feel they end up hollow and uninteresting. That's why the prologue alone already has so much world-building, characterization and other non-porn related scenes and so on.

But yeah, once these are out of the way... Expect tons of degeneracy for plenty of the ladies.
will collars, piercings, and tattoos be optional?
 

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will collars, piercings, and tattoos be optional?
Too early for me to say for sure, so forgive my vagueness.
I can say I don't want everything to fall under these, and the ones who do won't be entirely comprised of such stuff either (probably). Hard to tell rn
 

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The tattoos and piercings and such can be just for a select few characters imo... then everyone has something they like a few witout and a few with :unsure:
 
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Too early for me to say for sure, so forgive my vagueness.
I can say I don't want everything to fall under these, and the ones who do won't be entirely comprised of such stuff either (probably). Hard to tell rn
alright. thank you.
Well, when you get around to it, I would suggest making them optional.
 
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Will there be cards for the chars one day and maybe a discord server?
Not sure about cards atm.
Discord server could work, but I'm wondering how much manpower it may take to moderate it. That's the only reason I haven't set one up btw... I'd love to see it one day.
 
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Discord server could work, but I'm wondering how much manpower it may take to moderate it. That's the only reason I haven't set one up btw... I'd love to see it one day.
If you need a moderator I'll volunteer, I'm unemployed and pretty much on Discord all day long anyway except when I'm sleeping.
 

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As long as it's done well enough, I'm kinda glad this is taking the sandbox route. I enjoyed the prologue but found myself wondering how the game was going to balance all of these different characters and subplots going forward. A sandbox seems like a good answer. Looking forward to more! Going to write up a proper review at some point soon.
 

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As long as it's done well enough, I'm kinda glad this is taking the sandbox route. I enjoyed the prologue but found myself wondering how the game was going to balance all of these different characters and subplots going forward. A sandbox seems like a good answer. Looking forward to more! Going to write up a proper review at some point soon.
Thanks for coming by!

The Sin Within was always meant to be a sandbox, since it's a genre & format I enjoy tremendously.
It gave me a lot of freedom to explore more characters, which in turn lets me explore more kinks, which then opens up the floodgate for a plethora of praises & facepalms alike :ROFLMAO:

I'm fairly confident on my vision & coding competence for the sandbox structure, and I certainly want to avoid a point where my players will be reading a massive walkthrough PDF with their limp johnson in hands just to get ahead on the story.

Been there, done that...
 
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I'm fairly confident on my vision & coding competence for the sandbox structure, and I certainly want to avoid a point where my players will be reading a massive walkthrough PDF with their limp johnson in hands just to get ahead on the story.

Been there, done that...
Yeah, pretty sure we've all been in "that" place a few times before, dreadful....absolutely dreadful. ( Also happened when I've hit the school principal route in Corruption to advance the storyline, I love me a good pudgy milf but when we're going into gilf territory then the limp dick syndrome hits HARD.....actually that's incorrect in a weird way, not hard but more like wet noodle.
 
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