When it comes to writing the grammar/spelling is different from the story.
What I've read so far is excellent storytelling and just my kind of perverted.
That said, it could use a proofreader who is fluent in English.
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Wow. That is a huge effort from your part. Thanks a lot !
I am actually a bit ashamed I didn't find your post until after releasing 0.1.final. Everything is in already and will come in the next update.
Is femdom tag for man or woman?
Up until now, only women. But there are two very dominant characters in the game, one being Rebeca, the other one hinted and there will definitely be femdom towards men. Now, does this mean Rebeca is going to rubber ball a guy and sodomize him ? No. Not gonna happen. She is not into that. But she is definitely going to submit men into doing what she wants.
Wow! Great release! I love this kind of stuff and there is far too few of any that fits my tastes to this degree (despite corruption and domination games being popular). I loved Rebeca and her handling of Agnes
Quite a lot of content for a 0.1 release!
I have a couple of questions that I hope you will answer if you get the time.
- Are there no scenes for Rebeca in the event picker for this release? I couldn't get any to open, but I have only been through a couple of variations.
- Will there possibly be a diagram released on how to reach different scenes? It would be nice to know if one has missed anything.
- Will there be a betrayal aspect? I am thinking about Rebeca getting Agnes to betray Paula in some way... like Agnes being controlled by Rebeca to help pull Paula down into depravity and submission? (especially nice if Paula never chose to submit so far aka staying "innocent").
I planned 0.1 to contain at least one scene for each character, and in 0.1.final she gets her first scene. I released alpha to obtain some feedback because I was kind of 'in the dark' (the couple of people I got to play the game don't speak English, so kind of pointless). Thanks to you all btw.
Diagram... walk-through... etc. I'd like to release some guidelines to the story. Because many memories, etc. will only be available depending on character stats. So, in order to get to know the characters, it needs to be replayed from the different perspectives. But for that I need to be able to write characters the player cares enough about.
About 3. I cannot answer to your questions directly (spoilers !), but I mean, there is already betrayal going on. Agnes husband has made a move on Paula. That will have consequences for both Paula and Agnes. Similarly, Agnes is already betraying Paula by interacting with Rebeca behind her back. She does it in good faith of course, but this will also affect their relation.
Damn rebeca is great. I hope there will be a rebeca/olivia romance option in the future. I wanted Paula to overcome her problems while playing. nice game dev
I have good news for you then... but well, maybe the vision of love Rebeca has is not what you would call conventional.
