I liked the renders, the models are cute as heck ♥
Definitely needs translation work though, it was tough to get through the relationship setting dialogue and while I could work out the meaning most of the time, sometimes it took a while rereading to get it. Not as bad as some posters here though!
Honestly though I find Arthur such a turn off, I'm not a fan of split protagonist and male protagonist games in general so admittedly I'm biased, but for a good enough game I can skim through to get back to the good stuff. But when he showed up in Jennifer's fantasy with her "daughters" too, I just clicked off. I don't really understand the point of him as a side protagonist? On the one hand, you didn't think he was important enough to mention even in the synopsis of the game, while on the other it seems like the game is setting up to be his wish fulfillment harem fantasy? Seems like either he should just be a character in Jennifer's game, or she should just be a character in his.