So far, this looks like it has the potential to be a really great story. That said, this update, in my opinion, had some major issues. The first issue was the vast majority of the update felt really repetitive. It felt like the MC was basically having the same conversation over and over again, sometimes with different characters, sometimes with the same ones. For me, this just felt very tedious and boring. I get that the dev is going for realism and most people, in the same situation, would do the same thing, trying to get answers as to what is going on, but it just wasn't enjoyable to read.
The next issue is that the MC was constantly being an asshole to everybody he meets and then apologizing for it. I get that he is frustrated that he isn't getting the answers he wants as to what is going on, but why would anyone help him if he is acting like a complete prick to everyone he meets that could potentially help him and/or give him answers.
The last issue, that I can think of right now, is a couple of things that made zero sense. The first, why would he quit his job, before even having a meeting with a potential new employer. I could see him maybe doing that if he absolutely hated his current job, but that was not the case here. He just heard about a potential job from somebody he met at a bar. Finally, how in the hell did he not hear the multiple gunshots right outside of his apartment building. I get that it was in the back alley, but he still should have heard it.
Like I said before, I think this has the potential to be a great story. The writing is good, the renders, for the most part, are great (a few were a bit too dark to see what was going on) and I like the girls, so far. I am looking forward to seeing where this one goes.
n ofcourse no netorare except mc is the one who steal other man girls called netori
