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Here's my unofficial android port of Unexpected v0.5 [Episode 2 Part 2]
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Good start!! Very good graphics Maybe it's too quick for a start. More teasing with a dressing session, peeking groping.
thank you dude
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Yes, I agree with you. This has been the case for me lately. Even if the Harem was not directly, I think everything would be fine. This game is very realistic. They should not kill this concept.Very good update good future tags as well, but I'm not a BIG FAN of harem game like the most of you guys in here don't get me wrong I do enjoy harem games once in a while just not all the time and to me it looks like harem will be optional as of now for me that is.
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I am X:
My first time playing this game and from the beginning the story is captivating. Which is a must for me. While following the code I think I found a bug. When MC drops of Noora at her home:
However this is set as:
eralier. So no matter what, we always get the dialogue for not getting a coffee at the airport.
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There are more of these in the code. Better replace all "yes" or "no"with real True or False. Easier to understand and you don't have to remember which you used .
My first time playing this game and from the beginning the story is captivating. Which is a must for me. While following the code I think I found a bug. When MC drops of Noora at her home:
Code:
if ep1_noora_cafe_choices == True
Code:
ep1_noora_cafe_choices = "yes"Edit:
There are more of these in the code. Better replace all "yes" or "no"with real True or False. Easier to understand and you don't have to remember which you used
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Hey JokerLeader, just wanted to check if you will be updating the Mod to Version v1.0.1. It looks like the Dev did some revisions to the script. Mainly better English translation and proofread. No worries if you're not, just wanted to check before I give this one another try. Thanks for all your hard work on your Mods, it is greatly appreciated.
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I'll probably will update the mod in a few, thanks for the heads up
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[VN] [Ren'Py] UNEXPECTED [Episode 1, Part 1-2, v0.3] [XPECTED] [UQ, MyRepack-YAC]
Original size: 1.36GB
Repack size: 333MB
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Finally got a chance to play all the way through this one. The script is definitely better than it was, so good job on that. However, it still could use some improvement to make things a bit clearer. Here are a few of the things that I found that could be improved for clarity.
Noora never mentioned that her father was in jail, just that he left. The MC was the first one to mention that he was in jail, so that didn't make much sense to me since the MC didn't know anything about her father.
When Noora is in the restroom at the cafe she mentions that she has cystitis. I had to look that word up, because I have never heard it before, and English is my native language. It would have been better to say bladder infection or urinary-tract-infection instead, so the player knows what the dev means. Those are the more common terms for that condition.
During all the conversations with Noora it is never mentioned that the MC has ever even met her mother, let alone that he knows her very well. So, when she just jumps into bed with him it was very confusing. It might be better to mention earlier in the story that they already know each other.
It appears from the character models used that the MC and his father are both white, so giving them Japanese names seems a bit strange. That one isn't really a big deal, just seems a little strange.
Those are the things that jumped out to me the most. Overall, this one is looking pretty good. The renders look really good and the story seems interesting. I'm looking forward to the next update.
Noora never mentioned that her father was in jail, just that he left. The MC was the first one to mention that he was in jail, so that didn't make much sense to me since the MC didn't know anything about her father.
When Noora is in the restroom at the cafe she mentions that she has cystitis. I had to look that word up, because I have never heard it before, and English is my native language. It would have been better to say bladder infection or urinary-tract-infection instead, so the player knows what the dev means. Those are the more common terms for that condition.
During all the conversations with Noora it is never mentioned that the MC has ever even met her mother, let alone that he knows her very well. So, when she just jumps into bed with him it was very confusing. It might be better to mention earlier in the story that they already know each other.
It appears from the character models used that the MC and his father are both white, so giving them Japanese names seems a bit strange. That one isn't really a big deal, just seems a little strange.
Those are the things that jumped out to me the most. Overall, this one is looking pretty good. The renders look really good and the story seems interesting. I'm looking forward to the next update.
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My single critique is this:
Find a native English speaking proof reader and work with them so they know exactly what you meant to write so they can rewrite the dialogue correctly.
You have an amazing talent with Renpy, and your art is superb.
But the broken English is so bad I had to turn off what I suspect is an amazing game within the first 5 minutes.
Find a native English speaking proof reader and work with them so they know exactly what you meant to write so they can rewrite the dialogue correctly.
You have an amazing talent with Renpy, and your art is superb.
But the broken English is so bad I had to turn off what I suspect is an amazing game within the first 5 minutes.
Hello RoadWulf. I just recently joined this writer's team and would like to help him better his script. Would you please give me some ideas about areas of the script that you feel could be improved so I may review them and see how I can improve the script in the future. We thank you for the comment and look forward to improving this game.