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100% agree again. Well put.
Edit: Actually 80% agree. I prefer being a male mc and don't mind playing a dick character depending on mood.
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Edit: Actually 80% agree. I prefer being a male mc and don't mind playing a dick character depending on mood.
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And you feel right that the ending? For you probably don't mind, but for me that is being used, but like Spfjolietjake, if they are ok to do that, ok for him (there is people that like the free-use). I download a game thinking that could be love between all them, not just the mc and molly, of course, for you is easy to just see your part of the history, yes, he is being used as human dildo, being more that a professor, there is no love between them, when chelsey defended him from mary, i have tought "hey, now they will show love" and the end they just go away, don't show anything, i'm wrong in in that? The first episode was good (although i don't like molly crying) the second was good until the end. So before you think that i'm being a cunt because all the girls are young, and he need to teach them, just 3 of them was virgins and some of them have more experience than the mc, i'm just saying that i like the kinks of the game, but for me, sex without love is nothing, if you are a fan of fucking for fucking, well, good for you, i search a game with a good love history, not just sex, for just sex i go to the pornhub.
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What can I say, I'm a shitty writer.Okay. I apologize for butting in and I don't mean to sound disrespectful but as a fellow author I can't in good conscience stay silent on this. While I agree with your general sentiments about where the story needed to go (and even if I didn't - my opinion in this case doesn't matter - it's your story) HOWEVER as a fellow writer and creator you should be perfectly aware that at least half of every story is the presentation. In engineering, in science - you can sell ideas just on being good. But in art - and what you're creating is definitely art - how you present your work - how you sell it to the audience is just as important as what you sell.
For example take Dune - one of the most beloved Sci-fi of all times. Yet the whole story is largely tied to (and driven by) the fact that the titular planet Dune is a desert where they can't get enough water. Which is a completely nonsensical premise when you have space-ships capable of traveling between planets. Just mine a few ice asteroids and you solved the issue! However the author sells it well enough that when you're reading it - you're too into it to realize how stupid the premise is.
In your case - there is a simple and obvious solution that would satisfy a sizable portion of your disgruntled fans yet mean little to no extra work for you. Let the girls stay in contact but move on with their lives. A few lines with no extra CGs would sell it quite well.
Let me give you a short example:
"After the girls graduated they moved on with their life. Some went on to continue with their studies on different Universities around the country and some even went to study abroad. As bitter-sweet as it was for all of us to part ways we knew from the start that it was going to be pretty much inevitable and both me and Molly agreed that we wouldn't want to destroy the girl's futures to satisfy our needs. We stayed in touch with them of course. The joy of modern world meant that even while away we could send each other messages and even occasionally call each other over Skype/Zoom. We even had some of them visit for a weekend. But as the summer vacations came to a close and the girls started seriously preparing for their first year at Uni our contact became less and less frequent. In the end it just mostly fizzled out. [Put a girl's name here] promised to come visit on [choose a holiday] and we would be happy to see her but there was much to do in the meantime..."
Afterwards you can have the girls appear once in a while as a welcomed and unexpected cameo or simply mention it off-screen. "[Put a girl's name here] visited us over the weekend and it was sweet to see her but I couldn't stop thinking about [new hot girl MC is boning]"
My personal choice would be: include some of the more dominant girls - like Kendal - as a cameo and have her play with one of the new girls letting the MC cuck them both while the wife watches. Kendal can mention how it was fun but she's off and to call her when we want to do it again.
In the end - little to no extra work needed - except writing a few lines of text and maybe creating one or two CGs if you include the girls as cameos - yet it would seem much more believable. People rarely go full cold turkey on relationships however it's very common for long-distance relationships to fizzle out - once the people start living their "new normal" that doesn't include you. This way people would be sad that the story moved on but there would be way less people getting actively pissed at you for "totally destroying their heart, ruining the story, hurting their dog's heart and being a big dumb meanie!"
Just my two cents as a fellow writer
EDIT: One good example of something similar is this series of stories (warning you may get addicted)You must be registered to see the links
Steve the author/MC mentions every now and then (in-character) that he and his wife were attending swingers parties/having sex with other couples but since it's not the focus of the story - he won't get in the details. He does that every few chapters so the readers keep it in mind and only rarely does it actually matter to the plot but it helps to expand the character and gives him depth and makes him feel more real.
Really, I want to see better writers take this kink and run with it. I simply wanted to expose this to other authors. Since NTR with a female cuck(reverse NTR) seems to have never even occurred as a possibility to most people, I created WYIM as a sort of demo. Eventually, I'd like to see a lot more reverse NTR games.
I kinda figured the relationship was pretty clear. It isn't just the MC that doesn't love the girls, the return is also true. They admire and respect him and are thankful for giving them the chance to come to terms with themselves and not feel ashamed of their kink, but they don't love him. Them saying "I'd like a husband like him" doesn't necessary mean they want it to be him.
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And the admiration of chelsey is just that admiration? Because for me, she was literally defending him from mary, when mary was talking like he was a horny teenager.
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You telling me that if someone insulted your friends you wouldn't defend them? Wow... you'd make a pretty shitty friend. I feel bad for anyone unfortunate enough to trust you.
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I'm not fucking my friends, also i'm don't act like i'm in love with them while defending. Also i'm a man of few friends, i don't trust everyone.
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Nah man i'm ok, and the few i have i see like my family, no just a quick fuck, altough i like some incest games
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all i can ask is.... how have i NOT found this series until today?!?!?
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Yes, like I stated in the description, they are sequels. That being said, why would you need to save from a previous game, it's a kinetic novel, the route doesn't change based on what you did in previous games.
Vitalsigns Really good update. You've done a lot to assuage some concerns I had about the older girls leaving for the new season. I appreciate that they still pop up in flashbacks and help create a legend for Logan making it easier for him to find new girls in this season. I would still like it if they would actually pop in every once in a while. Maybe a situation where they show up at Logan's house and send Molly away so they can "catch up" with Logan? Either way, this game is progressing in a really nice way and I'm excited to see what you write next. I'm especially excited to see how into BDSM Kayla is since it seems she's a bit more into it than Karen was and that's saying something. Godspeed and good work.
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i don't know man .. some games allow this and some don't .. it was worth a shot .. i'm not upset or anything .. hell i love this game
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Yeah, they meet up and before having sex they don their "roles" and he pretends to be the rapist and she pretends to be a girl getting raped. They have a safe word so that she is free to get into the act and put up a pretend struggle without fear of him ever ignoring an actual cry to stop.
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Oookayyy... well, i mean, it's not the strangest fetish I've ever heard of.
And some would probably find it questionable and disgusting, but hey, as long as it is fun for all participants and no one is harmed by it, let them be happy
Edit: I was just thinking, the fetish sounds to me like the desire to be dominated or am I mistaken?